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I.
Introduction (Paragraph 1)
A. Hook
If there is a correct answer to a certain problem, do you allow violence
as mean to persuade to other party?
What if that the Ronal Reagan hit Mikhail Segeyvich Gorbachyov on the
head, claiming that his was right? Could the cold war over earlier, not
waiting the collapse of Soviet Union? No one would agree with this idea.
U.S. President Reagan the representative of capitalism federal
couldnt concur with the thought of Gorbachyov, who is the chief of the
opposite party.
B. Connecting Information
Could violence play a role as a reasonable way to persuade others? If
not, why people allow parents to do physical punishment toward their
kids?
C. Thesis statement
Physical punishment cant refer to a discipline method for children. Child
abuser must try to justify their criminal act using the concept of it. In
addition, the existence of concrete alternatives for children can be the
grounds to oppose the physical punishment.
II. Body
A. Paragraph 2 (first reason) topic sentence:
We should pay attention to the negative side that the physical
punishment itself connotes.
1. The traditional Korean families value the hierarchy.
a. Numerous behavior patterns were injected to children as
proprieties, disallowing any exception.
2. If we do not set clear criteria, the harsh mistreatment can be naturally
committed under the name of discipline.
a. Kim did a various research including the attitude of family violence
toward their children.
b. He also researched how many parents did the real punishment to
their children.
3. Negative experiences of childhood could leave a trauma across the
childs life.
a. The YTN news
The 12-year-old girl who has escaped from the house of abuse
shows poor learning ability, and has eating disorders as the
aftereffect of ill-treatment.
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