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THE GLOBE

January - February 2011


Student Writings f r om IEI

WRITING ONE
My Weekend son – my cousin.
By Yazeed (Saudi Arabia)

Last weekend I had a good time. On Friday I


went downtown, then I went to Kentucky with my About Me
friend. I slept in Kentucky. I got up at 12:00 p.m. Then By Faisal (Saudi Arabia)
I went to eat Mexican food. The food was very good.
Then I went back to Nashville. Then I sat in the coffee I’m Faisal Al Jubairi. I am 18 years old. I am
shop and went home at 2:00 a.m. In the morning on studying at the International English Institute. On the
Sunday I got up at 11:00 a.m. Then I cooked a hot weekend I am going to go downtown and to the mall.
dog. After that I worked on the computer. Then I went I am happy because I’m studying in IEI now. I need to
to sleep at 11:00 p.m. study English. I am from the Kingdom of Saudi
Arabia. I studied in IEI for two months. I go to the gym
My Plans for Next Week every day. In my country I go to play soccer with my
By Hesham (Saudi Arabia) friend. I like swimming and table tennis. I went to
Egypt. I don’t like smoking.
I have plans for next week. I am going to go
shopping with my friends. Then I am going to go
downtown. After that I am going to go back home. On
Friday after my exams I am going to go to Seattle. My
uncle was born there. I am going to visit my uncle’s

WRITING TWO
My Happiest Day
By Abdullah (Saudi Arabia)

My happiest day was in Indonesia. We went My Brother


to Bunshak in the Green Mountains. These By Ahmed (Saudi Arabia)
mountains are very nice for a family. I went to Taman
Safari with my family. This is the biggest zoo in My brother’s name is Salman. He is 15 years
Indonesia. You drive your car inside the zoo. This zoo old. He likes to play football and video games. I am
is like a real jungle. The zebras, llamas, deer, and similar to my brother, because I like to play football
other animals walk to you to eat something like a and video games. He studies in Saudi Arabia. He
carrot. Behind a big, iron door, there are animals that wants to study English in the summer with me in
eat meat. There are lions, tigers, leopards, cheetahs, America. He is happy all the time. He wants an
and bears. The police say not to open the window, airport job after he finishes English. He talks with me
because these animals will eat you. After that, you on Skype every weekend.
leave your car in the parking lot. You go shopping or
eat something or go to the baby zoo. The baby zoo
has small animals like very small tigers and monkeys.
You can take a picture with a small animal. This day
was very fun for me. My Childhood Memory
By Angel (Venezuela)
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I am going to talk to my friend. I am going to finish my
I remember when I was five years old I went homework. I am going to watch T.V. and play
with my father and mother to the beach for the first Playstation. I am going to go to sleep in my home. I’m
time. This moment was wonderful, because I saw an going to wake up. I am going to call my friend and go
ocean for the first time. I also remember that my to the shopping mall. I am going to go to the café.
father, my mother, and I made a castle with an arena.
That day we also ran together along the whole beach.
This day was a good day for me.
My Favorite Places
Weekend By Sultan (Saudi Arabia)
By Nasser (Saudi Arabia)
My favorite places are South Africa and
I will tell you about my weekend. I am going Barcelona. I like these places. I want to go to these
to go with my friend on the weekend. I am going to go places. In Africa, there are animals. In Barcelona,
to a movie with my friend. When we finish, we are there is a team. I want to go to Club F.C.B.
going to eat Arabic food. I am going to go downtown.

WRITING THREE
A Dreamy Dream
By Heidimarie (Germany) One night, when I was sleeping, I dreamed
about my favorite car, the Mustang GT. Actually, I
One cool Saturday evening, I was dead tired, always talked with my father about it, so I guess
so I went to bed early. Not long after, I fell into a that’s why I dreamed about it. While I was sleeping, I
deep sleep. I lay on a big lawn. It was full of red and dreamed I had one. I was driving it and racing, and
yellow flowers, stretched against the sun. I lay in the them my father woke me up. After that, I was angry.
middle of the lawn and breathed a long deep breath. I didn’t want to wake up because it was an amazing
I felt like I was on a white cloud. A flower petal fell dream. I told my father about my dream, and he said
down and tingled my nose, and I took another deep “I can’t buy this car for you. It’s very fast, and it only
breath. I breathed out, and the flower petal danced in has one door”. In fact, he meant by only one door, I
the air. I breathed in, and she touched my nose. can’t take my family with me anywhere. However,
This went on for a long time until the flower petal flew one day I will buy it when I get a job. I hope my
in my mouth. Suddenly, I woke up, and I coughed dream comes true.
and coughed, and then I felt a little feather in my
hand. My dream ended quickly, and I was sad, but I A Nice Dream
hoped I could fall fast asleep again. By Ahmad (Saudi Arabia)

My Life on the Island Last night, I dreamed a pretty dream that


By Hashem (Saudi Arabia) drove me to be happy in it. First, I saw the big door
with shiny jewelry pounded in it. When I opened the
My life is a small island near the sea. It is door, I stopped for a while, and breathed the fresh
green because of big waters. My home has two breeze. Then I walked around until I arrived at a long
floors. Many people live on the island. On the left lake. It had water of silver. I took some of it in my
side of the island, there is a big school and next to hand and tried to drink it. Mmm… delicious water. I
the school, there is a small university. On the right had never drunk anything like it. I continued to walk
side, there are stores, and all the people shop in until I arrived at a group of trees. I stopped to browse
them. On the north end of the island, it is very nice. at the nice birds. They were shining like stars in the
It is a place to swim and sit and drink coffee. All the sky. Finally, I saw a group of lions. The King Simba,
people like that. The people are happy living on the who was the head, came to me and invited me to
island because everyone is friendly, and it isn’t celebrate with them. We were enjoying our time
expensive. All the teachers are smart. The food is together, but there was one problem. During the
healthy. It is nice, not dirty. I am happy there. celebration, one of them ate me. You know, I
discovered that if you want to dream a funny dream,
you watch a cartoon movie.

