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the students can express their ideas to dictionary to find the suitable words
others in the written forms. they need. As a result, most of the
Teaching writing is very time of learning writing in the
important, because through writing, classroom would be spent to find the
students are hopped to be able to put vocabulary items needed.
their ideas into a piece of writing. Then, the students were poor in
According to Elite Olshtain in Celce grammatical use in sentences. Writing
(2001), writing as a communicative is not only dealing with vocabularies,
activity needs to be encouraged and selecting appropriate words, finding
nurtured during the language learner's ideas to write and developing those
course of study. This opinion is ideas, but also dealing with
strengthened by Raimes who gave the grammatical patterns of sentences
reasons for teaching writing: "We into paragraphs and paragraphs into
frequently have to communicate with text. The students should know how
each other in writing" and "Writing to write in appropriate grammatical
reinforces grammatical structures, sentences such as using simple
idioms, and vocabulary". So, it is present forms, past forms, passive
obvious that writing is an essential voice, etc.
language reinforcing skill and a However, writing sentences
crucial ability because it becomes a grammatically is still hard for most of
means of learning, discovering, the students. In the researchers class,
developing, and refining language from 31 students of class XII IPA.2,
ability. Through writing, the students the result of their writing is very poor,
use the language, trying to express especially in the use of appropriate
their ideas grammar. Mostly or 76 % of them or
There were a lot of causes of about 28 students did the writing by
why writing, especially narrative text, directly translating Indonesian into
of the students in SMAN 2 English and ignored the grammatical
Bukittinggi is low. First, the students correctness. The students could not
had a very limited vocabulary reach MAC for writing that is 75.
mastery of English. Before entering The students did learn grammar,
grade XII, there is a set of tests that but they had not been accustomed to
should be passed by the students. The using the grammar in writing, for
writer in her preliminary study on example, if they were asked to make
many students of class XII.IPA 2 in one simple sentence, they might be
SMAN 2 Bukittinggi found that able to do that. However, the problem
writing of narrative also difficult. It appeared if they were asked to
is shown by their writing test result. arrange the words in a composition,
many of them did not pass the which were not only writing simple
Minimal Achievement Criteria ( sentences but also writing the
MAC ), from 31 students, only about interconnected sentences in a
9 students (20%) could be said to composition. Thats why the MAC for
have sufficient vocabularies to write a the writing skill could not be
paragraph. The rest had poor satisfactorily reached.
vocabulary entries of English. As the There are some approaches in
consequence, even for making a very teaching writing; one of them is genre
simple paragraph, the students spent based approach. The use of genre
much time looking up at the approach in solving the problem in
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Complication (the conflict the and the analysis of the data in the
participants have), Resolution ( how second cycle, some plans could be
the participants solve the conflict) and made as reflection of the activities.
re-orientation (the part where the With reference to the observation
reader can get the moral value of the done by the collaborator and the
story). For these good students, they analysis of the data in the second
could present the introduction and cycle, some plans were made as the
background of the story clearly and reflection of the activities in order to
gave some evaluation of why the make some changes or improvements
conflict occure to support the ideas in of the students writing skill of
Complication. For the ending, they narrative in the third cycle.
wrote the sentences those could lead Cycle 3
the reader to the moral value. In The result of the pair task in
choosing the words, they had used the cycle 3 was also described in the
appropriate words and there were diagram. It was shown how far the
variation in building up the achievement of the students in every
compositions. The composition had indicators of writing. The rates of the
been presented in clearly and using a achievement in diagram were
good structure. different. The highest mean score was
To compare the progress of on Content and for the lowest mean
students Mean Score of writing test score was on grammar.
on these cycles can be seen on the
diagram below.
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4,00
3,87
3,81
3,77
3,74
3,71
3,65
3,65
3,58
3,58
3,55
3,52
3,52
3,42
Individual
3,00
2,97
10
2,84
2,65
4 2,9
2,9
Work II
5
2
0 Individual
Work III
0 Mean
Preliminary Post Test I Post Test II Post Test III
Content Convention Vocabulary
From the table and figure Based on the table and the
above, it could be said that there were figure above, it was found that in the
some progressions to the students' first cycle, the score of students'
writing if it was compared from the writing test was 16.02 it increased
preliminary study result, post-test 1.67 point if it was compared with
result in cycle 1, cycle 2 and cycle 3. Preliminary Study score (14.35). In
The improvement of each second cycle, the mean score of
indicator of students' writing on pair students' writing test was 18.10 it
task 1, pair task 2, and pair task 3 in increased 1.90 point if it was
cycle I, cycle II and cycle III was also compared with writing test (16.02) in
described in the diagram. It was cycle 1. In the third cycle, the mean
shown how good the achievement of score was 19.84. It increased 1.74
the students in every indicator of point, if it was compared with the
writing. The rates of the achievement second cycle (18.10).
