Composition II

Process Analysis Paragraph

What Is a Process Analysis?

When a writer lists the steps involved in how to accomplish something, he is outlining a process.
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A process can be a series of actions, changes, steps, operations, or functions that achieve a particular end or result. A process essay focuses on the how rather than the what. If the audience is not well informed about the subject, the process will have to be detailed. If the audience is well informed, then the process will have more technical vocabulary and less detail.
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Some process essays provide information while others provide steps on how to do something.
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Whether the essay provides information or tells someone how to do something, the essay must follow a logical procedure. All items must follow an order, such as what you do first, second, and third.
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Example
Things to do if you have flu (How to recover the flu) Braimstorming What do you do when you have the flu? Drink lots of fluids (water hot tea etc.) Take medicine Get plenty of sleep See the doctor

Topic Sentence: Recovering from the flu may not be easy but there are several things that you can do to help relieve the symptoms. Process 1 Drink lots of fluids -Water, hot tea etc. to relieve sore throat 2 Take medicine Carefully choose type: are you allergic to any ingredients Daytime nighttime?: can make you drowsy:

Unit 8, Page 99
Topic: Preparing an interview (what you do) lControlling Idea: Getting the job you want (Why you do it)
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How to Write a Process Analysis Paper

Step one: Choose an interesting and informative topic. There are a wide variety of topics dealing with an invention, a scientific process, a mechanical process, or a natural process.

Examples: lHow was the universe formed? lHow did the American Civil War begin? lHow was penicillin invented? lHow is liquor made? lHow does one fix a carburetor? lHow can one make an enchilada?
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Step two:

2. Divide the process into a few main steps and describe each step clearly, making sure that all essential technical terminology is defined. The pattern of a Process Analysis paragraph looks like this, with all steps arranged in proper order:

Topic Sentence l1. Step 1 l2. Step 2 l3. Step 3 lConcluding Sentence
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Step three:

Show the end result of the process.

Topic sentence
Present the process your attitude towards the process. lTell why you tell the process: What will the reader do at the end? lNumber of the steps may be included.
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A process paragraph or essay is organized chronologically. Chronological order adds coherence to the essay. You must present the steps in the correct order.
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I should be able to recreate the process that you describe.

Transitions
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First, second, next, now, then, finally, before, after, once, as soon as, while, during, over, between + noun phrase

How to succeed in the ESL program How to stay in a relationship How to speak English quickly How to begin taking classes at BCC Getting good tips while you work as a waiter or waitress lHow to make friends in the U.S.A

What is Process Analysis Paragraph

You divide a process into separate steps Explain the steps in chronological, or time order Ends with a specific result- something that happens at the end of the process

A process analysis paragraph

Explains a sequence or process Presents facts and details in chronological order Uses time words or phrases Ends with a specified result

A process paper either tells the reader how to do something or describes how something is done.

So, think about your topic . . . .

#1. What process are you trying to explain? Why is it important?

#2 Who or what does the process affect?

#3 Are there different ways of doing the process? If so, what are they?

#4 Who are the readers? What knowledge do they need to understand this process?

#5 What skills/equipment are needed for this?

#6 How long does this process take? Is the outcome always the same?

#7 How many steps are there in the process?

#8 Why is each step important?

#9 What difficulties are involved in each step? How can they be overcome?

#10 Do any cautions need to be given?

#11 Does the process have definitions that need to be clarified?

#12 Are there other processes that are similar and could help illustrate the process that you are writing about?

Process papers are often written in the second person (you), but some teachers prefer that you avoid this.
Yes, for me you may use 2nd person!

Unit 8, Page 100-101

Outline of a (how-to) process paragraph lTS:Careful preparation before an interview is the key to get the job. l1. Employer l2. Talents l3. List of the questions l4. Rehearsal l5. Outfit lConcluding Sentence
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Appropriate level of technicality Write for general readers unless you know readers have the relevant background and skills; do three things: 1. Give enough background so readers understand why they should follow your instructions. People who know why they are doing something usually do a better job than those who don't.

Appropriate level of technicality

2. Give appropriately detailed explanations so that reader can understand what the instructions say to do.

3. Give examples that will show readers how to follow the procedure correctly.

Chapter 8; Page 101

T.S: Many experts believe that recovery from addiction, whether alcohol or drugs, has f 1. Admission of the problem 1.1 desire to quit 1.2 seek help 1.2.1 AA 1.2.2. Treatment groups 2. Withdrawal 2.1 stops using substance 2.2 a physical emotional painful experience 3. Positive changes 3.1 ways of spending time 3.2 finding pleasures 3.3 care for body 3.4 family & friends 4. Staying off drugs (open-ended) Concluding Sentence: rewards of self-esteem ...

Chapter 8, Page 105: Outline of a process paragraph

T.S: If you want to overcome shyness and feel comfortable at any party, lyou can do it by following several steps. l1. Personal development 1.1 Consult a psychologist 1.2 Attend communication classes 1.3 Read self-development books 2. Practical exercises 2.1 Attend dancing courses/classes 2.2 House parties with close friends or family 2.2.1 Attend house parties 2.2.2 Organize house parties 2.3 Rehearse in front of the mirror 2.3.1 Smile while speaking 2.3.2 Breath regularly 2.3.3 Watch your body language (Beden dilini dikkatli kullan) 3. Outlook 3.1 Hair 3.2 Make-up 3.3 Attractive outfit 3.3.1 Elegant dressing 3.3.2 attractive accessories C.S.: By following these steps you will make sure that you become the most popular person in any party.
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Assignment Due 15 March 2012

Write a topic sentence by filling in the blanks and make an outline of a process paragra lThen write the paragraph. lThe assignments should be written in the form published on the link. If the link does no lhttp://www.mersindilbilim.info/courses/1st-year/spring/composition-ii/
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