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Specific Purpose : Central Idea : Thesis Statement :

To persuade my audience that charity event is a fundraiser held specifically for the purpose of raising money for a specific cause. To tell more about the charitable efforts made by Loreal Paris to help people in need of financial support and assistance of volunteers. The 3 major charity event organized by Loreal Paris, Loreal does its part to help Haiti Earthquake victims. Then, Charity haircut, hairdresses against AIDS, and AWW partner with Loreal Paris Charity Auction. This Endeavour Loreal Paris shows how concerned they are to the people in the world to ensure that they can enjoy a peaceful and prosperous life.

Main Point : I) LOreal Malaysia recently began a fundraising drive for the Haiti earthquake victims. a) The campaign, themed Rebuilding Lives in Haiti, was organised by the Humanitarian Organisation Islamic Relief Malaysia (IRM), with support from the Malaysia National News Agency (Bernama) and 21 other corporate partners. b) The one-month campaign, which started on 29 Jan 2010, aims to raise RM250,000. LOreal Malaysia has donated RM15,000, to be given to Islamic Relief Malaysia, through Bernama, as a support for the Haiti Earthquake Appeal campaign. c) LOreal Paris as a global company, we have a pledged to support the Haiti victims. What we have done globally donate 500,000 euros to the Haiti Relief Fund. Loreal as a company, believes that we want to be a great citizen of the world. II) SUPER hair cut at RM15 in aid of the Malaysian Aids Council (MAC). a) This event organized by Loreal Foundation sees in Malaysia, Loreals 5 Artistic Ambassadors from Kevin Woo, Albert Nico, Andy Chan, Miko Au and Simon Au who was on hand to launch this event this morning. They also cut up local celebrities like Attilia, Chelsia Ng, Chermaine Poo, Jojo Struys, Genevieve Sambhi and Mynn from Red FMs tresses.

b) A team of 10 hairdressers are at One Utama, to help you get your hair done and
believe me, it may be charity but they dont take any short cuts. Full attention was give to my tresses by Keith form Albert Nicos Boutique Salon. This will be the 10th Hairdressers Against Aids celebration to organized a Charity.

III) A host of famous Australian faces have united to support ovarian cancer research in a stunning fashion-inspired cover story in The Australian Women's Weekly this month. a) The July issue cover story is brought to life thanks to a unique partnership between L'Oreal Paris and The Weekly in proud support of ovarian cancer and the Ovarian Cancer Research Foundation (OCRF).

b) In a stunning fashion spread, television personalities Catriona Rowntree, Livinia


Nixon, Rebecca Gibney, Chris Bath, Lucinda Dunn, Jessica Marais and Lisa McCune have come together to be photographed wearing one-off designer gowns inspired by the signature colour of the OCRF (silver). Conclusion : In conclusion, charity event organized by Loreal Paris help others to added

their value in life and give them support to survive in this world. In addition, based on this charity event we can see how concern Malaysian folks towards other people without differentiate their races or religion. Its shows high sympathy value among the people.

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