My Best Dream
By Ahmed (Saudi Arabia)
My Mustang
By Abdulrahman (Saudi Arabia) One night, I went to sleep and began the best dream
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I ever had. When I went to bed, I was thinking about father and brother. When my brother drove to the car
what I was going to do the next day. I finally relaxed dealer, my father said I shouldn’t be nervous about
and fell asleep. Then I started to dream I was a driving the new car. When I was driving the new car,
businessman. I had a very big company, and I I was happy and lively, but I was worried because I
traveled every day. I also had a beautiful wife, two was afraid to do something wrong. Then I woke up
nice boys, and four cute daughters. One day, I everyone in my family to show them the new car, but
planned to go to the moon in my rocket. I went to the when the dream was over, I was pessimistic because
station, got in my rocket, and the time counted down. it wasn’t real. I feel when I get that car in the future, I
Suddenly, there was a very loud sound. What is this? will be optimistic with my life and my family. I think
It was my alarm. I finally woke up. At that time, I when someone wants something, he has to be
really wished I had never turned on the alarm. It was painstaking with his life, and he may achieve his
the best dream I had ever had. dream.

My Favorite Dream My Bad Dream


By Abdullah (Saudi Arabia) By Ahmed (Saudi Arabia)
One night, after dinner, I went to my room. I was When I was ten years old, I dreamed I went
busy thinking about a lot of things, like my language, with my friends to Egypt. We saw a lot of horses and
my family, my country, and my friends. When I got in camels when we arrived. Then I said to my friends,
bed, I was very tired because of all the thinking. “let’s ride the horses or the camels,” and they said,
When I finally went to sleep, I had the best dream of “That’s a good idea,” so we decided to ride the
my life. To tell the truth my problem is money. I horses. When we were riding the horses, they
know it doesn’t matter, but I don’t want my father to started running very fast, and one of my friends fell
have to pay for me. I dreamed the Mission called me, down off the horse. Then we took him to the hospital,
and they said, “Mr. Alghamdi, we are the Mission of but we couldn’t find a doctor. When we left, I saw
Saudi Arabia. You have a scholarship now, can you one old woman in the street, and she asked us what
send your number?” That was the best dream, and happened to our friend, so we told her the story.
now, I pray to God every day because I want my After that, she told us to bring him to her home. Then
dream to be true. I have heard that if you think about she made some juice for him, and he told us he was
something before you go to sleep, sometimes you will fine now. Next, he said, “I’m going to give a gift to the
dream about it, and sometimes it will come true. woman.” He bought her a ring. After that, we went to
My Dream Al-gahra city, and we took a tour with a person from
By Muhammed (Saudi Arabia) Egypt by bus. When he was driving the bus, he was
sleepy. We were all asleep, and then we woke up in
A lot of people dream, but I have a different the hospital. When we asked the doctor what
and exciting dream. Three weeks ago, I dreamed I happened to us, he said we turned over in the road.
was going to buy a new car in my country with my After that, I woke up, and I was happy it wasn’t true.

WRITING FOUR
Education what do you think he will be? I think we all know what
By Adnan (Saudi Arabia) he is going to be: nothing. So, you had better send all
of your kids to school!
The meaning of education is an activity of There is an old Arabic saying: “everything
learning in school, college, etc… There is a question you read its food for your thought”. Most people who
people always wonder about: “What does education finished their study or some who are old, education
mean?” For me, education is one of three: future, means knowledge. What is knowledge? We can say
knowledge, and sometimes life. knowledge is everything, or information that we get
For some education means a future. Most of by reading, watching, or by feeling. So, do you think
the time it’s the government. The education there is any limitation for education? A lot of studies
“philosophy” is when you educate kids from a young show that to educate children is easier than to
age; you can have a new country. So, let’s think educate an adult. The reason is because there is
about it. If you have two kids, and you send one of something called “Critical Period” (the period of time).
them to school and let the other one do whatever he This is the time that we have to teach children what
wants. What do you think will happen? As everyone they need to learn because after this time, their mind
knows, the educated kid will grow up and maybe be a starts to be more complicated. Does that mean adults
doctor, or scientist, police officer, etc. The other one, can’t learn something? No, that’s not true, because

