Hello Tutor

First of all, we know that English has four skills and one of them is writing. Writing is
not easy as reading, because, it involves grammatical rules, punctuation, in order to
make a clear text. Also when we develoip the writing skills it has to have coherence and
cohesion.

To improve this skills id recomended read to increase the vocabulary and how to make
complex sentences. the positive moderator give us determination and attainment.

Finally, we have to investigate to avoid the same mistakes again, to create a good text
we could first do a brainstorm acoording to make a good ordered text

Yesenia,

Hello Tutor...punctuation

reading, because, it...punctuation

it involves grammatical rules, punctuation, in order to make a clear text....language

Also when...punctuation

develoip...spelling

To improve this skills...language/grammar

id recomended...grammar/language/spelling

increase the vocabulary...language

sentences. the...orthography

the positive moderator give us ....grammar

again, to create...punctuation

acoording...spelling

Can you try again, please?

Grade: F
Hello Tutor.

First of all, we know that English has four skills and one of them is writing. It is a
necessary and useful skill to develop a language. This skill is not easy as reading,
because it involves grammatical rules, punctuation in order to create an original writing.
I consider I could overcome my writing difficulties if I reinforce my knowledge. I can
achieve the usage of brainstorming to organize the ideas. Also, when we develop the
writing skills it has to have coherence and cohesion. Improving this skill I suggest
increasing the vocabulary to write complex sentences. The positive moderator gives us
determination and attainment. Finally, we have to investigate to avoid the same
mistakes again.

Yesenia,

Hello Tutor.....punctuation

as reading,....use of "as"

it involves grammatical rules, punctuation in order to create an original writing....punctuation

the usage...language

Improving this skill I suggest increasing the vocabulary to write complex sentences.....language,
check the use of "suggest", incoherence

Grade: 10