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Essay 01:
The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and
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ANSWER
The bar chart divulges the popularity level of several means of transportation Commented [MOU1]: Cố gắng đừng nên dùng những từ
không hiểu rõ nghĩa.
ðillustrates
that people used to commute to and from work in a city in the Europe in three Commented [MOU2]: ðLevel of popularity dedicated to
specific years, 1960, 1980 and 2000. Overall, there saw a steady increasing the Commented [MOU3]: Kể tên ra phải them từ : namely
ð,namely 1960, 1980 …
Commented [MOU4]: ðBỏ đi
number of travellers using car while the other were used less during the period. ðĐổi thành was
Commented [MOU5]: ðIncrease in the
In 1960, cars were used the least among the four modes. Throughout the Commented [MOU6]: Sai
ðOther ways of travelling were used
period, the percentage of people using cars to commute surged from slightly
terms of popularity. Despite the fact that going on foot to and from work was
most common in 1960 with 35% of people used, the number of pedestrians then
slip away to just 10% in 2000. Likewise, there brought a similar pattern in Commented [MOU7]: Chia sai thì
ðSlipped
Commented [MOU8]: Bỏ
terms of bike travellers, in which the percentage plummeted five times from
Commented [MOU9]: Bỏ
Sửa lại => a similar pattern was observed for bike travellers
over 25% to just above 5%. Lastly, there was a fluctuation in the number of Commented [MOU10]: ðThe figure
commuters using bus. Rising from 20% in 1960 to nearly 30% in 1980, the figure
then dipped to over 15% and became the second mostly used in 2000. Commented [MOU11]: ðMost used vehicle in 2000
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Essay 02
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ANSWER
The above diagram describes different stages of a typical honey bee’s life Commented [MOU12]: ðThe diagram/ diagram above
Overall, it can clearly be seen that an average life cycle of a honey bee lasts Commented [MOU14]: ð Can be clearly seen that
between 34 and 36 days which involved 6 major stages. Commented [MOU15]: ðKhông chia simple past
ðInvolves
The life of a honey bee starts within an egg which was laid by its mother bee Commented [MOU16]: ð With
Commented [MOU17]: ð is
that produces 1 to 2 eggs every three days. It then typically takes an egg 9 to 10
days to hatch and out comes the little nymph. Next comes the process of Commented [MOU18]: ð9 to 10 days for an egg
Commented [MOU19]: ðA little nymph comes out
molting which comprises 21 days, including 5 days for the first time then 7 and Commented [MOU20]: ð lasts
Commented [MOU21]: bỏ
Afterwards, the nymph is ready to become a young adult honey bee that would
spend the next 4 days of its life to grow into full maturity. From here, the bee is
all set to give birth to a brand new bee generation, repeating the honey bee’s
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Essay 03
Essay topic
hydroelectric dam.
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ANSWER
which requires the building a giant dam on the river attached with the Commented [MOU23]: ðThe building of a giant dam
quantity of water are controlled over by the intake which acts as a gate placed Commented [MOU25]: ð Is
Commented [MOU26]: Bỏ
between reservoir and penstock. The flow of water, at a next step, creates a Commented [MOU27]: Bỏ
Commented [MOU28]: ðIn a next step
pressure into turbine and making it spinning around. The physical movements Commented [MOU29]: ðInto the turbine
above. At a next step, the electricity generated is carried by electrical cable to Commented [MOU30]: ðIn a
and factories.
It is featuring that this process is closed-cycle, and renewable and relied Commented [MOU31]: ðThe picture fearures
Commented [MOU32]: Bỏ
modern life.
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Essay 04
Essay topic
The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different
age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
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ANSWER
Two given bar charts provide information about the purposes of study depend Commented [MOU33]: ðDepending
on age of student and the encouragement they got from the corporation. Commented [MOU34]: ðOn the age of
Commented [MOU35]: ðThe students
Overall, student tend to learn for future career when they were young, while Commented [MOU36]: ðThe amount of support
Commented [MOU37]: ð Students
old people just focus on their passion. Besides, the strongest support from Commented [MOU38]: ðFor a future
work just applied for the youngest age group. Commented [MOU39]: ð Students from the youngest
age group receive the most support from employers.
