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Your writing coherence is important because you are marked on this as part
of the IELTS grading.
Take a look at some common transition words that will improve your writing
coherence.
However, Therefore,
On the other hand, As a result,
In contrast, Consequently,
Thus,
Showing time: (commonly in To introduce concluding
essay introductions) comments:
These days, more and more people are making the choice to go to
university. While some people are of the opinion that the only
purpose of a university education is to improve job prospects,
others think that society and the individual benefit in much broader
ways.
It is quite a high level skill though. So it really depends on your ability. If you
are at a lower level of writing, you should make more use of them as they will
make it easy for the examiner to follow your ideas.
If you have more sophistication in your writing, you may not want to use them
too much or it could affect your style.
Most of these transition words are used in the same way in sentences and are
followed by a subject and verb.
OR
However, you do not want to use these words too ‘mechanically’ so you
should vary their position, and don’t repeat the same word too often. You
can vary the position with the following transitions:
Giving Examples
You can vary your use of ‘for example’ and ‘for instance’ by moving them to
after the first phrase of the sentence or to after the subject or verb.
There are many ways to improve congestion. Some cities in The Netherlands
have, for instance, pedestrian only city centres.
Similarly, you can place contrast or result transitions further down the
sentence:
These can also be joined to the previous sentence with the conjunction 'and’:
Tokyo now has a Sky Train, as a result, traffic problems have decreased
significantly. - this is incorrect.
Listing Points
Again, to improve your writing, you should vary the way you use these. They
can be changed so they are no longer a transition but become part of the
subject:
The first advantage of a new public transport system is that it will reduce
traffic congestion.
Writing an IELTS Essay Introduction
Writing the Introduction
In the writing for task 2, you must write an IELTS essay introduction, but
you only have 40 minutes.
In this time you need to analyze the question, brainstorm ideas to write
about, formulate an essay plan, and then write your response.
So you need to use your time carefully. You need a good IELTS essay
introduction, but one thing you do not want to do is spend too long writing it
so that you end up rushing your paragraphs.
Your paragraphs are the most important thing as they contain all your
supporting arguments and demonstrate how good you are at organizing your
ideas.
You therefore need a method to write your IELTS essay introduction fairly
quickly. When you write an introduction, you should make sure you do two
things:
How you do this will vary depending on the question, but here is an example:
Example 1:
Question:
Despite the fact that killing animals for sport is popular in modern
society, it remains a contentious issue. I believe that blood sports
are cruel and uncivilized and so should be banned as soon as
possible.
As you can see, the first sentence consists of the topic plus some
background facts on the topic which have been taken from the rubric.
The second sentence then gives the writers opinion and tells us that in the
essay the writer will be arguing the reasons why it is cruel.
The topic does not have to be in the first sentence, but it should be made clear
somewhere in the introduction. You must always have a thesis.
Paraphrasing
Another important point - don't copy from the question! You must
paraphrase (put it in your own words). To do this you can use synonyms and
move the order of the sentence around.
Using some of the same words is acceptable, but don't copy whole phrases.
You can see how the question above has been paraphrased. All the information
is from the question, but it has been written in a different way and has not
been copied.
Example 2:
Question:
Question:
A recent study has shown that as people use the Internet more,
they are spending less time with human beings. I believe that
although this has increased the communication around the world in
positive ways, it has also led to negative effects on the day-to-day
social interaction of human beings.
Example 4:
Question:
Question:
Very basically, it tells the person reading your essay what will be in it. It
may also give your opinion if the question asks you for this.
Don't get it mixed up with the topic of your essay - this is usually at the
beginning of your introduction.
How do I write a thesis statement?
In order to make it effective, you must have first identified the task of the
essay.
The task is what you have to do, and is usually at the end of the rubric.
For example, look at this IELTS essay question:
What you have to do (the task) is explain whether you think, overall, an
increase in the production of goods in other countries and their subsequent
transportation over long distances is more
advantageous or disadvantageous.
*Just a quick note on the word 'outweigh'. This word often confuses students
and they end up writing a thesis statement opinion that contradicts what they
write in the essay.
The simple answer - don't use the word! It is just asking you if there are
more advantages than disadvantages. So just state what you think in the
thesis without using the word, as in the example.
How does the thesis statement change with different
types of question?
We will now look at how thesis statements can vary with different question
types. However, you should not try to learn set phrases or sentences to fit
certain essays.
There are some broad types of essay questions that are common to see, but
they can all vary slightly.
The golden rule is to always read the question very carefully (never rush
this as you may not fully answer the question) and work out what you have to
do.
Your thesis statement will then follow on from this, depending on what you
have decided you need to write about in order to answer the question.
So below are some suggestions of what you could do for certain common kinds
of essay questions, but this is not to say these are right and other ways are
wrong. There are numerous ways to write good thesis statements and these
are just possibilities.
There are various ways you could choose to write an introduction and thesis
for this.
Example 1
You could begin by paraphrasing the two opinions, then stating in the thesis
what you will do:
This is quite simplistic but it makes it very clear what you are going to do.
You will obviously need to give your opinion as well in the essay, but stating
this in the thesis ("This essay will discuss both sides of the issue and
then give my opinion") sounds awkward so it is better without it.
Example 2
This is fine as your thesis will match with your essay - you go on to discuss the
first opinion and then the second one.
Example 3
Agreeing or Disagreeing
Another type of question is when you are asked to agree or disagree with
one opinion.
For this type of question, you need to state what your opinion is in the thesis
statement.
Other Essays
Some other essays may not ask you for your opinion specifically, but may ask
you to discuss, for example, problems and solutions, causes and
effects, advantages and disadvantages.
If you are asked to do this, then you should just clearly state that you will be
discussing these two things in your essay. Here are some examples:
Problems and solutions:
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous
problems.
Over the last ten years, Western societies have seen close to a
20% rise in the number of children who are overweight. This
essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and
examine the consequences of this worrying trend.
It is important to stress again though that questions can vary so you must
always analyse if carefully and identify exactly what you need to do and what
should, therefore, be in your thesis statement.
Remember, a thesis statement is just telling the reader what the focus of
your essay is and giving your opinion if necessary.