Escolar Documentos
Profissional Documentos
Cultura Documentos
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weak ending ______________________
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lack of story development ______________________
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lack of character development
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lack of world development ______________________
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too much information ______________________
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missing or insufficient information ______________________
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pacing problems - too slow ______________________
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pacing problems - too fast
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illogical / unconvincing behaviour ______________________
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lack of character motivation ______________________
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confusing description of action ______________________
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confusing description of thoughts / emotions ______________________
confusing description of setting ______________________
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timeline errors / anachronisms ______________________
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world / setting errors ______________________
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inconsistencies in character appearance ______________________
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unresolved plot threads
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inconsistencies in capitalisation
WORDS / PHRASES THAT I
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missing sections
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