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Scripting Worksheet Name:__________________________

PANEL DESCRIPTION : PANEL DESCRIPTION :

Engineer Stal is in office, sitting at the Close-up of the phone. It rings, bounc-
table. On a table full of paper mess. Waste- ing off the table.
basket full of paper. On the table monitor,
keyboard, phone, bitten sandwich. On the wall
of abstract mechanical drawings as standard. He
is siting on a chair, lounging, drinking coffee, his
little finger sticking out. Swaying in his chair.

SFX : scratch (to tear or mark a surface with SFX : bringg (sound of ringing telephone)
something sharp or jagged)
DIALOGUE : Stal: I neet to make some eye DIALOGUE :
gymnastic and take walk to production...

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He tumbles in his chair with fright.
He poured the coffee. He answers the
phone ring.
Stal is in the house of the client. Bath-
room. He holds rolls with drawings.
Woman standing next to him and points at
the shower. Woman is chunky, stylish and
richly dressed in a hat with a small bag and
the small dog.

SFX : SFX :

DIALOGUE : Stal: Oh, not she again DIALOGUE : Stal: Hm, let me see
Stal: Hallo! On my way
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2 weeks later... Bathroom. Drawings Woman landed. The floor warp. Little
are open. Waters tube looks differently. dog in a shock
Woman looks to him at delightedly and
gives a skip for joy.

SFX : SFX : Bash! (to strike heavily)

DIALOGUE : Stal: So, there you go! DIALOGUE :

Stal: I think today you can take a shower
Woman: It is lovely!

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Tons of water pouring down from the Stal desided to make a new drawing.
ceiling. Water jet from the outlet. Sod- We can see: Tube, hole in the tube,
den hat, sad dog. angle of inclination, by red arrows indicated
jets of water.

SFX : dibble dibble dopp dopp (sound of SFX :

rain) flash (sudden rush of water)
DIALOGUE : Waman: Hm. R-r-r-r-r-r-r
DIALOGUE : Stal: Need to remove the ceiling,
plug up a hole in the tube...
Stal: need to rebuild the house around
that...
Stal: thats all!
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PANEL DESCRIPTION : PANEL DESCRIPTION :

Village. A young woman (wife of engi- Stal came to the village. He installed
neer) is sitting on the chair at the garden a desk for engineering drawing. Stal
and speaking by phone. draws a new roof.

SFX : SFX :

DIALOGUE : Wife: Come here, darling. Roof DIALOGUE : Stal: So, so...
sprung a leak

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Stal changes clothes into workwear. He Stal opened the switchboard (the
looks on the house. Some neighbors are image on the electric board with a skull
on the foreground, they came to look the and crossbones. The inscription do not
process of work through the fence. go, will kill). He took an electric shock.

SFX : SFX : zchunk (sound of a defibrillator)

DIALOGUE : Stal: Tak, tak DIALOGUE :

Neighbor 1: What is here?
Neighbor 2: We are looking, how they
build houses in the city
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PANEL DESCRIPTION : PANEL DESCRIPTION :

Stal climbs on the ladder, which tends Concrete mixer. Everything in the
to fall. Neighbours become double the concrete. Devastation. Broken stairs.
number. Neighbours are sitting on the fence, some
brought food and drinks.

SFX : Bang! (sharp noise or hit) SFX : flash (sudden rush of water)

DIALOGUE : Stal: A-a-a-a-a DIALOGUE :

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Stal cuts a board with a saw. neigh- Half-dismantled house. Stal is all cov-
bours broke fence, for they cannot ered in soot, in bandages and patches,
observe easily. clothes are torn.

SFX : wher, wher, wher (Sound of a chainsaw SFX :

being started)
DIALOGUE : Neighbour 1: Artist! DIALOGUE : Stal : In China everything is
Neighbour 2: Bravo made from communists droppings
Stal : Because of this, I spend 3 fingers for
every nail hammered
Neighbours : Of course