thesis : I agree that live life today is more easier and enjoyable than when your

grand mother was child.

topic sentence I enjoy in this era because now technology is sophisticated

sd1 communication technology had a significant improvement. So many
shopisticated communication gadget right now. there are handphone, computer,
television and its all very awesome and cool with many function inside of it. I
think now communication is perfect. because now we can easy to contact people
wherever they are. in my grandma era there are no gadget like that. they usually
use mail and must go to post office first. and difficult to contact people.

sd2 now many factory use machine to make their product. machine is more
efficiency. machine help people to do their work to save the cost energy and
time. and with machine we can minimalize the faulty work. and machine always
gives the best result.

sd3 and now information can get easier than before. because of many
communication gadget we can receive much information from it. and we have
internet connection right now. so we can search any information with it. on the
contrary long time ago don’t have communication gadget. and cannot browse to
internet. old people use book for catch the information.

topic sentence : I love live in this era because transportation more easier
sd1 there mrt or monorail. In many country now had a monorail. its can help you
to move more fast everywhere. because with mrt there are no traffic jam. and
The train moves very fast. and can reach until 1000km/hour. so monorail can
save the time and do more work everyday. can improve your work because this
thing. but in my grandmother period. transportation very difficult. because no
way to reach the place we want to go. and we work limited with time and place

sd2 there’s busway in Jakarta. now a days Jakarta have a cheap transportation.
they called transjakarta bus. it have its own way. so no traffic jam with this bus.
you can go around Jakarta maximal only 15 thousand rupiah. transjakarta cost is
only 3.500 rupiah one way. Jakarta people very crowded and this is a good
solution to solve problem. and in old time there wasn’t any way in Jakarta
because only few way in Jakarta. more over busway transjakarta.

sd3 many public bus and car in Jakarta. can go around Jakarta with cheap. we
called it ‘angkot’ and angkot is a cheapest transportation in Jakarta. and so many
angkot in Jakarta. there are no air conditioner in this transportation. and the
lower class people usually use this transportation because cheap. and the other
hand long time ago angkot is still not popular. and transportation very difficult.
and difficult to find.

topic sentence trading more simple around the world

sd1 with internet trading business. we can buy or sell things with internet. we
can add advertisement in there. and we can put description, photo, video to
explain people what thing that we sell. and to buy think we can search thing by
typing the keyword in internet.
sd2 can pay with debit or credit card. its make more easy to transaction with
other people over the world. trading more safe because we don’t need to carry
cash. and beside that in old time there are no debit or credit card.

sd3 many mall and sell many product. now we know mall. so many mall in the
world now especially Indonesia. we can find many type of mall. and in mall sells
anthing. we can found mall that focus on selling electronic, household, and so on.
in the past there’s no mall

cs : I prefer live in this era. because I love technology. and modern lifestyle.