Name : Nita Annisa Sholihah

Class : B
NIM : 20170101038
Date : 22nd of January, 2019.
WORKING OUTLINE
Topic : Body Shaming
Specific purpose : To inform my audience about body shaming and its bad impact
Thesis statement : there are bad effects of body shaming; The statistics on both men and
women (5 years old-12 years old) that have tried to lose weight, decreasing self-confidence
because of people with pure intentions of insulting someone, people assumed to have a
“perfect body”.

INTRODUCTION
Attention material : body shaming has very bad impacts and effects to its victim.
Thesis statement : there are bad effects of body shaming; The statistics on both men and
women (5 years old-12 years old) that have tried to lose weight, decreasing self-confidence,
people assumed to have a “perfect body”.
Preview : Everyone has right to express their own opinion in a good way. But, today’s
generation doesn’t see wrong in expressing their own opinion in radical ways, like; shutting
out to anyone with a different body type than them is not okay. Body shaming is wrong and
needs to stop.

BODY
First main point : The statistics on both men and women (5-12 y.o) that have tried to lose
weight.
Subpoint A : it shows that body shaming really takes concern and make them stress
Subpoint B : it indicates that body shaming has the power of negative affects on
someone.

Second main point : Decreasing self-confidence

Subpoint A : they are getting shy in front of public
Subpoint B : they hate to show themselves off (talent search, etc)

Third main point : people assumed to have a “perfect body”

 Subpoint A : so they try their best to get the standard of perfect body from their society

CONCLUSION
Summary statement : body shaming is criticizing someone's appearance, whether it’s
someone that they know, someone who they don’t know, or even themselves. There are 3 bad
effects of body shaming; the statistics of both men and women (5-12 y.o) who tried to lose
weight, decreasing self-confidence, people assumed to have a “perfect body”. We should not
be body shaming. We should be motivating, supporting, and encouraging each other. Until
everyone realizes that, body shaming will continue to be an issue. Body shaming is an issue
that will not be solved unless everyone learns how to accept their own body, and until
magazines quit perpetuating this myth of a perfect body.
Concluding remarks : however, nobody is perfect. We should accept ourselves and love it,
and not throwing bad comments to others that look different with us. Because difference
makes beauty, and everybody is beautiful just the way they are. In the end, learning to accept
each other’s for who they are and not how they look can only be beneficial.