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there are a lot of adults, and sometimes seniors learn to talk after he listens to his parents? He makes some
different kinds of things, including a new language. noise and strange voices. In fact he is trying to talk.
That means, if you want to learn something, go And so you are…try it…don’t be shy. Some people
ahead, nothing will be in your way. might laugh and some may not. But keep trying and
In the other hand, can education consider a be sure that you are learning. If you make some
start for a new lifestyle? For sure, I think we all agree differences with your pronunciation and have the
that it is true. Here is an example, if you are the ability of making a few sentences, you are ready to
owner of a company, and two people come to you go to the next step.
asking for a job. The first one has high school degree; Step three from our LTRW steps is to read. In
the other one has a bachelor degree. Who will you this step you need some interesting books. But when
hire? Of course if were like any company owner, you you choose the books, be sure that you choose a
will hire the one who has the highest degree; the different level of books. Arrange them easiest to
bachelor degree. There is another face for this fact hardest. Then start with the easy one. Here you are
which is education is important in your life, I mean learning how to read and improving your reading at
daily life. Imagine, if you need to do a very important the same time.
thing by the Internet, but you don’t know how to use a Welcome to the last step from our LTRW
computer; or you have signs of a heart attack, but steps. Here you need a notebook and a pen. Then
you are not educated to tell what is happening to you. you are ready to fly in the pages, drowning and
There are a lot of things that if you learn even just a expressing about your sense in English. But be
little information about it, you will have an easier life, careful, you might have a spelling mistake. When you
or it maybe will save your life. find your spelling mistakes and correct them, you are
So, the point is that education is very doing well. Try to use a dictionary to help you find
important to you, your kids, your country, or your mistakes.
sometimes it’s important for all kinds of humans. So Congratulations, Mr. Dictionary, now you
please, educate your kids so they will have a good know what LTRW can do; it can change your world.
life, now and in the future. Listening, Talking, Reading and Writing are your
heroes. If you want to be a native speaker and
Amir Temur improve yourself more and more you can join IEI.
By Akbar (Uzbekistan) And don’t forget to practice; this is the thing that will
save your English.
I am going to illustrate Uzbek legend who
lived in the IV century. He tried to build a big empire. Marriage in the US and SA
The territory that he owned was (1/3) nearly sixty By Abdullah (Saudi Arabia)
percent of Asia. He is also popular in Europe. Since,
he protected Europe from the Turkish army, when Marriage is a beautiful thing for me. It is the
they attempted to destroy them. There is a monument highest relationship between the man and the
of Amir Temur in France. After he died his woman. The wedding is the best celebration for me; it
government was damaged. is better than the birthday. I am going to write about
the differences between weddings in Saudi Arabia
Technical English Learning and the United States of America.
By Ali (Saudi Arabia) The location of the wedding in KSA depends
on the zone. If it is in the center of the kingdom, like
When you travel anywhere in the world, one Riyadh, the people there do weddings in wedding
powerful language might help you. English is the halls. Some of them they do it in privacy in their
most common language in the world. Do you really homes. We call it marriage family. In the south of the
want to learn English? You need a natural technique kingdom, the people do the wedding in a big tent. It is
to learn. It’s the Human language Learning a very big tent. The tent area is like 200 meters.
Technique. As an abbreviation for the steps you can Some of them, they do wedding in the high
say LTRW. It stands for Listen, Talk, Read and Write, mountains in the cities like Abha or Najran. I really
and we will go through it step by step. enjoy it when I go to this wedding because I am from
LTRW, the human child usually stars learning Najran. In the USA, the people they do the wedding
by listening to the voices around. He tries to organize in the church or in the bride house.
words, letters and other sounds. As an English The wedding guests in KSA in all regions of
learner, you should focus on worlds, letters, the kingdom. The guests they wear a “thop” it is
pronunciation and grammar that English speakers traditional clothing. It is a white dress. They also wear
might use. Make sure to have a native speaker to “besht”; it is a black clothing; we wear it on the “thop”.
practice with. After you organize some, you are ready We wear “shimag”; they wear it on their head. In the
to go to the second step of our LTRW steps. USA the bride wears a white dress or a cream dress
Our second LTRW steps are to talk. After you and she wears a veil. She also holds a bouquet in her
listen carefully to the native speaker, you’re ready to hand. The groom, he wears a black suit or tuxedo.
try talking. Have you ever seen a human child trying And the guest. The men, they wear a black suit, and
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the women, they wear a beautiful dress. paper test. They test your traffic knowledge. Second
The culture wedding in KSA. In the wedding test is a driving test. This test is for your driving
the Imam, he is responsible for the wedding. The ability. So, if you fail the exam you can take a new
dance is part of the Saudi Arabian culture, it depends test one week later. In my opinion, America is better
on the zone. I like the center of the kingdom; they than Turkey, because processes are very easy and
dance with the sword, for example. They stand for short.
one long line, they holding there left hands and with Secondly, I will tell differences and
their right hand they bring the sword to the top and similarities about getting a car in Turkey and the U.S.
they bring it down. We call it “Alarthah Alnajdiah”. On A car is costly in Turkey. If we have a car, we should
the south of the kingdom they dance with daggers, for pay taxes, so cars are too expensive in Turkey.
example. In Najran, the guests in the wedding, they That’s why everybody doesn’t have a car in my
make a big circle and there is two men dance with the country, but everybody has a car in the U.S., because
dagger. One of our culture in Najran, the groom, he cars are cheaper and it’s necessary for the American
should be the last one to leave the wedding. One of people. A residential is so far from other residential. If
our greatest cultures is that I like it so much that you cars are cheaper, everybody has a car. That’s why if
give the groom money, sheep or a camel. The men something is cheap, we can take it.
and women are separate; the men, they have their The roads are a very important subject for
own determination and the women have their own driving. I will tell about the road’s differences and
determination. I remember when I was a kid I can go similarities in Turkey and the U.S. Turkey is an old
to the women’s place, they have their own DJ and country. Turkish drivers are impatient. Because, it
they have the best food. In the USA, the priest, he is has narrow and old ways. The people don’t like to
responsible for the wedding. The guests, they dance drive. However, the U.S. is a newer country than
tango, or salsa. The bride and the groom, they put a Turkey. It has new and big roads. That’s why drivers
list of what they want and the guests can choose can be patient on the road.
what they can bring for them. In the USA, the men Both countries have solid traffic rules. A lot of
are with the women. traffic signs mean the same in both countries. For
The wedding food in KSA, it depends on the example, we use the same stop sign in Turkey.
zone; in the center, they serve Middle Eastern buffet, Traffic lights have the same meaning: red lights mean
and we have the best food in the Middle East, stop, green lights mean pass and yellow lights are
“Mofatah”. “Mofatah” is a whole big lamb, sheep or wait.
camel, and we put it in a large dish with delicious rice Every country has a different situation. Some
with fried onions, and with raisins on top. It is the countries have conscious drivers, some countries
same in the south, but no buffet. The dessert we have murder drivers. If we can be responsible to our
serve “basbousa”, “Aom Ali”, and “Konafa” and the family, we will not be murder drivers. All the time we
Arabic coffee and dates. In the USA, some of them, should improve ourselves.
don’t serve food in the wedding; it is expensive for
them, and some of them, they bring snacks like Culture
biscuits with cheese or ranch, and some of them, By Diane (Brazil)
they serve buffet and they make toast with wine or
champagne. Each culture has its own customs. The word
I wrote four differences between the wedding “culture” is better defined based on some examples.
in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia and the United States Let’s talk about the culture between Brazil and the
of America. Wherever is the differences, it is beautiful U.S. The fact that different groups speak different
for me. languages, play different sports and celebrate
different holidays is evidence that those cultures are
Being a Driver different.
By Cigdem (Turkey) The Portuguese and the English have an
important connection with Brazilian and American
The car is freedom in all countries, but all culture. The Brazilian culture is formed by Portuguese
countries don’t have the same situation. For example, version of the traditional Western European
the driver’s seat is on the left in a lot of countries, but civilization. The American culture is formed by an
in a few it’s on the right. This essay will tell about the English version, so English is the dominate language
driving similarities and differences in Turkey and the of that country.
U.S. Playing soccer and football is like a rule for
We have a long driver’s license process in Brazil and the U.S. Soccer is the most popular sport
my country, Turkey. We should pass a few exams. in Brazil, and football is the most popular sport in the
Firstly, we take a driving course and then we take U.S. In both of those countries they have the custom
paper test and finally, we take driving test. After that to teach sports to the students from the school.
we can use a car. Driving courses, paper test and The holidays have different celebrations in
driving test are very complex, but in the U.S. there the Brazilian culture and the U.S. culture. For
are just two exams for driver’s license. First test is a example, in Brazil the carnival is the festive season,
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usually in February. It is a public celebration or men. Men and women have abilities to give in love
