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Indicate same-time activities
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In Context
My wife gave birth to our daughter last night. Our little baby girl was napping when I phoned my family. I was staring at her little face while I
was holding her. She was sleeping so peacefully.
When I called home, my brother picked up the phone. We were talking while my mother was listening in on our conversation. My brother said
that she had tears in her eyes while I was talking about the birth.
Same-time Events
WHEN
When + clause relates an activity that occurs at the same time as or slightly before the activity in the main clause. The clause following when
may express (1) a short interruption, or (2) a response to the activity in the first clause. " X occurs, Y results." Typically, the verb in the when-
clause is non-progressive and expresses an activity with shorter duration.
INTERRUPTION—AT THE MOMENT
When you called, he was holding his newborn baby.
RESPONSE—IMMEDIATELY AFTER
When you called, he picked up his phone.
WHILE
While + clause relates an activity that occurs at the same-time as (simultaneously with) the activity in the main clause. The clause following
while includes a verb with a meaning and/or a tense that expresses duration. The while-clause often expresses a background activity to the focus-
activity in the main clause.
SAME TIME—SOMETIME DURING THE TIME
While he was talking, he was holding his newborn baby. (held)
1. interruption—He was holding his newborn baby when you called. ("called" ["rang up"] —short duration² )
2. same time—He was holding his newborn baby when (or while) he was talking on the phone. ("was talking" —longer duration³)
3. immediately after (in response)—When you called, he picked up his phone. ("called" and "picked up"—short duration)
4. anytime / whenever—When he has a question, he calls the doctor. (cause effect) See If v. When.
1. same time—He was holding his newborn baby while (or when) he was talking on the phone. (was talking — duration [process verb])
2. contrast—While some fathers are uncomfortable holding newborns, others are not. "whereas"
1. duration (process) such as talk, walk, eat, sleep, cook, study. (nonprogressive form) (See Verbs of Short and Long Duration)
2. short duration (punctual) such as bark, jump, clap, sneeze, gulp, begin, end, fall (nonprogressive form).
1. duration (process) He has been calling you all day. That dog is barking. (progressive form) The dog barked. (habitually) (See Present,
Past, Present Perfect.)
2. short duration (punctual) He called (rang). The dog barked. (once) (nonprogressive form) (See Past.)
See and Verb Meaning & Timing, Verbs of Short and Long Duration, and Duration vs Completion (process v. accomplishment).
When / While
Foreground vs. Background Activity
When—interruption vs. While—another ongoing activity
INTERRUPTION
Imagine a movie scene with a lot of people talking in a room, and then the camera zooms in on one person. The person becomes the subject of
the foreground and the other people and activity move into the background. In a similar way, when focuses on an interrupting activity. Follow-
up comments tend to focus on the foreground activity.
BACKGROUND FOREGROUND–INTERRUPTION
FOCUS FOR CONVERSATION
when the phone rang.
He was holding his baby
Who called?
when the baby yawned.
He was counting the babies fingers
How cute!
when the baby was born.
Everyone quieted down
What a moment!
ANOTHER ONGOING ACTIVITY
Both when and while can be followed by a clause that draws attention to another ongoing activity that is the central focus. The verb in the while
clause is mostly progressive, expressing repetitive or detailed activities. The verb in the when clause is mostly nonprogressive, expressing an
activity without particular focus on duration.
BACKGROUND FOREGROUND–SAME TIME
FOCUS FOR CONVERSATION
He was holding his baby while we were discussing names.
backgrounding (Ger) – a grammatical term for moving something out of central focus and into a position of less focus (less importance or less
interest).
come up with (Phrasal Verb) – think of, put together, call to mind
conceive (V) – begin life (also, to form a notion, an opinion, a purpose, an idea)
interruption (N) – a stop or break in the middle of an activity; a discontinuance; interference with action or speech
reveal (V) – announce publicly, make known to all
tends to be (V Expr.) – is more likely to be; is more expected to be
yawn (V) (N) – an involuntary action of opening the mouth widely and taking air into the lungs
When
Express same-time v. immediately after
When—"at the same time" vs. "immediately after"
IMMEDIATELY AFTER
When + clause may also relate an activity that occurs just before the activity in the main clause. Depending on the verb tense, the clause following
when may express a routine or a one-time response to the activity in the main clause. The verb in the when clause is mostly non-progressive and
expresses an activity of short duration¹; that is, the timing of the activity has a clear beginning and end.