According to the first bar chart, exactly 80% of student under 26 attend a class
for a better job. This figure decreases gradually over the age-period, until it Commented [MOU40]: Bỏ
ð When the age increases,
was exceeded by the percentage of interest purpose after the period of 40-49-
year-olds. By contrast, the older people are, the higher rate for those who
follow their concern. It is noticeable that 70% of people learn for what they Commented [MOU41]: ðMore likely they to pursue a
study
Commented [MOU42]: Bỏ
love at the age over 49.
The second bar charts illustrates how well the employers treat their staffs to Commented [MOU43]: Bỏ
Commented [MOU44]: ðSupport
encourage them study further. It can be seen that the support fee and time off Commented [MOU45]: Bỏ
are over 60% and 50% with student under 26 and 26 to 29 years old Commented [MOU46]: ðFor
Commented [MOU47]: ðStudent of the two age group
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Essay 05
The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country
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ANSWER
The given pie charts compare the proportion of a country in terms of different
Overall, in both years, the Education and Health care percentage remained Commented [MOU49]: ðThe percentage of
steady throughout 60-year period, which together only accounted for one Commented [MOU50]: ð60-year period from 1950 to
2010
Commented [MOU51]: ð The two
sixth of the whole chart. In all types of categories, there were a significant
changes in Food and Housing proportion. Commented [MOU52]: ðAmong all categories, the food
and housing presented the most significant changes
With regards to the consumption of people, the Food and Transportation Commented [MOU53]: ??? not clear
percentage saw an increase between two years of about 22.8% and 10.7% Commented [MOU54]: Bỏ
respectively. This increase also brought these figures from the fifth and Commented [MOU55]: ðRespectively from 1950 to
2010
Commented [MOU56]: ðThe ranking of these
second position to the first and fourth position. Likewise, in 1950, other categories
Commented [MOU57]: ðSecond position to the first
category generated 4.4% which soared marginally to 19.2% 60 years later. By and fourth position in terms of average household
expenditure
contrast, the Housing figure accounted for nearly three quarters of the whole Commented [MOU58]: ðThe proportion of expenditure
in housing
chart (72.1%) in the first year and this showed a significant dip to 22% in the
2010.
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Essay 06
The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who
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ANSWER
The line graph gives information about about the proportion of visitor to
United Kingdom who visited Art Gallery, Pavilion, Pier, Festival in Brighton Commented [MOU59]: ðTo the United Kingdom
Between 1985 and 1995, the percentage tourists went to Pavilion increase Commented [MOU60]: ðThe percentage of tourist
Commented [MOU61]: ðGoing
dramatical and got peak of nearly 50% in 1995, and then, they fell down at 35% Commented [MOU62]: ðIncreased
Commented [MOU63]: ðGot a peak at
at 2000 before losing five per cent over the next 10 years. Commented [MOU64]: ðIn
In the same position, the ratios of a visitor to Art Gallery rose steeply and and Commented [MOU65]: ðStarting from the same
position on the chart, the line illustrating the ratios of
reached peak at nearly 40% at 1985 before reducing by a half in 1990. Then,
The ratio of visitor come to Pier continues fluctuate increase and decrease from Commented [MOU66]: ðComing
Commented [MOU67]: ðContinued to
1985 and 2000. In the 2005, this is the first time, Pier become the third Commented [MOU68]: ðWas
Commented [MOU69]: ðBecame
attractions in Brighton. The percentage of visitor come to Festival remained Commented [MOU70]: ðThe third most visited
attractions
Commented [MOU71]: Coming to
30% and unchange until 2010.
