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2019

41035 Professional
Assessment Activity 1
NAME: Sean Dugdale STUDENT NUMBER: 13211558
There are three parts to Professional Assessment Activity 1.
1a) Prepare feedback for at least 3 peers on the their portfolios, including their
landing page, about me, resume, learning journal. Comment on evidence of
each students’ readiness to apply for jobs/internships, and evidence of activity
to get connected with industry.

Peer #1 name: Patrice Harapeti

1. Which of the following has this peer completed?
Yes ‘About me’ section Yes Resume No a journal entry about attending an event No photo
journal entry
2. What is your feedback to this peer?
a) Positive

A professional looking layout is present throughout the website. There are numerous images
within the website giving a professional tone. The images are relevants and are good
examples of displaying their hobbies while also demonstrating their talents.

b) Improve

To improve upon this website you need to be sure to add a photo journal entry. A journal
entry about a networking event should also be added shortly to the e-portfolio. Adding more
regular journal entries and perhaps a bit more description in the ‘About me’ section would
add a lot to the overall quality of the website.

c) Anticipated positive results

If the professional layout scheme is followed and continued throughout the e-portfolio then
the end result will look fantastic.

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Peer #2 name: Sultan Alyammahi

1. Which of the following has this peer completed?
Yes ‘About me’ section No Resume No a journal entry about attending an event No photo
journal entry
2. What is your feedback to this peer?
a) Positive

The site has an impressive layout with a well written ‘About me’ section. The foundations of
a site have been laid and is ready for information to be put in.

b) Improve

Sections such as the resume, networking event and photo journal entry need to be added to
the e-portfolio to give the document some much needed filling.

c) Anticipated positive results

The site will have a professional tone once more information has been added to the
website.

Peer #3 name: Faisal Almessabi

1. Which of the following has this peer completed?
No ‘About me’ section, No Resume, No a journal entry about attending an event, No
photo journal entry
2. What is your feedback to this peer?
a) Positive

The foundations for the site have been laid with empty sections ready for material to be
inserted.

b) Improve

More information such as the networking journal entries, ‘About me’ section and resume
need to be added to the portfolio in order to gain momentum on completing the subject and
finishing the creation of the website.

c) Anticipated positive results

Will look excellent once more information and imagery are added to the site. Sections have
been outlined for material to be placed so it should look neat and appealing once the empty
areas are filled.

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1b) Provide this feedback verbally in your tutorial class

1c) Write a summary of the feedback you have received from your peers in your
tutorial, and how you plan to respond to this feedback.

The structure of my website was of an excellent quality and was setup easily to allow
for the insertion of more information. I was told that the menu layout that I had made
the website easier to use and more professional. My networking event has been well
documented and contains a ‘selfie’ of me attending the event. My resume is
embedded professionally into the website and is able to be accessed and viewed
easily.
To improve on my e-portfolio I was told that I should add more information about
myself to show to employers what my interests are and how those interests coincide
with that of the company that I am trying to apply for. A more detailed photo journal
is required from me as well as to build on my already made entries.

In light of this feedback, I will continue to work on my journal entries so as to extract

the maximum amount of information about my experiences over the course of the
subject. I will ensure that I have a proper photo journal so that I remain ahead of the
required work. I will also ensure that all my learning journals have a well made
structure that focuses less on recounting and more on how the experiences from the
subject will affect me and how I can learn from them to leave a lasting impact that
will continue to improve my quality of work throughout my career.

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