parade in the street. In U.S., Thanksgiving, is a relationship, but women give without asking. Women
historical holiday and people stay with the family. give unconditionally and love to help other people. On
The culture comes from history and the other hand, men give only when they are asked to
influences people’s lives, generation by generation. give. Men love to do things which are appreciated
The language, the sports and the holidays are part of and hate to do things which make him feel more like
their daily lives. In each country we find a different a slave.
culture with different customs, characteristics and a When I compare and contrast men and
new way to learn. women, I didn’t mean that men are better than
women or women are best. Both of them are equal,
Men vs. Women but they are different, which gives us a challenge to
By Fadiah (Saudi Arabia) learn how to deal with each other in life, and live in
peace.
Men usually say, “Women can’t be
understood,” and women say “Men can’t understand Causes of Insomnia
us”. Men always think that they are the greatest By Hussain (Saudi Arabia)
human and women can’t do anything by themselves.
When women and men can’t understand each other, There are more than one causes of insomnia.
they start to complain that women are from Venus One of them is having a negative feeling about the
and men are from mars, so to avoid future, for example, you think that you won’t succeed
misunderstanding men and women should learn at working in any company or some project. Another
about each other, what are the similarities and reason for insomnia is not having a good relationship
differences between them. with people, for example, you have a bad attitude or
Women physically aren’t very different from have bad self-esteem, so you feel like nobody is
men. In general women’s organs are the same as active with you or close to you. The other one for
men’s. But when we look for specific details, such as insomnia is that you’re not satisfied with your life, so
the skin, we can find the difference between them. most of the time you think about changing some
Men’s skin is thicker than women’s skin. Also, when I things so you can sleep. There are three main causes
said the organs of men are the same as women, I that lead to insomnia.
mean it is how they look. But when we look at how Having a negative feeling about the future is
each organ works, we can find a lot of differences; for one of the biggest problems in this case.
example women’s immune system is active and Having a bad relationship with people will
works fast to fight against viruses, bacteria and fungi, cost you more than you think, for example, if you go
more than men’s. to some places and you are stuck there because your
Men’s and women’s personalities are the car broke down and then you can’t find a person who
most important things that they should be learned in you know that can give you a hand.
order to know how to deal with each other. I think People who are not satisfied in their life, are
personalities of women and men are affected by their uncomfortable, so they can’t sleep well.
physical makeup. As women’s hearts beat faster than
men’s heart. Maybe for that reason, women are Sports and Education
usually more emotional than men, and women make By Ibrahim (Saudi Arabia)
decisions by her heart not by using logical thought
like men do. Women usually take care of her skin The important two things in our life are sports
contrary to men. Women want to look good for their and education, because the athlete means the
husbands, so women take care of her makeup and healthiness and education means the future. What
her perfume. Personal care is very important to I’m going to talk about are sports and education, and
women. Otherwise men are messy and don’t care compare them between Saudi Arabia and the United
which kind of soap and shampoo that he uses like States.
women do. Saudi Arabia has two popular kinds of sports.
Men’s and women’s activities should be They are soccer and volleyball. Most of the people
known by each other. In fact this point depends on watch socar, so it is more popular than volleyball.
both physical and personalities which give reasons Both of them are important. In Saudi Arabia, you will
for their activities. Men and women have abilities to see the people play soccer and volleyball in public
have a relationship in their life, but the differences places and parks for fun. The United States have
between them in the way of how to deal with and act many different kinds of sports. The popular two sports
and keep this relationship. Women love details and I’ve heard about are football and golf. Usually, the old
get deeper into the thing, but men do not; such as people play golf more than others, because they have
when women hear a story from their friends, women more free time. You will see the guys and kids
want to receive more details about it. Men like to playing football everywhere. Generally, all kinds of
receive the summary of the story. Because women sports are really important and healthy.
love details, they have the ability to talk more than In Saudi Arabia, the education from
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elementary school until high school is really hard,
because the teachers expect more. Also, you can get Saudi Arabia and America
into university easily and most of the universities By Abdullah (Saudi Arabia)
belong to the government, so you don’t have pay to
go there. The government pays for your books, too. When I came to America, it was the first time
In the United States, education from elementary for me, so I didn’t know about their traditions, and
school until high school is really easy. I think because how they lived. I met someone from America on the
most of their teachers are girls, and girls are always street and I said “hi” to him, but he didn’t say anything
lovely. The university is hard to get into for them. You to me. When I told my host family about what
must pay a lot of money, and sometimes you will happened, they said it is because this is their
have to take tests to enter these universities. The tradition, just say “hi” and keep walking or driving.
education in our present time is the future. There are many differences in tradition between
The sports and education are the important Saudi Arabia and America. For instance greeting and
things in our life, but they are different in some guest.
countries. Some people didn’t use these things and In Saudi Arabia, when you meet someone on
they still have a great life. It means if you don’t have the street and say “hi” to him, or he says “hi” to you,
sports or education, you shouldn’t be pessimistic. you must stop and shake his hand and reply “hi” to
Always be optimistic, and you will still have a pretty him, then, you can leave. Also, Saudi Arabia has
life. another tradition, but it’s for visitors. It’s entertainment
of visitors. When you have a guest in your house, you
The Difference between Renting an Apartment in should tell him to stay 3 days, if he is from another
S.A and U.S. city. In contrast, in America, you don’t have to stop to
By Khalaf (Saudi Arabia) say “hi” to people who you meet in the road, just say
“hi” and continue on your way. You have to know the
One time, I rented an apartment. When I time of sleep for your friend, who you want to visit
wanted to leave the apartment office told me you him, because they should sleep early and don’t stay
have to clean you apartment if you want to get your up at night, because they do not accept visitor late at
deposit. night.
There are many differences between S.A and Also, we have many things to compare and
U.S. in renting an apartment. contrast for the way of life in Saudi Arabia and
The rules are different between S.A. and the America. First, in Saudi Arabia, most people who do
U.S. They don’t have a deposit in S.A. When you not have a job or something to do, most of them
want to rent apartment, in the U.S. you must pay between 19-23 years old do not sleep early. I mean,
deposit. In S. A. you don’t have to clean apartment they stay awake all night, and then they will sleep
before you leave, but in the U.S. you have to. If you during the day. The other thing, in Saudi Arabia, if
don’t clean it the landlord will charge you and then you go, you will buy good food for your health and
take your deposit. In S.A., you don’t have to tell the cheap. For example, you can get the best lunch for
landlord when you are going to leave. If you pay around three dollars. On the other hand, in America,
every month, the landlord will keep you, but if you most people between 19-23 years old are different
don’t he will ask you to leave. In U.S., you have to tell then guys in Saudi Arabia, because American guys
the landlord when you are going to leave. arrange their schedule of life to do each thing on
The cost is different between S.A. and the time. For example, when someone has a lot of things
U.S. In S.A., the cost will be around $250-$300, but in in his day, he has to arrange his schedule on what is
U.S. it will be $650-$700 for one month. So in S.A., important and priority to do first. American people
the cost is cheaper than U.S. Also the furniture in also have a big problem with their food in two ways.
S.A. is cheaper than U.S. Als water, electricity, and First way, it’s more expensive than Saudi Arabia.
the internet. In S.A. are cheaper than U.S. Second way, that food is not health for body because
The address is going to be hard in S.A. to most of their food is fast food like McDonald’s or
fine someone; it is opposite U.S. In S.A., it is hard to Burger King. They like fast food because they have a
find an address by GPS and the other thing that lot of important things or jobs to do. So, fast food
makes it difficult, is that addresses are complicated. takes a short time to give you the food to eat.
They don’t have zip code or house number, but in the Third thing we will talk about is the weather in
U.S., they have it, so it’s going to be easier to fine these countries, and how can they live in their
any address that you want by his zip code or house weather and what’s the effect on them. In Saudi
number. Arabia, it’s always hot, sunny, and humid. According
There are couple things for S.A. and the U.S. to these factors, Saudi people don’t like to live in cold
The first one in S.A. you don’t have to pay deposit, area because the cold will make them lazy and
but in U.S. you have to. The second one, in S.A., the hungry most of the time. In contrast, in America, they
cost of apartment is better than U.S., but the last one have all four seasons, that is better because
U.S. have zip code and house number, so all of them American people can live in four situations in life and
have a couple of perfect and wrong things. if they go to any different country they can adapt to
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other seasons. for people who read them. To have a background
As you see, we compared and contrasted about these countries and know what to do when you
between three big things, its customs, guests, and visit Saudi Arabia and the United States of America.
traditions of each country. It’s interesting and useful