FIRST ACTIVITY SECOND ACTIVITY
PP + CLAUSE MAIN CLAUSE
When the doctor comes in, I ask her questions. (present)
When / While
As, During Throughout, Meanwhile
Other expressions for when and while
WHEN
SAME-TIME¹
We were eating at the moment he called.
He was talking / talked on his phone at the same time that we were eating.
He was talking / talked on his phone. Meanwhile, we were eating.
He was talking / talked on his phone during the time that we were eating.
He was talking / talked on his phone all the while we were eating. (expression)
Punctuation
Commas
Initial vs. Final Clause Placement
Initial placement of a when phrase/clause requires a comma to separate it from the main clause.
WHEN + CLAUSE MAIN CLAUSE
When you called, he was watching his baby.
While he was talking, he was holding his newborn.
FINAL CLAUSE PLACEMENT
No comma is used if the when phrase/clause is placed after the main clause.
MAIN CLAUSE WHEN + CLAUSE
He was watching his baby when you called.
He was holding his newborn while he was talking.
Traditional grammar analyzes this structure (e.g. when you called) as an "adverbial clause". Current linguistic research analyzes this structure as
a prepositional phrase; it places "when" in the category of Preposition (i.e. when [prep] you called [clause]). See Grammar Notes below.
ERROR
* While he called me, he was driving to work.
Use while before the activity of longer duration (the background activity).
*While he is watching television, she does not.
*not used
1. Select the response from the list that best completes the sentence.
2. Compare your response to the feedback by clicking the "Check" or "Check 1-10" button.
1.
I was making dinner. My sister was watching television.
2.
We were watching the movie called "King Kong". A friend came over.
We were watching the movie called "King Kong"
Feedback 2
3.
We were watching the movie. We were laughing about its unlikely plot (story).
we were laughing about its unlikely plot .
4.
The movie ended. We turned off the TV.
5.
I was talking on the phone. My friend was reading magazines.
6.
My friend stood up to leave. It was midnight.
it was midnight.
Feedback 6
7.
He touched the door knob. (first activity) We heard a thud on the roof. (second activity)
8.
He looked at me. (first activity) I said, "King Kong?" (second activity)
9.
He opened the front door. (first activity) We saw nothing but leaves and branches. (second activity)
We saw nothing but leaves and branches
Feedback 9
10.
Morning came. (first activity) A truck lifted our "King Kong" off the roof. (second activity)
Feedback 10
Practice 2
Dependent on Devices
Psychologists have a growing concern with iPhone and other smart-phone dependence. People are interacting with their phones when they could
be interacting with people. Teens and adults are engaging in addictive behavior such as checking their phones when they are having face-to-face
conversations. Some teens are using words such as LOL, BRB while they are talking with friends. Some people report that they feel "naked"
while they forget their phones or somehow become separated from the device.
Many cannot sleep while their phones are next to their beds. A number of people report checking email in movie theaters when they are
supposed to be engaged in the movie. Other people have admitted to doing things on their phones while they were driving or operating heavy
equipment. Unfortunately, a distracted driver is often unable to disengage fast enough when an accident is about to happen. Is it a sign of the
times, or just bad behavior?
dependence (N) — the state of relying on or needing someone or something for aid, support
psychologist (N) — doctors who study the mind and human behavior
"Do you sleep with your iPhone?" AppAdvice. 26 Jul 2011. http://appadvice.com/appnn/2011/07/do-you-sleep-with-your-iphone-psychologists-
worry-about-this-new-addiction. Accessed on 19 Aug. 2016.
Correct or Incorrect?
11.
People are interacting with their phones when they could be interacting with people.
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Feedback 11
12.
Teens and adults are engaging in addictive behavior such as checking their phones when they are having face-to-face conversations.
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Feedback 12
13.
Some teens are using words such as LOL and BRB while they are talking with friends.
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14.
Some people report that they feel "naked" while they forget their phones or somehow become separated from the device.
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Feedback 14
15.
M any cannot sleep while their phones are next to their beds.
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Feedback 15
16.
A number of people report checking email in movie theaters when they are supposed to be engaged in the movie.
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Feedback 16
17.
Other people have admitted to doing things on their phones when they were driving or operating heavy equipment.
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18.
Unfortunately, a distracted driver is often unable to disengage fast enough when an accident is about to happen.
Correct Incorrect
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