Members of the group: Isaac Solís – Kelly Torres – Javier Mejía

Analysing An Essay Structure

A. INTRODUCTION
a. Topic: What is better?, studying alone or in group
b. Thesis Statement: study in group has many benefits
B. BODY
a. Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence: when you are studying in a group, you are benefiting the interaction
and the exchanges of ideas.
Supporting Idea: maybe in the group there an integrant with more knowledge about
topic of study
Details: someone from the group may have an example that allows the other
members to understand the topic that is being investigated
Supporting Idea: When you study you only have a single vision of the problem, but
when you study in a group you can have many betters focuses of the subject of study.
Detalis: each member can contribute ideas from their point of view and it could be
that two or more ideas add up for a more detailed approach to the subject of study,
this approach will facilitate the comprehension.
b. Paragraph 2
Topic sentence: study in groups benefits the capacity of adapt and teach.
Supporting Idea: when you study with your classmates, always someone try to
explain to everybody.
Details: the capacity for teach to others is a skill unique, the most of us don't have it;
in the work world can to explain the ideas to others is very important ,but the teachers
don't teach this to their students. For luck, study in groups help to devolope this
interesting function.
Supporting Idea: exist many methods study, and when we study with other we
adapted to method.
Details: we live in a changing world, the technology is a factor that increase ours
capacities; can adapt to changes and the new methods or ways to learn is very
 important for our surviving and the most important learn to whatever way make us
grow up in anything.
c. Paragraph 3
Topic- sentence: Study in groups is better, because is less stressing and help you to
reduce a prison for a important exam.
Supporting Idea: The time of the exam the level of stress increases in the students,
due to the great pressure they have to pass. The level of stress is lower in students
who study accompanied by those who study alone.
Details: Studying in a group helps you to organize better, to feel motivated and it is
much easier to ask for help with a question or problem. Stress is one of the most
common diseases of recent times, so it should not be take it easy, because it could
affect the nervous, digestive and immune systems.
Supporting Idea: The pressure that students present when studying for a major exam
can be harmful to health but this pressure decreases when studying in a group.
Details: Worrying a lot about something can bring various problems to human health,
such as migraine, stomach pain or skin irritations. Anxiety and worry are reduced
when you study in a group because you are with friends, they can make jokes or give
you the help you need. A few laughs and a less heavy environment will help you
study better.

C. CONCLUNDING PARAGRAPH
Finally we can say that studying in a group presents many more benefits than studying
alone. Because you can benefit from the knowledge of others, that is, give or receive
help in a problem. It also helps us to exchange different ideas and perspectives on a
topic. In addition, studying in a group not only has academic benefits, but also in the
area of health, since being with friends decreases stress and pressure for the exam.
Because of this it is advisable to study with a group of friends who know how to
concentrate and who have the same objective as yours, in order to learn and be ready
for the exam.