Unit Six :

Delete Redundant and

Needless Phrases


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It is well known that a majority of
Taguchi method applications have
the capacity for addressing a
single-response problem.

: Most Taguchi method
applications can address a
single-response problem.
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It may be said that computers have
the ability to incorporate kinds of
equipment in order that the user is
in a position to interact with the
computer.

: Computers can
incorporate equipment so that
the user can interact with the
computer.


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It is the operator who makes a
determination of the questions as
to the phase should be
implemented.

: The operator determines
whether to implement the phase.






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There is a guideline that
makes a provision of the
necessary requirements.

: A guideline provides
the requirements.
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It has been found that any error
that might happen will be more
destructive in light of the fact that
XYZ applications is in a position to
make direct calls to the hardware.

: Any possible error will be
more destructive since XYZ
applications can make direct
calls to the hardware.


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It has long been known that the
logon between the workstation and
NT server is encrypted considering
the fact that an eavesdropper
actually wants to gain the ID and
password.
: The logon between the
workstation and NT server is
encrypted because an
eavesdropper wants to gain the
ID and password.

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It is our opinion that Windows 95 is
for all intents and purposes a good
operating system in a situation in
which the user has many
requirements.

: We believe that Windows
95 is a good operating system
when the user has many
requirements.

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It is possible that the error affects
the necessary requirements when
attempting to ascertain the location
of the variables.

: The error might affect the
requirements when attempting
to find the variables.
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It is noted that 10Mbps network
cards are basically becoming
obsolete for the reason of their
slow data transfer rates.

: 10Mbps network cards
are becoming obsolete because
of their slow data transfer rates.



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It is interesting to note that
monitoring features in most cases
inform the user provided that a
performance bottleneck occurs.

: Notably, (OR
Interestingly,) monitoring
features usually inform the user
if a performance bottleneck
occurs.
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