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Christopher Romero

Mrs. Litle

ENG121001

24 Apr 2019

Refection paper 4

In this experience I have learned many things about my writing process and writing in

general. There are so many things that I have learned but first I will start with my writing process

first of all my writing process I feel has really improved in many ways for instance I have found

that at the beginning of this assignment I really felt unconfident in the way I was presenting my

research was correct or not. I also was unsure if I was ending my paper correctly, but I indeed

was not so during the peer review of my paper I was given the advice to change up my ending

and I did so. I now know that I should utilize a more creative ending and I too realized that I

should not ask to many questions in my ending or attention grabber.

Another thing I learned about my writing process is that I go a little fast sometimes and

forget to include important information a solution to this problem would not be slowing down

because I found that in limited time I do need to use even greater speed so that I may be able to

provide sufficient amounts of logical wording. The solution for this problem would probably be

that I should do a quick revise before submitting my paper. I also found that I count on Microsoft

Word to much for spelling check and I feel I need to work on my spell checking. I also see that

in my writing process I need to use a more logical thesis statement to provide a better note of

what the paper is going to be about because in my current writing process I tend to establish what

my topic is and what type of paper its is that is being presented. Another thing I have learned
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bout my writing process is that I am not sufficiently mapping out my paper to fit the kid of

representation that I want to present.

I incorporated the benefits of Artificial intelligence really well from each source for

instance I have read four different sources and utilized the information from each one to the

benefit the argument that I was trying to make. I found some difficulties in the utilization of my

sources for instance it was a quite a struggle finding suitable resources to fit the kind of

representation that I wanted to give of my topic. My argument I feel was well balanced because

of this. When finding my source I had to use many different research databases and this was

quite a challenge but I overcame this challenge with the research strategies that I learned just

before starting this paper. Many of my sources need to be descried in a simpler fashion then

which they were presented. So I had to revise each source and its information to provide a more

suitable organization of information to present to my audience.

If I had to revise my paper to fit another audience such as people that do not support my

topic I could revise my topic and the information like relate Artificial intelligence to a topic that

the audience does agree with so that they might grasp a greater understanding of my topic.

I made only minor changes to my paper after peer review but much need changes. First of

all I changed my thesis statement to provide a more logical description of what my paper is

going to be about. I also combined to paragraphs that were in relations. I also added more detail

to a couple of my paragraphs describing AI more in depth. Another thing I added was another

paragraph to explain what I think the future of Artificial intelligence looks like I also had to

delete a work cited that I forgot to delete.

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The thing that I enjoyed the most about this paper was being able to learn so much

information about the topic that I choose for this assignment. I also enjoyed putting all the things

that I learned in this class together and how well it all worked out.