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Thesis statement

: there are five reasons why abortion is very important for woman.s

a. Become method of birth control b. For womans health especially has trouble in her uterus Serviks Cancer Caesar operation Sickness like hypertension, toxemia, diabetes, epilepsy, c. Economy factor like husband and wife unwilling have baby because of trouble in their cost of living although their use contraception but failed d. Psychology factor like woman was dishonored and must to guarantee with that. its possible victim dishonored with sibling (incest) or daughter dishonored with her father, foster father or family e. Depression, its mean that her mother was depression and cannot to care with her uterus, cannot care with herself.

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bortion has many negative effects for womans health. Woman risk their health and lives in bearing the operation and its consequences. The most common are inflammation, interruption of menstrual patterns, infertility,

complications

endometriosis, myoma of the uterus and may other kinds of ovary illness. But in other way, I say that abortion should you do. Firstly, for womans health it means that woman especially has trouble in her uterus like Serviks Cancer and Sickness like hypertension (blood pressure that is higher than is normal) , toxemia (infection of the blood by harmful bacteria), diabetes (medical condition cause by a lack of insulin, which make the patient produce a lot of urine and feel very thirsty), epilepsy (disorder of the nervous system that causes a person to become

unconscious suddenly, often with violent movements of the body) . They are should do abortion because intimidate her health like to murder babe in uterus, make disfigurement for babe or baby. For example: woman struck with diabetes. When she pregnant and struck with diabetes and makes her baby was struck too or physical defect like babys head bigger than is normal it because has a lot of sugar liquid in babys head. Secondly, psychology factor like woman was dishonored and must to be responsible with it. In her psychology, they are not being ready to pregnant because of so young and must to continue her study and victim was dishonored with her sibling. They was shy with her friend because was pregnant. For example, one girl, 15 years old was dishonored with her father namely incest until he was pregnant. In medical science, incest was banned because to threaten babys safety. Why to threaten babys safety? Because if daughter married with her father or brother married with sister makes trouble with babys health. Look at this!

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Sister (White skin, straight long black hair, asthma)


maried

Brother (White skin, straight short hair, asthma) Baby Certain has asthma and white skin

It means that, the girl has characteristic like white skin, straight long black hair and asthma married with boy has characteristic like white skin, straight short hair and asthma. So domain characteristic in their baby are asthma and white skin, white skin is good but for asthma? Its so poor for baby because has acute asthma and to affect in their life (their child). Thirdly, depression it means that woman was depression because has trouble with herself like cannot to care with her body especially uterus when she being pregnant and cannot control her emotion so to endanger for her babe or her baby. Moreover, woman depression because her husband was abandon herself and to influence her mind. For example, a wife was deposited with her husband because her husband was married again or other woman. In that situation, wife was pregnant and make she confuse and depression. She cannot control herself and felt is babe makes her husband was remained her like she to poison her babe. After her birthing, she looks abnormal baby. Thinking, if there are a lot of abnormal people live and cannot do anything because not has skill or the country not have institute to accommodate abnormal people. I think, country because poor country and undeveloped. Fourth, because economy factor. It means that husband and wife unwilling have baby because had trouble in their cost of living. Normally, they making love and not used contraception or use contraception but failed and then make wife pregnant and when she was birthing. They have money to defrayed pee in place which birthing like in hospital, childbearing place, etc. One way can be do is to leave baby in hospital or orphanage and its be very awful is parent to kill their baby or vend their baby with someone who want baby
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like human tracking. Impossible if someone wants to care for baby because if you want to adopt baby, you should have legal agreement (put signature between a real parents and parents who want to adopt baby, there are many statement to say that real parents to consign their baby for adopted parents, etc) because if the adopted parents not have agreement with real parents, maybe when the child was grow and stay with adopted parents (become adopted child). Suddenly real parent come and want to pick up their child again. Adopted parent not have evidence to adopt that child. Its so poor if parents kill their child because of money. Especially for parent who to mutilate their baby like meat and throw in another place. In the last is become method of birth control. Government was very confused with birth rate especially for country which the have a lot of citizen. Lot of methods to control it like family planning (just only have two children every family), used contraception when have sex. But still birth rate more than death rate. The last choice is Abortion is one of method to use to control birth rate. So in conclusion, abortion should do. Why? because to kept womans health especially for woman who is sickness like diabetes, serviks cancer, epilepsy and of course for woman was depression because to influence their live in the next time.

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