AicE-Bs 2011Famagusta

http://fspu.uitm.edu.my/cebs Asia Pacific International Conference on Environment-Behaviour Studies

Salamis Bay Conti Resort Hotel, Famagusta, N. Cyprus, 7-9 December 2011
Tel: (006) 03 55211541; Mobile: (006) 017-3864297; Fax: (006) 03-55444353; Email: cebsuitmconf@gmail.com

Theme: Quality of Life & Environment

Assessment of full paper by International Scientific Committee / ajE-Bs & jABs Editorial Board
Paper Ref. No: SuE 005 Paper Title: Planning Park for Liveable Cities: Green Technology Design Practice for Tasik Biru Kundang, Kuang, Selangor, Malaysia A. Please rate the manuscript using the following criteria:No. Assessment Criteria Scale (1-5) ( 1- very poor) ( 5- very good) 5 4 2 3 3 5 2 Score (%) Strengths or Reservations Please help the authors by not leaving this section empty. OK Up to date issue Unstructured sentences OK OK OK Already known approach Strengths or Reservations Please help the authors by not leaving this section empty. No information related to the research Nothing to do with the research activities OK Bad structure of writing OK relevant Good as an example

1 a b 2

3 No.

Topic Relevant to theme of AicE-Bs 2011 ? Research problem important? Presentation English Language clear & suitable? Illustrations clear and suitable? Conformed to requirements as per template? Within 8 pages maximum (including References)? Contribution to new knowledge? Assessment Criteria

4 a b 5 a b c 6

Literature Review Comprehensive? (15%) Integrative and critical? (15%) Methodology Innovative? (10%) Clearly stated? (10%) Appropriate? (10%) Findings, Interpretations & Conclusions Warranted from the research and data collected? (35%) Applicability beyond the particular situation studied? (5%) Total Score (100%)

5 / 15 % 5 / 15 %

8 / 10 % 5 / 10 % 8 / 10 % 30 / 35 % 15 / 15 % 76 / 100 %

B) Your recommendations for publications in the Conference Proceedings ?

No. 1 2 3 4 Recommendation Accept as is or with only minor editorial changes (please indicate below or in the manuscript). Accept subject to minor or major modifications (please summarise needed modifications below). Revise and resubmit (please indicate what revisions are necessary before resubmission). Not suitable for AicE-Bs 2011 (please give justification). Tick ( / ) Why?

The writing should be restructured and refocused

C) Your recommendations for publications in our Journals?

No. 1a 1b 2 Recommendation Asian Journal of Environment-Behaviour Studies (ajE-Bs) Journal of ASIAN Behavioural Studies (jABs) Not suitable for publications (please give justifications) Tick ( / ) Why?

Too common practice, do not contribute any new approach

Note: ajE-Bs focuses on issues pertaining to human spatial behaviour environment interrelationship jABs focuses on issues pertaining to general human behaviour. D) Additional Comments? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ * Please note that these comments will go verbatim to the author(s). If you wish to make any additional or private comments to the Conference Secretariat, please put these in the body of the email, not this attachment.

AicE-Bs 2011Famagusta

http://fspu.uitm.edu.my/cebs Asia Pacific International Conference on Environment-Behaviour Studies

Salamis Bay Conti Resort Hotel, Famagusta, N. Cyprus, 7-9 December 2011
Tel: (006) 03 55211541; Mobile: (006) 017-3864297; Fax: (006) 03-55444353; Email: cebsuitmconf@gmail.com

Theme: Quality of Life & Environment

Please add additional comments to help the Author(s) to improve the paper. Please indicate if they are must change or nice to change. Without compromising quality, we are trying to maintain the length of the Full Papers to a maximum of 8 pages; please indicate where and how the paper could be shortened (eg, text, illustrations or tables eliminated or condensed). Comments for the Author(s)*: 1. The literature review should be rewrite to backup the approach being undertaken by the research (collaborative work in planning park) 2. The meaning of green technology being practiced should be described and explained so that it does not mislead the readers 3. The title should be defined more clearly, whether about the design practice of green technology or creating liveable cities or planning a park 4. Sentences and paragraphs should be rewrite in order to build coherency throughout the paper 5. Pursue to construct a logic relation of data gathered to the issue raised in literature review, in which it becomes a reasonable and focused conclusion

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ * Please note that these comments will go verbatim to the author(s). If you wish to make any additional or private comments to the Conference Secretariat, please put these in the body of the email, not this attachment.