Project Title: PROPOSED EMERGENCY RESPONSE CENTER FOR THE MUNICIPALITY

OF BALAYAN
Proponents: CASTILLO, Alyssa Marie C.
DE LEON, John Christian C.
ROSAS, John Leo L.

Date of Defense:
SUMMARY OF COMMENTS

COMMENTS PAGE NO. ACTION PAGE REMARKS

TAKEN NO.
Spacing on Table of Contents ii The spacing is
remain
Paragraphs are contradicting 2 Re-phrase the
paragraph
Demographics, wherein a natural 2 Provide data from
disaster caused people from balayan to the NDRRMC
evacuate
Be concise and direct to the point 5
Site examples of Potentials Hazards in 6-8 Provide data from
Balayan the NDRRMC
Balayan is not indicated on the map 8 The location of
(Fig. 4) Balayan has been
indicated
Minimize the use of google maps 11 Change some
google maps
Redraw the maps if possible. Labels 4,8,10,11 It has been re-
on figures draw in autocad
with legends
Use prescribed format for tables 12 Corrected all the
table formats
Every structure is rectangular 24 The structures
remained still
rectangular due to
design guidelines
for disaster
resilient structures
Excess spaces 19,21,25,26, Minimized the
27,28 excess spaces as
possible
Remove the definitions of variables 33 Variables has
been removed
No Structural Analysis required Two three-storey
concrete structures (3-storey is okay) structure is now
included on the
project
 Use A3 for Plans Appendices A3 paper were
used
Flow on the room for BFP Appendices Change the plan
for BFP building
according to
DPWH standards
No shower room for evacuation area Appendices Provide shower
and for PWD rooms for each
floor
Where is the water supply The water supply
will come from
Balayan water
district and it will
be stored on a
reservoir on the
site.

Engr. Nicasio V. Antonio III

Name of Panel
Project Title: PROPOSED EMERGENCY RESPONSE CENTER FOR THE MUNICIPALITY
OF BALAYAN
Proponents: CASTILLO, Alyssa Marie C.
DE LEON, John Christian C.
ROSAS, John Leo L.

Date of Defense:
SUMMARY OF COMMENTS

COMMENTS PAGE ACTION TAKEN PAGE REMARKS

NO. NO.
Rephrase or explain 1ST 1,8,10 Rephrase the
sentence
Remove the word moderate 3 Removed
Confusing sentences/thought 3 Rephrased the
sentences
Discuss/Elaborate more on the site 4 More discussions
location included
Please introduce and add discussion 4,7,11,25 The figures were
on every figure -31 introduced or
explained
Use the format given by the 5 Change the format
department
What signal no. in every Typhoon 8 Provide public storm
warning signal
Where are the other faults that being 8 The fault lines
mentioned indicated on the
figure
Revise the paragraphs. Check the 9 Revised the
grammar paragraphs
Not clearly stated the areas on Fig. 5. 10 Change the figure
Add more discussions and add discussions
Use NSCP 2015 in Design Standard 32-41 Used NSCP 2015
and Specification.
Give some examples of past record of Provide data from
evacuees NDRRMC
Paragraphs are contradicting Rephrase the
paragraphs
Redraw Figures 5, 6 and 7 if possible Change the figures

Engr. Rhea S. De Ocampo

Name of Panel
Project Title: PROPOSED EMERGENCY RESPONSE CENTER FOR THE MUNICIPALITY
OF BALAYAN
Proponents: CASTILLO, Alyssa Marie C.
DE LEON, John Christian C.
ROSAS, John Leo L.

Date of Defense:
SUMMARY OF COMMENTS

COMMENTS PAGE ACTION TAKEN PAGE REMARKS

NO. NO.
No Structural Analysis is needed for a Two 3-storey
1-storey Building. Make it higher structures included
Used Toilet instead of Comfort 29 Used the word
room toilet
Basis for the size of equipment room 29 Change the plans for
for BFP BFP following the
DPWH standards
Benchmark on the design of the 29 Provide data from
structures form NDRRMC
Target number of users 30 Capacity and target
number of users
included

Engr. Ernesto C. Magundayao

Name of Panel