WRITING FIVE
Three Aspects of Music
By Jaekab (South Korea)

What do you listen to when you listen to music? Many people may not care about it, the might say, “I’ve
never thought about it.” Or “Who cares?, I’m just listening to music.” That might be people’s common perspective
on music. But there are several aspects that many people ignore whenever they are listening. If you recognize
certain points, listening to music will be more joyful. I will explain three points: Groove, Song Form, and Harmony.
Also, these are common points to more deeply understand all styles of music.
First of all I want to introduce you to Groove. In other words, a rhythmic movement that makes you want to
dance. Groove is the strong effect of the feeling of the music. It is a crucial point that helps people define the music
genre depending on the different groove styles. Furthermore, the groove can strongly affect the same music. For
example, there are two songs: Ben E. King’s “Stand By Me” and John Lennon’s “Stand By Me”. Even though, both
are the same song we can recognize different musical feelings because of the different rhythmic feelings. The
Groove is the most important aspect in terms of composing and arranging music.
Second is the Song Form. Like the structure of a building there are several sections in music. Usually, it
consists of verse, pre-chorus, chorus, and bridge. When music flows from the start to the end spontaneously, the
musical atmosphere is changing. Such as in the song “Hey Jude” it starts with only vocal and piano. And when it
goes to the next section, guitar, bass, and tambourine instruments are played to increase the sound. After going to
the climax section that sings “Na, Na, Na, Nananana, Na”, every instrument is played powerfully then the chorus
vocals fade out to the ending. Through the structure of one song we can easily understand a composer’s intention
to change the dynamics.
Lastly, I want to mention the Harmony of instruments. Its effect is a beautiful sound. The sound that is
combined with various instruments greatly affects our emotions. Each instrument can create a different musical
feeling. For instance, there are two different versions of “Little Wing”. One is Jimi Hendrix’s and the other version is
The Corrs. We can feel that both have a totally different sound that comes from different instruments. The
atmosphere of Jimi’s feeling is close to the Rock and Blues feel which is played by the drum and bass guitar. On
the other hand, The Corr’s “Little Wing” feels more Irish. It is played using a tiny whistle and violin that produces a
more flowing feel. Each instrument produces its own unique feeling. The combined sounds of different instruments
give us comfort and pleasure.
To sum up, these three points: Groove, Form, and Harmony are important points to be aware of whenever
listening to music as well as when composing or arranging music. I recommend trying to focus on these three
points so that you will be given a more joyful heart from the music.

