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Priya Patel
Adam Padgett
ENGL 102
02/28/2017
Inquiry: Is the definition of a racist we perceive to be today, just a way of covering up the racism
that is actually going on in present day Comment [PA1]: Dont forget your question mark here.
This question seems a bit leading. Im not really sure what
definition of racism you are working with. There is an
Proposed Thesis: I argue that racism is not as prevalent in todays society as it used to be in the assumption that you and your reader are on the same page
on this definition.
pre 1960s, yet we dont realize that there are subtle racial biases, in the 21st century, that are held
in all minds subconsciously without realizing. Comment [PA2]: I like this strong and clear thesis.
Antoinette. "Exposing Bias: Race and Racism in America." Harvard Extension School. Harvard
University, 13 Feb. 2017. Web. 27 Feb. 2017. Comment [PA3]: Im not sure what this citation is telling
me. Is this a publication? What is the name of the
publication? When was it published? We need to authors
This Harvard article is an interview between two professors who teach race in American at the full name.
University. They are talking about how there is a bias towards certain races that everyone holds
in our society and that is what is causing oppression of races. It also talks about how in the past,
in America, your social status was based on your race. This can linger to future generations and
cause others to believe so without have a valid reason of why? Often biased actions are Comment [PA4]: Revisit this sentence.
individualistic. This article is credible because it is from Harvard University and the questions Comment [PA5]: Can you explain what this means?
are answered form well accredited professors who are professors at the university. This source
is suitable for my paper. It helps show how racism and race is viewed in todays society and that
bias is what leads to it. Comment [PA6]: I need you to show this to me and not
simply telling me. In other words, attempt to analyze and
engage the source. Use specific quotes to show areas of
disagreement or agreement. Discuss how this specifically
relates to your topic and your thesis.
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Blake, John. "The new threat: 'Racism without racists'" CNN. Cable News Network, 27 Nov.
Blake talks about how there is racial bias happening in America currently. This was explained
through the psychological experiment of two pictures. One picture of a white man with a knife
attacking an unarmed white man and the second being the white man with a knife attacking an
unarmed black man. In the first picture, when asked, many people got the answer correct when
asked who was holding the knife. In the second picture however, both black and white who
answered, said that the black man was holding the knife. This is showing how no matter what Comment [PA7]: Is it showing no matter what or is it a
demonstration of general cultural bias? Be careful about
using language like no matter what because there will be
race we are we have bias within and out of our race. This experiment shows that there is racial (invariably) deviations. Also, this experiment probably isnt
comprehensive enough to make absolute claims, but it does
bias and that humans are always biased and put certain people in groups based on race. They make a persuasive illustration (this would be a limit of
popular commercial sources). Also, did CNN conduct the
experiment, or are they referencing a peer-reviewed
however do not consider it racism until something great or profound is done to a certain race. academic experiment?
This source is credible even though it is news because the article was found from a google
scholars search. The article is from 2014 and is relatively new. The article could be biased in
experiment, again we dont know if those people didnt identify with being racist in the
beginning of the experiment. This source would defiantly be suitable for my topic because it is
talking about how racism is subtler now and isnt really seen as racism.
Brown, Geraldine. "The Millennials (Generation Y): Segregation, Integration and Racism."
The central claim of this source is that racism has changed as the generations have. In
generation Y, also known as the millennials, racism has become more varied among many racial
groups rather than a few main groups we were used to in the past (Brown 7). Brown explains
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how when asked about racism, the first thing to pop up in our minds is the history of learning
about one race dominating another minor race (Brown 7). However, the case with racism has
become vaster in this generation. He states that even if one is not racist towards another race,
they are also racist within their own. Certain cultures very importance based on the shade of
their skin within their race (Brown 7). The source itself seems credible due to it being a peer
reviewed source. She is the current editor of the ABNF journal, a RN, and has a PhD in Nursing.
This article is biased in the sense that it is targeting the millennials yet that varies from 1980s
to the early 2000s, so it kind of implies that there was no racism within a race before then. This Comment [PA8]: This is interesting, but im not sure it
necessarily implies this. But you are correct in that the
source kind of doesnt really address this concern (I assume,
source is suitable for my project because it goes over a key topic, which is what is racism and since I havent read it). This is valuable to point out that
there tends to be less racism toward ones own race, not
sure you can so no racism.
that has changed over the generations.
Kristof, Nicholas. "Is Everyone a Little Bit Racist?" The New York Times. The New York
In this article Nicholas Kristof is talking about how there is stereotyping within each race. For
African Americans you think that young males are related to criminal activity. However, there is
also those who think that Americans are white. Not all Americans are white. The main point in
this article is that they are people who believe in equality yet they have a biased view on the
world, and that is what is cause racism to happen. There is an experiment that is described as Comment [PA9]: Make sure to proof read a little closer
here.
well. A student from the University of Colorado used a online shooter game to test if there was Comment [PA10]: Since this is an English class (as opposed
to a science class) I want you to use a more active voice.
This is quite passive.
bias between white and black. The students were the police officers who were shown a series
of black and white males with some holding guns and some holding innocent objects. In the
result more blacks were shot in the video game, especially with undergraduate students
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playing. This source is somewhat credible, it is a popular article rather than peer reviewed, and
was written in 2014 so relatively new. The author is a human rights & women rights activist, as
well as interested in health and global affairs. The article could be biased in that we dont know
everyone who was used in the experiment. That information might vary the results. Was it
student who believed they werent racist going in? This source is suitable because it shows how
we subconsciously stereotype certain races. When doing so you may not realize why but your
mind automatically puts certain groups of people in certain categories leading to racism.
Northup, Temple. "Is Everyone a Little Bit Racist? Exploring Cultivation Using Implicit and
Explicit Measures." Southwestern Mass Communication Journal, vol. 26, no. 1, Sept.
This source is more focused on the journalism side of the racism. The article talks about how
there is a unbalanced view of each race in media in todays news. One example is of how
African Americans are seen more as criminals than other races due to racial stereotyping.
Especially in the eye of the media (Northup 38). Due to this being the media it easily allows
others to be influenced causing the general population to associated criminals with a certain
race over others. This article is credible since it is a peer reviewed source and the author,
Temple Northup, has good knowledge of mass communications. This article could be somewhat
biased because the article only talks about media being racist when the title is Is Everyone A
Little Bit Racist. The title can be misleading in the way that others think its generalized but
instead there is just one topic. This source is somewhat suitable for my topic; I use the example
Mullainathan, Sendhil. "Racial Bias, Even When We Have Good Intentions." The New York
Times. The New York Times, 03 Jan. 2015. Web. 28 Feb. 2017.
The author in this article is writing about how there is subtle discrimination that is happening
more currently but we dont realize it. This doesnt mean you are consciously being racist but
rather subconsciously. We have snap judgements that come from associating certain races to a
category. This article is somewhat credible even though the article is from New York Times,
because the author is a Harvard professor. The bias in this article could be when the article says
that Many studies show yet there is no detail of the studies in which they show more
prejudice shoves toward a race. We dont know who was involved in these studies. This article
would be somewhat suitable for my topic that it explains how more racism occurs
subconsciously for those who are have nothing but well intentions.