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Assignment Score Teacher Comments Improvement Strategies

Juvenile Justice 31/33 (93.94%) - Write up more


Socratic Seminar elaborate notes
Consider
counterarguments

Juvenile Justice 36/50 (72%) Turn it in on Create a thesis


Essay time and receive
Lack of a clear feedback on it first
thesis- whats Use more quotes
the purpose? Dont write the
Need more entire essay at
textual evidence once- work on it a
(quotes, etc.) little at a time

Gender, Culture, 44/50 (88%) - Appeal to logos


Identity Essay and ethos in
addition to pathos
Understand the
purpose of your
piece of writing
before writing it

1984 Socratic 21/25 (84%) - Continue to be


Seminar respectful of other
students and any
contradicting
opinions
Consider more
counterarguments

1984 Essay 41/50 (82%) - ALWAYS make


an outline FIRST
Use more textual
evidence and
more direct
connections to
those pieces of
evidence

Final Research - - Always improve


Project upon a rough draft
Consider your
audiences
knowledge and
background