How to be Successful at IEI


By Latifah (Saudi Arabia)
IEI is a school for international students to learn English. It is one of the great English schools in Nashville.
If I were asked to help someone to be a successful student at IEI I would do my best to give him all the information
to help.
There are strategies to being a good, successful student. First of all you have to be a good person. Respect
everyone and respect yourself and reflect on your good personality by respecting your teachers and your friends in
school. For example, if a new student is rude and doesn’t respect anyone around him, try to avoid him and not give
him the help that he needs to improve himself. So, behavior is very important and it is like the gate to be a
successful student at IEI.
Second, you have to follow all of the school rules. There are very important rules to be followed by students
to make the school the best place and an organized place for all of the students. For example, one of the rules is to
come to the class on time. If you are always late to your class you are not following the school rule and you can’t be
successful at the end of the term because you always miss your class or are late and do not know what happened
inside the class to prepare yourself for studying at home. There are several sets of rules to help the students to be
successful and pass the classes and improve their language skills very quickly.

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Third, to be a successful student you have to do all of your homework and assignments. In addition, you
have to be active in the class by talking to other students and share your ideas with them. This also helps you
communicate with others easily and supports your being an active student who has the ability to speak and show
your point of view. If you stay silent without talking with anyone during school hours, you cannot make any
improvements to help yourself become a successful student.
Finally, the students at IEI should do their best by studying hard day and night in order to be a successful
person in the U.S. not only as a student at IEI. Being a good person, showing good behavior to others, following all
of the school rules, doing all of the homework and assignments are the ‘success keys’ to becoming a successful
student at IEI.

Global Warming: Is It Man-Made? Or Is It Earth's Natural Activities


By Sattam (Saudi Arabia)

Global warming is the increase in the average temperature of Earth's near-surface air and oceans since the
mid-20th century and its projected continuation, result of the increase of CO2 in our air that caused by human
activities, and Which will emerge out of control at some point. That is the image that the media has pictured. There
are other theories that explain the reasons of the global warming. One of them is very interesting.
Who's behind this drama? By searching I found that there is organization called IBBC. It's an American
pop-up organization from the International Meteorological society. And there are individual efforts by Senator Al
Gore who received the Nobel Peace Prize. The atmosphere currently contains 385 ppm of carbon dioxide gas,
which is the primary cause of global warming compared to the 275 ppm that were present in the atmosphere before
the Industrial Revolution. Hence, we note that the amount of carbon dioxide concentration in the atmosphere
became higher by about 30% more than a little of what it was before the Industrial Revolution Tschimh. Rate of
absorption of infrared rays 55% (Wikipedia). There are a lot of expectations that will happen in the future. They
expect there will be an increase occurrence of droughts and desertification of large tracts of land, extinction of a lot
of creatures, and agricultural disasters. the main cause of this increase is the smoke that comes out from the
factories. So, the organization started to take money like a tax from companies to limits this problem.
On the other hand, there are people against this theory. There is an English science professor Philip
Stout from a university in London, who Said that IBBC is an organization with management, and finance, it serves
specific interests perhaps the interests of the globe and perhaps the interests of other things. And Nigel Calder from
the BBC and writer in New Scientist Magazine said they and the power of the media have made the global warming
theory a belief, in fact they made it a religion one must believe in, and whoever stands in its way is an infidel, and I
am one of those infidels.
The first point of this theory is that global warming is a natural process. There are scientists from
Switzerland who did some chemical analysis of samples which they took from the Antarctic which proves that the
earth went through many stages in the past, and that the average of CO2 was less and more than now. Now the
average of CO2 is 385 ppm, in 1859 the average of Co2 was 280 ppm, and before 1850 the average was 200 ppm.
So, we conclude that the carbon dioxide gas has increased by nearly 30%. But the important question is, who is
the responsible for the increase of the carbon dioxide gas before 1850 since we know the Industrial Revolution
started about 1850. The second point is in January 2009, the International Organization for Meteorological studied
that in 2005 the average temperature of the earth was 14.77 if known the normal average temperature of the earth
is 14,and in 1998 the average was 14.7. But in 2008 they found that the temperature was 14.3. That means the
heat has been reduced from 14.77 to 14.3.So, the change in the temperature is 0.5+ or 0.5-. I have written these
numbers according to NASA's global temperature record. Furthermore, the third point is a study in a university in
England. They have studied some samples that they took from the Antarctic, and the layers of the trunk of trees.
They noticed that the earth went through two periods of time from 800 to 2000. From 890 to 1170 the temperature
was in its maximum heat, the scientists called it the Hot Middle Age. And from 1350 to 1750 the weather was in its
maximum cold, and the scientists called it the Middle Ice Age. We can see that the two periods have the same
duration; the two of them lasted for 300 years. So, the earth is going to experience another of hot age. But we're not
talking about 10 or 15 years it will take hundreds or less to have a hot age or an ice age.
In conclusion, both theories are strong the first theory is caused by the human activities and the second
that it's caused by nature and it's a period of time and the climate will back to its normal weather. The opponents of
the global warming theory think that it's a waste of money and a way to keep the poor countries from developing.
And the people who support the theory of global warming say that supporting this idea is a way to get away from
carbon tax. In my opinion doing something is better than doing nothing. Because if the global warming is wrong it's
only a loss of money, but if the global warming is true it'll be a disaster. Therefore, a lot of changes will take
place on our planet. However there is an Egyptian saying, ''stay away from the evil, do something, and sing for it''.

