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NAME: _______________________ DATE: _________________

Writing Process Worksheet

(Accompanies Unit 2, page 24)

ASSIGNMENT: Write two paragraphs about violence in movies and on TV.

Explain why some people think it's harmful and why others
think it isn't.

1. PREWRITING
PAIR WORK. With a partner, brainstorm ideas of why some people think violence in
movies and on TV is harmful and why others think it’s not. Take notes below.

Why is violence in movies and on TV harmful?

Examples: • Violent movies can make people violent.
• TV and movie violence can hurt children.
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Why is violence in movies and on TV NOT harmful?

Examples: • Some violence in movies and on TV is OK. It can be necessary to tell the
story.
• It’s OK for adults to see violent movies and TV shows.
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2. WRITING
On a separate piece of paper, write a first draft of the paragraphs.

3. PEER FEEDBACK
Meet with your partner again. Read each other’s paragraphs. After reading the
paragraphs, complete the Peer Feedback Checklist. Then give your partner your
feedback.

PEER FEEDBACK CHECKLIST

Yes No
1. Are the paragraphs interesting?


If no, suggest ways to make them interesting.
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________

2. Are the paragraphs clear?

If no, point out the parts that are not clear and suggest ways to
make them clearer.
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________

3. Are there any mistakes in grammar or sentence structure?

If yes, underline the sentences with mistakes.

4. Are there any misspelled words or incorrect punctuation?

If yes, circle the misspelled words and the incorrect punctuation.

4. REWRITING
Tell your partner to revise his or her paragraphs based on your feedback. Revise your
paragraphs based on your partner’s feedback.

Top Notch 2, Second Edition Unit 2

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