Literacy

Unit – Sentence fluency

Learning tracker

Date 21/5 24/5 28/5 – 30/5 31/5 4/6 – 7/6
(Diagnostic) (Diagnostic) (Formative) (Summative) (Formative)
Teacher Pre test - Rubric conference Post test - Rubric conference
assessment of Recognise Focus – Using connective words Recognise Focus – Using interesting sentence
independent connective connective starters.
writing against words in a Students have already self-assessed against words in a text.
rubric. passage (see their work before being conferenced. Students have already self-assessed against
appendix 5) their work before being conferenced.
*Goal – Writing goal.
*Strategy – How they will achieve their *Goal – Writing goal.
goal. *Strategy – How they will achieve their
goal.
Students and teacher decide on the goal
and strategy together. Students and teacher decide on the goal
and strategy together.

Student 1 Connective And, so Goal: Aiming to use at least 3 And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 1 connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so) however, as New goal: Use a range of interesting
Strategy: read other students work to well as sentence starters that tells the reader
Sentence see which connective words they when things happen to add impact.
starters: level 2 have used
Strategy: Use the sentence starter
wall

Student 2 Connective And, so, Goal: Aiming to use at least 3 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 because, but connective words to add interest. because,
(and, so, but) however
Strategy: read other students work to
Sentence see which connective words they
starters: level 2 have used

Student 3 Connective And, so, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest. because,
(and, so, however New goal: Begin my sentences In a
because) Strategy: Use the connective words few different ways.
Tin for inspiration to replace and.
Sentence Strategy: Use the sentence starter
starters: level 1 wall for inspiration.

Student 4 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Use a range of interesting And, so, but,
words: Level 3 because, connective words, such as despite because,

(and, but, so, however, as and nevertheless, and besides. however, as
because, well as well as, despite,
however, Strategy: Mini lesson with Mrs. nevertheless.
although) Woods, and find examples in your
independent reading.
Sentence
starters: level 3


Student 5 Connective (Test complete Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 verbally) connective words to add interest. because,

(and, but, And, but, however, as
however, however, Strategy: Use the connective words well as
because) because. Tin for inspiration, with Mrs
Richards’s assistance.
Sentence
starters: level 2

Student 6 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest. because,

(and, but, however, as
because) Strategy: Use the connective words well as
Tin for inspiration.
Sentence
 starters: level 2

Student 7 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so, however, as
because) Strategy: Use the connective words well as
Tin for inspiration.
Sentence
starters: level 2

Student 8 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest. because,

(and, but, so) however New goal: Use a range of interesting
Strategy: During independent reading sentence starters that tells the reader
Sentence find examples interesting connective when things happen to add impact.
starters: level 2 words.
Strategy: Use the sentence starter
wall for inspiration.

Student 9 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so, however, as
because) Strategy: During independent reading well as
find examples of interesting
Sentence connective words.
starters: level 2

Student 10 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Aiming to use at least 3 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so, however, as
because) Strategy: Use the connective words well as
Tin for inspiration to replace and.
Sentence
starters: level 2

Student 11 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Use a range of interesting And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 3 because, connective words, such as despite because,

(and, so, but, however, and nevertheless, and besides. however, as New goal: Use a range of interesting
because) well as, despite, sentence starters that tells the reader
Strategy: Mini lesson with Mrs. nevertheless. when things happen to add impact.
Sentence Woods, and find examples in your
starters: level 2 independent reading. Strategy: Use the sentence starter
wall for inspiration.

Student 12 Connective And, so, but Goal: Aiming to use at least 3 And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 1 connective words to add interest. because,

(And x 6, so x 4) however, as New goal: Use a range of interesting
Strategy: Use the connective words well as sentence starters that tells the reader
Sentence Tin for inspiration to replace and. how things happen, to add interest.
starters: level 3
Strategy: Mini lesson with Mrs.
Woods, and find examples in your
independent reading.

Student 13 Connective And, so, but, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 2 because, connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so, however however, as New goal: Use a range of interesting
because) Strategy: Read another students well as sentence starters that tells the reader
work for inspiration. when things happen to add impact.
Sentence
starters: level 2 Strategy: Use the sentence starter
wall.

Student 14 Connective And, but Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 connective words to add interest. because,

(and x 7, so, however
because) Strategy: Use the connective words
Tin for inspiration to replace and.
 Sentence
starters: level 2

Student 15 Connective And, so, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so, however, as
because) Strategy: Use the connective words well as
Sentence Tin for inspiration.
starters: level 2

Student 16 Connective And Goal: Aiming to use at least 3 And, but
words: Level 1 connective words to add interest.

(and)
Strategy: Find example in
Sentence independent reading of sentences
starters: level 1 using because and so.

Student 17 Connective And, so, Goal: Use a range of interesting And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 3 because connective words, such as despite because,

(and, so, but, and nevertheless, and besides. however, as New goal: Use a range of interesting
because) well as sentence starters that tells the reader
Strategy: Mini lesson with Mrs. when things happen to add impact.
Sentence Woods, and find examples in your
starters: level 2 independent reading. Strategy: Read classmates writing to
see how they have used interesting
sentence starters for inspiration.

Student 18 Connective And, so, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but,
words: Level 2 because, but connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so, however, as
because) Strategy: Use the connective words well as
Tin for inspiration.
Sentence
starters: level 2

Student 19 Connective And, so, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5
words: Level 2 because connective words to add interest.

(and, however,
because) Strategy: Use the connective words
Tin for inspiration.
Sentence
starters: level 2

Student 20 Connective And, so, Goal: Aiming to use at least 5 And, so, but, Goal achieved with evidence: yes
words: Level 2 because, but connective words to add interest. because,

(and, so, however, as New goal: Use a range of interesting
because) Strategy: Use the connective words well as sentence starters that tells the reader
Tin for inspiration. when things happen to add impact.
Sentence
starters: level 2 Strategy: Use the sentence starter
wall for inspiration.