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Death or Isolation from the Society Forever
By Taewoo (South Korea)

Since the 1950s, the death penalty has been one of the most controversial issues in almost every country.
However, nowadays, the death penalty has been magnified as an even bigger controversy because committing
murder has been happening a lot. This is also because people who agree with the death penalty and other people
who disagree have conflicted with each other very sharply. Both sides make a lot of claims with appropriate
evidence. Especially, people who agree with capital punishment argue that murderers don’t have rights to live.
However, I disagree with them because when I consider about crime deterrence of the death penalty, the death
penalty cannot decrease the murder rate. Also, because a human being’s life is much more invaluable than any
other thing, people cannot kill another person, even if it is based on the law. Furthermore, even if we abolish the
death penalty, we can still utilize a life sentence without parole, which means not to kill criminals without pain, but
to let them live in the jail forever under observation.
First of all, we need to define that the value of a human being’s life is more important than any other thing.
This is why almost all countries recognize the equal value of every human being’s life. However, the death penalty
does not match with this value. No matter how many times someone commits murder, that person is still a human
being and this means that the murderer should be treated as one of human beings. However, the death penalty
completely ignores the dignity of human beings. The death penalty defines that a person who commits murder or
something harmful to people should compensate them for their loss by giving up his or her own life. However, even
if murderers are killed by the law, people who were murdered by them never return to us. It is meaningless, and is
just revenge for killing other people based on the law. In other words, the idea of ‘eye for an eye’ is not justice.
Even if murderers are not executed, we can give them much more pain by forcing them to live in jail forever. Also,
if the death penalty intends to isolate criminals from the society by death, this can be substituted for a life sentence,
which means that a prisoner cannot be released on parole no matter how well the prisoner behaves. This
substitution might be more effective than the death penalty because murderers can have enough time to feel sorry
for the victims they killed, which is one reason for punishment.
When people agree with capital punishment, they usually say that if we abolish the death penalty, crimes
will happen much more than before because imprisonment can be understood as a weaker punishment for
criminals. However, there is no difference in the crime rate between a life sentence and the death penalty.
According to a new survey by “The New York Times”, it was found that states without the death penalty have lower
homicide rates than states with the death penalty. The Times reports that ten of the twelve states without the death
penalty have homicide rates below the national average, whereas half of the states with the death penalty have
homicide rates above. During the last 20 years, the homicide rate in states with the death penalty has been 48% to
101% higher than in states without the death penalty. In other words, a life sentence without parole has more
deterrence than the death penalty. Also, this information can demonstrate that a life sentence is never a weak
punishment. In addition, while the death penalty does not give them time to consider what they did wrong, a life
sentence can give them plenty of time to do that. Furthermore, even if they want to die due to the guilt about killing
people, they have to live in jail forever with this guilt. That is, staying in jail forever under observation and strict
rules is more painful than being executed. If people want to give a lot of pain to murderers, a life sentence is a
better idea than the death penalty.
To sum up, people who disagree with the death penalty stress that even if the death penalty is legal, it is
not justice because we cannot kill other people no matter how terrible their crime. In addition, the death penalty has
a serious problem, it might kill people who are not guilty. Furthermore, even if we abolish the death penalty, we can
use a life sentence as a substitution. Of course, people who agree with the death penalty claim that they do not
want their taxes to be used for criminals to live in jail forever. However, what we should know is that a human
being’s life is the most invaluable thing. Even if they are criminals, they are also human beings, and a human
being’s life cannot be compared with the amount of money used to make criminals live in jail.

