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IELTS 作文: Foreign universities provide better education.

It must be admitted that(1) 必须要承认 education is the first

route a student take to build his future. Some students prefer to
pursue their study overseas while others want to further their study
in their countries. Undoubtedly, studying abroad has its advantages
and disadvantages. For many reasons, which will be discussed in
this essay, I strongly believe that the advantages are far more than
the disadvantages.

One advantage of studying abroad is mingling with(2) 相处

the different types of the cultures and customs(3) 文化习俗 of that
country. To illustrate, when a student travels abroad for study, he
will be completely exposed to(4) 曝露于 positive traditions and
cultures of such people. Consequently, he will get useful benefits
from such customs when he returns to his homeland. One example
for that is my friend who, before one year, travelled to a country
for the purpose of the study. There, he acquired many positive
things from that country such as respect of regulations and the kind
treatment of people. Therefore, when he came back to his country,
his family was immensely affected(5) 深深地被影响 by his new
positive merits to the point that it begins to apply them.

It’s likely that the university you choose for your international
studies will have a large community of students both from the
local area and all around the globe(6) 全世界. If you take full
advantage of this opportunity, you could graduate having
established lasting friendships(7) 建立长久的友谊 with people
based in many different countries – great for future trips, and also
a good basis for an international professional network. As Dalferes
says, “Spending time studying abroad can provide an excellent
opportunity to make new contacts and build invaluable
relationships with peers from around the world."

Another advantage of studying overseas is the massive

benefits(8) 很大的好处 a student gets in his major. In fact, he will
encounter the elite professors(9) 精英的教授 and academics from
which he will acquire a good knowledge and experience in his
field. Accordingly, the student will spend less time studying his
major due to those highly educated professors. Hence, it can be
said that such student will be highly respected(10) 被崇高的尊敬
by his people when he returns to his home. Moreover, his immense
knowledge and experience will dramatically(11)戏剧般地
contribute to the growth and development of his country.

From the other side, it can be found that travelling abroad has
minor negative effects on the students; some of which are getting
involved in unethical activities(11)不道德的活动 or abusing
drugs(12)滥用毒品. Those bad things might make the students
deviate from(13)偏离 their original morals and traditions.
However, this mainly depends on the student himself. If he follows
these bad routes, he will not concentrate on his study anymore.
Therefore, he will acquire the bad habits instead of his golden
goal, namely study. Also, his future and previous aspirations will
be utterly lost(14)彻底不见.

It is certainly true that one of the main aims of university is to

secure a better job. The majority of people want to improve their
future career prospects and attending university is one of the best
ways to do this as it increases a person's marketable skills 可销售
的技巧(15) and attractiveness to potential employers. In addition,
further education is very expensive for many people, so most
would not consider it if it would not provide them with a more
secure future and a higher standard of living（16）高生活水平.
Thus job prospects(17)工作前景 are very important.

In conclusion, studying abroad has its pros and cons(18)利与

弊. However, as I stated above, that the advantages are the
prominent feature 杰出的特色(19). Subsequently, every student,
if intended to study overseas, should pick out the good and
beneficial merits from that country and extremely abstain from the
ugly habits or customs. Accordingly, will get a multicultural
educated and prosperous generation(20)一个多元文化教育和繁
荣的时代 of which we will greatly proud.

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