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Lauren McGuinn
Ms. Gardner
English 10H/6
30 January 2017
Who can make it across the monkey bars the fastest? my best friend Kara would say
every lunch on the Sonoma Mountain Elementary School playground. After the lunch breaks of
swinging on the monkey bars with Kara, racing each other back and forth, calluses formed on my
delicate, slim hands. My calluses released splotches of blood over time. That day in class as Ms.
Vollert taught us our addition and subtraction tables. I held my hands up to my bulging, deep
blue ocean eyes, fascinated with my callused skin, touching and picking at it, smelling the metal
that was imprinted on my skin from the monkey bars. I never failed to not notice the healing of
my calluses, my skin cleansing itself with fresh skin, piecing itself back together and leaving
As a first grader at time, my hands already experienced the wonders of playing with my
parents car keys as a baby, picking apart pieces of food in a high chair, holding a pencil for the
first time, gripping the chains on the swings, the motions of going up and down a piece of paper
with a Crayola crayon while drawing stick figures and rainbows. Over the summer at the Boys &
Girls Club going into fourth grade, I successfully executed my first volleyball serve. Throwing
the ball up in the air from the base of my tan hands, perfectly connecting with the middle of my
palm. With extreme force I swung and managed to get the ball over what seemed like a towering,
monstrous net. My hands were a light red with a pale pink tint, and were dry from the dust and
dirt on the floor that managed to hug the surface of ball. I held up my right hand to my ocean
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blue eyes and knew volleyball was all I wanted. Similar to a fortune teller, I read my hands to see
the future dreams, and I look at them with reminiscence of the past holding my childhood
calluses, successes, scars, and discoveries. Hands are stories worth telling. In one of the greatest
Shakespearean plays, Macbeth, Macbeth tries to wash his evil past of killing king Duncan from
his hands with water. He continues to live with guilt every time he glances at his hands. The past
can not be washed from the hands, they shape who you are, and tell you where youll be and who
youll be. Why else do police yell, hands up! or let me see your hands! towards suspects?
Why else do we put our hands up while dancing to our favorite song in our bedroom or at a
school dance?
Age ten. I got my first pair of rollerblades for my birthday. While skating down the
smooth sidewalks of my quiet neighborhood, I hit a sprinkler pipe on the edge of the grass. With
instincts, I fell backward, hands behind, scraping the warm September sidewalk. Peeled skin
oozed with a blanket of blood over it. My mother and Nana would always comment on how
beautiful my hands looked, they still do to this day, but at the time as a ten year old, I thought I
had ruined them. I sprinted into the kitchen where my mother was. Lets run some water under
them, she says while petting my scraped hands, look at those beautiful hands of yours, she
mentions in awe. Obviously the skin on my hands healed, I still have two miniature scars from it.
I accept them and appreciate them, knowing that I can carry my past with me everyday with my
hands. According to Desert Hand Therapy, Fingerprints are a completely unique DNA imprint
that is different in every single human being. No two human beings in the world have similar
fingerprints. The past and future told by my hands build my own identity, an identity that is only
Around years eleven and twelve, I deeply struggled with my appearance and accepting
natural beauty. Self confidence was out of my grasp. In my youthful mind, I continually
compared myself to others, constantly looking down on myself thinking, Im not as pretty as her;
however, I never doubted the beauty I saw in my hands. The carved lines that run throughout the
hand, my long, dainty, skinny fingers, scars, calluses. Self love can be found but is never lost. I
found my own beauty in my hands, and continued to make my way through my body, accepting
each bit and piece of myself with confidence. My past, future, dreams, and self love are held
My mother has a book on the coffee table in our living room named Michelangelo. The
thick, luxurious book is consumed with Michelangelos greatest works and articles on his pieces
of art and their history. I oftenly found myself going through it while watching Zoey 101 on Teen
Nick. I studied the details of his richly detailed piece of work The Creation of Adam. It captures
Adam and God with their muscular, broad hands barely touching. The painting spoke to me
through their hands, opened up the reasons and meanings behind our hands, and the beauty and
humanity they obtain. From being a toddler, grasping my mothers finger with my small, dainty
hands, to a sixteen year old now, the act of holding hands with my loved ones resembles trust and
vulnerability. Their pasts, dreams and identities are visible in the palms of my own hands as I
Kara moved away to Georgia in third grade. Although we distantly kept in touch, I knew
when she looked at her callused hands from the monkey bars at her new school she thought of
our friendship, while I knew when I looked at mine it reminded me of the same. Growing in and
out of insecurities, my hands are the only thing I have accepted of myself. My hands prove to me
I am destined for greatness in the future through the symmetrical lines that make the hand. Scars
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and calluses hold my early years while allowing me to take the risks I did to which got me here,
they resemble my natural beauty. My hands made me the person I am today. Mirroring the
constellations and stars at night, the lines on my hands trace images of my past, between the
calluses, scars, marks holding them in place, tied with acceptance of self love and sightings of