How to write the essay for the New FCE exam?

Heres a sample topic that has been divided

into paragraphs and each of the sections explained. Let us know whether you have any questions
by submitting a comment below.
Part 1
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 140- 190 words in an appropriate style on the
separate answer sheet.

You have recently had a class project on animal welfare and vegetarianism. Now your teacher has
asked you to write a composition, giving your opinions on the following statement:

Some people believe that humans should not eat meat. Do you agree?
Notes
Write about:
meat as a main ingredient of our diet
vegetarians
(your own idea)

Sample answer:
Most people think, myself included, that since animals eat other animals, it
is natural for humans to eat meat. However, some disagree, and a growing
number of people are choosing to become vegetarians. So what rationalism
stays behind these two beliefs.
You start with Paragraph 1- Introduction
Here you include:
A general statement/rhetorical question (its already given on the topic, your task is to
paraphrase it- use different words or grammar structures). In the sample answer weve used
most instead of some, believe was changed to think etc.
Qualify the argument
Explain further and maybe try to show several sides of the issue, consider it from different angles,
thinking, This part is right if This is true, except when This might work if The reason this
happens is because The underlying issues are

First of all I would like to say that humans have always hunted and eaten
animals. Maybe it is our natural instinct inherited by ancestors that forces
us to seek this type of food, however, it is undeniable, that meat is rich in
vitamins and protein, which help to build muscles and bones.
Paragraph 2:
Introduction = topic sentence which states the general idea discussed in this paragraph

Advantage 1 Reason Advantage 1 - Specific example 1

Your Advantage 1- is the point mentioned in the task. In our sample answer includes the point
about meat being the main source of energy

Make sure you use the following phrases when writing paragraph 2:

Introducing the topic

First of all I would like to say that
The first point I would like to make is
I would like to begin by
Many people think that
Some people say/claim
Why do some people believe ?
However, if that is the case, then why ?
Advantages
In the first place
The main advantage is that you are free to
There is no one else to
Then there is
Whats more
Another advantage is that

Another point worth mentioning is the fact it is difficult to have a balanced

diet without this crucial ingredient. In order to avoid some health problems
such as lack of energy or splitting nails we should make lean meat a part of
our meal.
Paragraph 3:
Introduction = topic sentence which states the general idea discussed in this paragraph

Advantage 2 Reason Advantage 2 - Specific example 2

Your Advantage 2- is actually the point that hasnt been given in the task. However, its the last
point- your own idea. and because I believe that meat is good for you, I included this point just
after the 2nd paragraph- which is also in favour of eating meat.

Make sure you use the following phrases when writing paragraph 3:

Introducing the topic

Second of all I would like to say that
The next point I would like to make is
I would like to add
Many people think that
Some people say/claim
Why do some people believe ?
However, if that is the case, then why ?
Advantages
In the second place
The other advantage is that you are free to
There is no one else to
Then there is
Whats more
Another advantage is that

On the other hand, many vegetarians believe that eating meat is not only
unnecessary but also unhealthy. We can easily grow plants that give us all
we need in our diet, moreover there are numerous shops which provide
supplements that substitute meat.
Paragraph 4:
Introduction -use topic sentence

Disadvantage 1 Reason Disadvantage 1 - Specific example 1

Make sure you include the other point mentioned in the topic and add your own idea + the
following phrases when writing paragraph 3:

Disadvantages
On the other hand
Secondly,
Another disadvantage is
Last but not least, . .

Linking words- essential practice when writing an essay

In my view, there are strong health reasons for not eating meat. However, if
we become vegetarians for moral reasons, I think we should also not wear
fur or leather.
Paragraph 5- Conclusion
Summarise your view using different words from the introduction. You might want to add some
further comment.

Summarising phrases you have to use:

In conclusion (I believe that)
To sum up, there are arguments
However, in my view .

Now, its your turn. Heres the topic:

You recently had a class discussion about television. Now your teacher has asked you to write a
composition.

Young children watch too much television. Do you agree?

You must answer this question. Write your answer in 140- 190 words in an appropriate style on the
separate answer sheet.

Notes
Write about:
busy parents
sports
(your own idea)

Once you have written the essay do check if you have the following:
1. I have answered the question.

2. The sentences and organisation are clear and logical.

3. Arguments are followed by reasons and examples.

4. Both sides of the argument are given equal treatment.

5. It is clear what I think by the end.

6. The style is consistent and neutral.

7. I have checked: length, grammar, spelling, punctuation and linking expressions.

Now, its your turn. Heres another topic:

You recently had a class discussion about women rights . Now your teacher has asked you to write
a composition.
Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government
encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for
women?
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 140- 190 words in an appropriate style on the
separate answer sheet.

Notes
Write about:
education
equal rights
(your own idea)