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Notice the order in which the writer presents details in his descriptive paragraph. He begins with a
quick, overall description of the woman so that the reader has an immediate impression of her. Then the
author presents certain details of appearance, actions, and sounds that make the character very special.
Some of these details help show the character’s inner self. For instance, keeping her head pushed forward
in an attitude of attention is related to thinking of things that were far away. The woman’s quick-
footedness is related to her energy. Her laugh shows her intelligence.
There seem to be many things to keep in mind as you write a descriptive paragraph. The task is not
very difficult, however, if you go about it in an organized way. Here are some guidelines to use as you
practice writing descriptions.
1. Before you write, give yourself time to observe and to think. Make use of your eyes, ears, nose, and
sense of touch. Use sensory details to re-create the first impression you had.
2. List the details you have observed.
3. Select the details that show the special qualities of the person you want to describe.
4. Arrange your details in an order that is easy to follow. You may choose to use a web to organize these –
probably something like the following.
5. Use language vivid enough to create a clear and colorful picture in the reader’s mind.
measles
gentle
FATHER
blue eyes
quiet
long hours of work
shy
college at night
Activity 1
Study the following picture. What do you notice in particular about the person in the picture? How do you
think he would talk? Walk? React to certain situations? List at least 10 descriptive details about him.
Activity 2
List at least 10 details about one of the following people. Some details should reflect your feelings, and
others should reflect the physical appearance of the person or creature.
• an unusual stranger you saw in your town or city
• a reunion with someone you love
• a friend of your mother or father
• an old photograph of you or someone in your family
• an animal you find unusual, mysterious, or dangerous
Activity 3
Consider one of the two lists of details in Activities 1 and 2 above, and use it as a basis to write a
descriptive paragraph.