Love×Ethic,Moral&Law=Interactive controlling reliability


By Taichi “Ace” (Japan)

Recently, the TV drama “大切なことはすべて君が教えてくれた(You Taught Me All the Precious Things)” is


causing great controversy in Japan, especially among adolescents and the people who are connected to education.
One of the most audacious aspects of this drama is its prologue: Natsumi is a high school English teacher who is
well-liked by her students. She plans to marry Shuji, her high school and college classmate, and who is now her
colleague. Shuji is a biology teacher who is popular not only among the students but also with their parents and
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with his co-workers. Natsumi and Shuji are the perfect couple who have everybody's blessing. But one day just
before the new school semester begins, Shuji spends the night with his student, Hikari. This incident changes the
couple's future completely. As you can see, this shocking story has caused a stir in Japanese society.
Romantic relationships between teachers and students have intermittently drawn public concern in Japan.
Indeed, several TV dramas and movies have been created which also discussed this issue. Yet, the majority of
people in Japan believe that romantic relationships between teachers and students are taboo. This opinion has
never been changed. Although many think that love between a teacher and a student is a forbidden relationship, in
my opinion, it should be accepted publicly and not considered taboo.
Opponents of Romantic relationships between teachers and students strongly claim that “Teachers should treat
their students equally.” It is true that teachers should not have any illegitimate favor for their students at school.
Most junior high schools and high schools have their original rules to ban the relationships. Actually, even the
language school where we are learning English has a same policy: Faculty and staff are expected to maintain
appropriate teacher/student relationships at all time. This includes not dating students or engaging in romantic or
sexual relationships with students. We recognize that since we are an adult school, there are opportunities to meet
wonderful people. If a desire to pursue such a relationship develops, the faculty/staff is expected to resign in order
to pursue the relationship. On the other hand, in spite of engaging in a teaching position, they are “Human” before
they are teachers, thus, of course they have basic civil liberties. In fact, the constitution of Japan states that all
citizens have fundamental human rights such as thought/conscience, religion, assembly/association, residence,
occupation, and academic freedom. Also, fundamental human rights ensure that all people shall have freedom to
marriage and love. This means that the person who is a teacher has a freedom to love whatever else it might be.
Hence, if a teacher and a student are in love, it should not be banned, restricted or decried by anybody and
everybody as long as it is true and pure love. Moreover, inequalities and illegitimate favors are caused by not only
the relationships between teachers and student, but there are some other factors; for instance, preferences, well-
connected background, bribe, extortion and so forth. For this, romantic relationship is not the only cause of the
degeneration of teachers.
Opponents also maintain that the ordinance for the protection and nurture young people prohibits romantic
relationships between teachers and students. In Japan, having sex with an under 13-year-old juvenile is forbidden
by penal code. In addition, the ordinance which is set by each local government bans having sex with adolescents
under 18-years-old. The principal reason for the ordinance is to protect young people from sexual crimes and
contribute to the sound growth of juveniles and adolescents. Specifically, the ordinance prohibits adults from
satisfying their own sexual gratification by engaging in “obscene acts” with children under 18 by cheating, trapping,
or intimidation. However, many layers and experts have pointed out the problems with this ordinance since it was
established. Actually, the ordinance has a possibility that it is unconstitutional because it ignores the fundamental
human rights which I mentioned before. Besides that, the definition of “obscene acts” is obscure and the criterion
for serious love is also unclear. In 1985, one adult man was sued because he was having a love relationship with a
16-year-old girl.
At the end of this case, he was pronounced guilty, meanwhile, three judges of Supreme Court argued that the
ordinance was against the constitution, so he is innocent. Furthermore, Japan established Child Pornography Law
and Child Welfare Act to protect juveniles and adolescents from sinister sex indecent acts, sexual exploitation and
whoredom/prostitution. Thus, the ordinance which can cause the possibility to block pure love relationships has
been criticized that as unnecessary.
The final argument oppose to opponents is that we should change in thinking of this matter. I think that I have
been feeling like that I’m becoming an expert of this issue because I read a lot of articles, discussions, and
precedents about it. Then, I have reached one resolution. The main reason that makes romantic relationships
between teachers and students more aversive is negative images and stereotypes of people about this issue. This
situation pushes teachers and students who are having the relationships to be outside of the society. As a result,
teachers are forced to resign their job, students start missing school, a teacher and a student try to elope
somewhere, and in the worst case, they commit suicide together. To stop this negative spiral, expert Taichi(Ace)
produces a completely opposite idea to an existing one and it’s a sort of a conceptual breakthrough. The idea is
accepting romantic relationships between teachers and students publicly/generally as one of ordinary thing, and
constructing a new structure “Interactive Controlling Reliability (ICR).” ICR is a kind of collaborative alliance
between teacher/student who are having the relationship and their family/friends. For example, if a student tends to
receive priority responses by his/her partner (teacher), another teacher or classmate reminds them to maintain
equality. Likewise, parents of a student who is having the relationship with his/her teacher supervise them to control
their relationship appropriately. Even though, changing deep-seated taboos and stereotypes is very difficult, if we
make such a positive structure, recent controversial situations will be calmed or it will be solved.
It should be evident that arguments against romantic relationships between teachers and students are not valid.
Generally, teachers should not be allowed to love with their students because teachers are supposed to take care
of their students fairly and impartially, however, teachers shall have freedom to love based on the fundamental
human rights of the constitution. Furthermore, the ordinance for protection and nurture young people is inconclusive
and nonsense. Actually, validity and presence of the ordinance has been discussed for a long time. Finally, I got a
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paradigm shift, precisely the opposite interpretation, accept and respect the relationships and also cooperate with
each other to keep the relationships appropriate. Construct “ICR” can improve the relationships between teachers
and students more positively. Therefore, in my opinion, Japanese society should allow teacher/student romantic
relationships.

Citations
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Prostitution in Asian Tourism. June 2009. 20 Feb.2011 < International Campaign, to End Child Prostitution in Asian
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- “IEI Faculty & Staff Handbook 2010-2011.” International English Institute.
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