Review Rough Draft

by Beck Lauren

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Cont ract ions No Personal words- No I, you, we, us, "one", et c

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Awk.

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Cit at ion f ormat
Review Rough Draft
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

100
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/100

Comment 1
need more creative title

QM Contractions
No Contractions

QM Contractions
No Contractions

QM No Personal words- No I, you, we, us, "one", etc

Comment 2
nice

QM Spacing
Spacing

QM Contractions
No Contractions

QM No Personal words- No I, you, we, us, "one", etc

Comment 3
use last name
 use last name

Comment 4
viewer

QM No Personal words- No I, you, we, us, "one", etc

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QM Possessive
Possessive

Comment 5
punctuation belongs af ter the citation

QM Awk.
Awkward:
T he expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting.

QM Contractions
No Contractions

Comment 6
period belongs af ter citation

QM Awk.
Awkward:
T he expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting.

Comment 7
don't end a paragraph with inf ormation that needs to be cited. will always need analysis/link

QM Coll.
Inappropriate use of slang, clichd phrases, or idiomatic expressions:
T he use of slang, clichd phrases and idiomatic expressions can conf use your readers and
destroy the f ormal tone of your writing.

QM Contractions
No Contractions

Comment 8
 viewer or audience

QM Spacing
Spacing

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Comment 9
why is this in italics?

Comment 10
need more

QM Sp.
Spelling error

Comment 11
need more in conclusion

Comment 12
why is this in italics?

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Comment 13
please look at f ormatting f or Works Cited page and citation f ormatting; these resources can be
f ound both in your text and in the MLA Resources tab in the Blackboard menu

QM Citation f ormat