in diagram were different. It can be For Individual Work, the mean
summed up that the students' writing score of the students in cycle in cycle
mean scores in pair task increased in 1 was 19.81. It increased 3.46 point it
every cycle. compared with the mean score in the
The improvement of mean cycle 1 (16.35), and the mean score
scores of Individual Work in cycle I, for of the students in cycle 3 was
cycle II and cycle III was also 20.45. It increased 0.64 point if it was
described in the diagram. It was compared with the mean score in
shown how far the achievement of the cycle 2 (19.81).
students and the rate of the mean In conclusion, based on the
scores in diagram were different. It observation done by the researcher
can be summed up that the students' and collaborator in three cycles, it can
writing scores in Individual Works be concluded that Video Showing can
increased in every cycle. improve students' writing skill. It can
Comparison of Students Mean be seen from many improvements
Score Of Individual Works that the students got during the
research. Most of the students has got
good mark and pass the MAC of
Writing Narrative text.
The data showed that there was
also an improvement to the mean
score of students' achievement from
writing test in each cycle. It can be
seen from the table and figure below:
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was also found that the students lesson in life such as there is a will,
enjoyed writing in pair because they there is a way, or cooperation or work
shared their strength and covered the together made the job easier, and so
weakness in writing. on.
Then peer editing. After the Three, the factor that
students finish their writing in pairs, influenced the improvement of the
they shared it to other pairs to be students writing by using picture
edited or revised. At first, most of the sequence was the classroom
students were reluctant to do this management. The teachers approach
activity since they did not know how was the factor which could improve
to revise the writing. Then the the students writing of narrative text.
researcher guided them to revise by The teacher could manage the noise
giving the explanation of what were and the situation well. Moreover, the
should be corrected. The researcher way the researcher controlled the
said that the students could revise the classroom affected to the result of the
writing from the plot of the story, the students writing especially in term of
features of narrative text, from the vocabulary, language use, and
language use, the grammar, or the mechanism. The teacher noted down
word spelling. After they were any words about the pictures
accustomed to this activity, gradually produced by the students, the
they enjoyed it. It also increased their researcher guided the students to
knowledge of vocabularies, grammar, exchanging from Indonesian to
and mechanism of writing and the English, and the researcher guide the
developing of the story from the students in pairs and individually so
introduction, complication, and that the problems that faced by the
resolution. students during the lesson session
And last was producing final could be reduced gradually.
writing result. After they received And fourth, teacher personal
their papers which had been corrected approach also influenced the result
by other friends, they students learnt of the students learning. The teacher
the correction. They learnt their did not only help the students in the
mistakes such as about the grammar, teaching learning process, but also
the story, and so on. This activity she encouraged and motivated the
gave feedback to the students that the students who showed less interest in
essence of writing was write, and writing or find difficulties in writing.
revise, until the good writing was The teacher and the collaborator
produced. Even for famous authors, never blamed the students if they
their writing should be corrected made mistakes. Hence, she
before published. encouraged them that it is okay to
Two, the material used. make mistake because we can learn a
According to the students, the lot of things from that mistakes.
materials of the pictures used were
interested. In the interview they said Discussion
that mostly they liked the pictures With reference to the findings
because most of the pictures were of this research, it could be concluded
funny and easy to understand, and that video could improve the
moral value from each picture students writing skill of narrative
sequence made them aware of the text of class XII IPA.2 SMAN 2
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improve the students' writing skill had more active and alive. The
been successful in one of the classes classroom atmosphere was
of the twelveth grade at SMAN 2 more fun and enjoyable.
Bukittinggi. . It was shown by the
increasing of the marks and the Suggestions
averages from one cycle to other Having finished conducting the study,
cycles. The improvements can be the researcher's suggestions are as
shown at each indicator which is follow:
content, organization, vocabulary, 1. Dealing with the positive finding
grammar, and mechanics. of the research, it is suggested to
Based on the result of the the researcher as an English
research findings, some conclusions teacher to use Video in teaching
can be drawn: writing of Narrative text to
1. Video showing for Narrative text enhance students' writing skill.
better improves students' writing 2. It is also suggested for future
skill because of the improvement researcher to conduct further
of students' writing test Narrative research dealing with the use of
text through video in each cycle. Video in other language skills.
2. Based on the result of the research 3. The schools also have to provide
and supported by the instruments the classes with the equipments
of the research in the qualitative needed in teaching writing by
data, the improvement of the using Video
students writing skill on narrative
text by using video was influenced Note : This Article was written
and supported by four important from the writers thesis at Pasca
factors: Sarjana of State University of
a. The teaching material used Padang with advisors consisting of
while the acitivties were very Prof. Dr. Anas Yasin, M.Pd and Dr.
interesting and easy to be Desmawati Radjab, M.Pd.
understood by the students.
They liked most of the the References
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