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used
2 Formatting Correctformattingasper MS thesis
guidelinesof LGU specially of pages
vii and ix
Ix,x,xi / I have correct
3 Table of
Correctspellingmistakes
contents
I have changed
changed it
Example:
Tables: Tablesofch2:
Table2.1,Table2.2
5 Numbering Tablesofch3:
of table and
Table3.1,Table3.2, Table3.3etc
figures
Figures:Figuresofch3:
Figure3.1
Figuresofch4:
Figure4.1,Figure4.2
6 Page xv / Arrangeabbreviationsin alphabetical have changed
Abbreviation order.
7 Page 4 / • Addsignificanceof banking sector i have added
Introduction specifically bankingsectorofPakistan.
• In problem identification, add
problems of banking sector of
Pakistan also. E.g percentageof
dissatisfied employeesinbanksof
Pakistan.
8 Page 6/ Afterpage6add definitionoftermsin write the
Chapter 1 chapter1
definition
• Research theory
Chapter 3
• Conceptualframework
• Independent and dependent variables
of study (in tabular form mention
independent, dependent and
mediating variables- no need to
explain what is dependent or
independent variable.
• Hypothesesdevelopment
• Methodology
Research design
Instrument development
Reliability
Validity
Pilot study
• Procedure
Sampling(youcan adjust
populationunder thisheading)
Datacollection
Dataanalysistechniques
Arrange chapter 3 as per this sequence
and add missing content.
• Replace‘hypothesized research
model’by ‘conceptualframework’.
• Change model as per given figure:
Page 21/
Model
changed it
• Nameofchapter4is ‘resultsand
Chapter 4 discussion’ (pg30)
• Discussionportionwillbe partof
chapter4notchapter5(pg78)
• In demographic analysis remove
column of valid percent. Moreover
check out sampletablewhichi have
madeonfirstpg ofch4
• Incorrelationanalysis tableonlyuse
abbreviations (pg42)
• Check corrections which i have made
on pg 42. At end of correlation
analysis do mention in one linewhich
ofthehypothesis areacceptedand
which are rejected.
• Remove reliability results from chap
4 (pg 31) and add them in chapter 3as
perabove statedsequence.
• Noneedtoadd reliabilitystatisticsof
pilotstudy.
• Followcorrectionsmade in page44
throughout chap4.
changed it
• Giveheadingof ‘appendices’on
separate page
• Thenagain on separate page give
heading of
appendixno.1
Questionnaire
Page 95/
• Make’part1demographic’ of
Appendices questionnaire presentablebyarranging
positionsofboxes.
• Bettertouseword ‘foreign banks’
insteadof international banks
• Inquestionnairethereis no needof
giving headingofvariablesbeforeitems
• Forguidelinesregarding listingof
bankscheck 102pageofthesis
• Youwilladd
• Appendixno.2
Listofbranches
• Appendixno.3
Listofbranches
(aftersimplerandom sampling)
• Appendixno.4
Listofbranches
(Participatedinstudy)
• Appendixno.5
(plagiarismreport)
Page 83/ ‘References’isnota chapter changed it
101
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