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EW103
27 April, 2010
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Intro Sentence 1: Since the dawn of time, slave rebellions around the world have been a
Intro Sentence 2: The fatal mistake with the slaves was that they believed if they showed
any sign of rebellion, their captors would simply let them go.
Intro Sentence 3: They did not put into account that in order to achieve freedom, they
either had to be in the good graces of their captor or they had to eliminate the need for
their use.
Succinct Thesis: Instead of putting effort into hopeless rebellions, slaves should have
Body Paragraph 1 Topic Sentence: One of the above mentioned examples is the
Body Paragraph 1 Concluding Sentence: Had Gabriel used his great influence to plan
protests instead of rebellions and gain private audience with Governor Monroe, perhaps
Body Paragraph 2 Topic Sentence: A slave-preacher from Virginia, Nat Turner believed
that god had given him the job of setting the slaves free no matter the cost.
Body Paragraph 2 Concluding Sentence: Had he preached the word of god and instilled
love and hope inside his followers, Nat might have been revered as one of the influential
Body Paragraph 3 Topic Sentence: Yet another futile rebellion was The Denmark Vesey
Conspiracy.
Body Paragraph 3 Concluding Sentence: This, like many other plans, had its own share of
flaws to come along with the potential, the biggest flaw being that the plan was only half
thought out.
Citation Examples:
1. They would recruit thousands of slaves from all over Virginia, storm the capital
square, and take Governor James Monroe hostage in order to negotiate with
2. Though Gabriel had an army which consisted of thousands of slaves, their army
3. They mainly used axes, hatchets and basic garden tools so to not alert the
4. Denmark Vesey was a slave purchased from Captain Joseph Vesey from the
5. When he heard the story of the Haitian Rebellion and the heroics of Toussaint
L’Overture, Vesey became inspired and began to plan his own rebellion which
would take place on Bastille Day of July 14, 1822 (Postma, 72).
Restatement of Succinct Thesis: In conclusion, slaves were wasting their time planning
rebellions instead of using their smarts and whatever influence they had to gain a
peaceful freedom.
have tried to become an assistant to one or even to gain office by voting as a block.
Restatement of BP sentence 2: Instead of preaching hate and revenge, the blacks should
have preached love and patience so to prove to the whites that they are of the same level.
Restatement of BP sentence 3: Instead of attempting to take over cities, the blacks should