Commented [MOU72]: Remained unchanged at 30%
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Sample 7
The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned
The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned
for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
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ANSWER
The map reveals two expected locations to construct a new supermarket for Commented [MOU73]: ðPotential
Overall it is apparent that both sites are near the housing and people from Commented [MOU74]: ðTo which
Beginning with the S1, it is in the north west of the countryside of the town, Commented [MOU75]: ðThe first location, S1, is in the
north-west
where the traffic is allowed. Additionally, the people in town can go to this site
by car because it is next to the main road which is 12 km of length, connect the Commented [MOU76]: ðThe 12-kilometer main road
Commented [MOU77]: ðConnecting
town centre and the Hindon. This location is also next to the railway which is
start from the south east of the town through the town centre. Commented [MOU78]: ðWhich is the starting location
from
The S2 is in the town centre, which is below the railway . This location is Commented [MOU79]: ðS2 is in the town center and is
below the railway
ðS2, which is below the railway, is in the town center
convenient for the local inhabitants but not for people from other town because
the town centre is the no traffic zone. People from other town can only go Commented [MOU80]: ðNo traffic is allowed in the
town center
there by train, it is difficult to access this place by car. Commented [MOU81]: ðBỏ
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Sample 8
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ANSWER
The line chart illustrates the changes in the jersey interests of NBA store for Commented [MOU82]: ðSales
best three different items in New York city from last year. Overall, there were Commented [MOU83]: ðThe most popular
opposite trends in sales income of LeBron James and Kobe Bryant while that of
Michael Jordan kept a stable during the year. Commented [MOU84]: ðRemained
As can be seen from the graph, there is a big gap between LeBron James and
Kobe Bryant at the beginning. The revenue of LeBron James seemingly had the
highest starting point (over 120 000 dollars), then rocketed to approximately
150 000 dollars in December after hitting a low in July (under 100 000 dollars).
Contrastingly, Kobe Bryant’s interest went down remarkably from about 60 Commented [MOU85]: ðSales
Michael Jordan jersey, it saw a lowest figure during the year. It is clear that its Commented [MOU86]: ðSales figure
sales stayed the same income of about 20 000 dollars in each year. Commented [MOU87]: ðBrought in
Commented [MOU88]: ðLast
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Essay 09
The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the
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ANSWER
The bar chart illustrates date on the percentages of unemployed female for
each country inside United Kingdom between 2013 and 2014 . Overall, Commented [MOU89]: ðIn 2013 and 2014
England, Wales and Northern Ireland saw a gradual decline on the rate of Commented [MOU90]: ðIn
female with no employment. In contrast, the percentage of females not having Commented [MOU91]: ðFemales
In 2013, England has the highest percentage, 6.8% of the total. Whereas, Commented [MOU93]: ðHad
Commented [MOU94]: ðThe highest percentage of
female unemployment rate, 6.8%.
Wales’s unemployed women accounted for 5.4%, the lowest between fours. In
Commented [MOU95]: ðWhile
Commented [MOU96]: ðPercentage among the four
addition, Scotland and Northern Ireland rates are just behind Great Britain, countries
Commented [MOU97]: ðThis rates in Scotland and
Northern Ireland were just lower than that of Great
6.1 % and 5.6%, respectively. Britain
By the year 2014, the percentage of women who don’t have a job in English fell Commented [MOU98]: ðHad fallen
slightly, down to exactly 6.5%. The same trend was applied for the following
countries, reducing 0.4% to reach 5% for Wales and declining to 4.6% for Commented [MOU99]: ???
Commented [MOU100]: Bỏ
making it the country with highest percentage of female with no dedicated job
between the four countries. Commented [MOU101]: ðNo job among the four
countries
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Essay 10
The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at
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ANSWER
The line graph compares men and women in terms of the figure for books
read at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014. It is clear that men Commented [MOU102]: ðThe line graph compares the
variation in the number of books read by men and
women at Burnary Public Library between 2011 and 2014
tended to read more books over the period shown while the num ber of books
read by women fluctuated. Overall, from 2011 to 2013 the figure for women Commented [MOU103]: ðThe number of books read by
women
was higher than men, by contrast, in the following decade year, that for men Commented [MOU104]: ðHigher than that read by men
Commented [MOU105]: ðIn
gradually 1 year later in which reached over 8000 books in 2014. Commented [MOU109]: Bỏ
ðThen declined , sharply
Commented [MOU110]: ðOne year later with only
Over the period, the figure for men at Burn aby Public Library varied more
Commented [MOU111]: ðThe number of books read by
men
dramatically than women. We also can see that in the first stage of time
surveyed, the number of books read by men increased slightly to around 4000 Commented [MOU112]: ðYear from 2011 to 2012
books in 2012. However, in just 2 years from 2012 to 2014, there was a
books in 2014.
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