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GRAZY SOUZA
1. Planilha de Correo
Letra,
Margens,
Translineao.
10%
= NR + 10%
1. Como Redigir?
1.1. Introduo 1 Pargrafo.
1.1.1.Tema da Atualidade sem Roteiro (Cesgranrio, FCC, IADES, QUADRIX).
Tema: Sistema prisional brasileiro em questo.
Cabe ao candidato criar os argumentos.
Deve possui no mximo sete linhas, tendo no mnimo dois pontos finais (dois
perodos).
Como fazer:
Argumento 1
Essa afirmao...
Esse posicionamento... ... ocorre devido ...
Esse fato...
Essa ideia...
Argumento 2
Argumento 3
Exemplo:
Tema: Violncia e insegurana
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A violncia e a insegurana reafirmam o grande desafio da sociedade
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no
cenrio atual. Esse posicionamento ocorre devido ao de grupos
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organizados,
falta de uma polcia especializada e ausncia de polticas
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pblicas
no trato ao problema criminal.
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Como fazer:
Exemplo:
Tema: Violncia e insegurana
DESENVOLVIMENTO
1.1. Desenvolvimento 2, 3 e 4 Pargrafos.
Voc pode ter todos os trs pargrafos do desenvolvimento com at 7linhas
cada;
Voc pode t-los tambm com 5 a 6 linhas;
Voc s tem trinta linhas, organize-se.
1.1.1.2 Pargrafo:
Observa-se que...
Percebe-se que...
Nota-se que...
Exemplo:
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Observa-se que a criminalidade aumenta no Brasil, porque existem
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falhas
no processo de segurana pblica. Isso acarreta a sensao de falta de
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segurana
nas pessoas.
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1.1.1.3 Pargrafo:
Em consequncia disso...
dire
ou
Se for oposio ao
01.
Em contrapartida...
1.1.1.4 Pargrafo:
S existe se tiver roteiro com trs pontos para argumentar.
Soma da ideia do 2 e 3.
Vale ressaltar que...
Vale lembrar que...
1.1.1.Convite
Assim, preciso que ___________ e ___________ tenham ___________
para isso ___________ .
2. Aspectos gramaticais parte I
2.1. No utilize repetio de palavras. Para isso, use os processos de coeso:
2.1.1.Este, esta, isto antecipar o que ainda no foi dito ou retomar o ltimo
elemento citado.
2.1.2.Esse, essa, isso retoma o que j foi dito.
ASSUNTOS
ESPECFICOS E ESTUDO
DE CASO
1. Tipos de Provas
1.1. Tema especfico do Edital:
Texto 1: O Estatuto da Criana e do Adolescente ECA. Em face do tema acima redija
um texto dissertativo acerca do seguinte tema:
Aspectos criminais do Estatuto da Criana e do adolescente. Aborde necessariamente:
- Distino entre criana e adolescente;
- adolescente preso por ato infracional pode ser transportado em compartimento
fechado de veculo policial?
- o adolescente preso por ato infracional poder ser liberado com a presena dos pais
ou de um dos responsveis?
1 Pargrafo Apresente uma definio geral sobre o assunto que norteia as
respostas aos quesitos. Utilize, no mximo, cinco linhas.
:
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O Estatuto da Criana e do Adolescente (ECA) foi criado criou-se para
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regulamentar as condutas das crianas e dos adolescentes com fulcro no art.
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227 da Constituio Federal de 1988 (CF/88).
Comecei usando os parnteses ento em busca do paralelismo sinttico
melhor continuar usando o mesmo recurso para situaes iguais a essas.
Prefira sempre parnteses travesso.
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Por fim, os pais do adolescente apreendido em flagrante poder lev-lo
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para
casa desde que o ato cometido por ele no seja de grave ameaa. Caso
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seja,
ele s poder ser liberado com a autorizao do juiz.
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5 Pargrafo
(Concluso) Esse o tipo do texto que no d pra fazer uma
concluso, tendo em vista que no h concluso a se chegar.
Texto completo:
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O Estatuto da Criana e do Adolescente (ECA) foi criado criou-se para
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regulamentar as condutas das crianas e dos adolescentes com fulcro no art.
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227 da Constituio Federal de 1988 (CF/88).
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Relativamente ao que concerne lei citada, criana aquela com idade
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entre zero a doze anos, j adolescente o de doze a dezoito anos incompleto.
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Vale ressaltar ainda que ( especificar com base na lei).
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No que diz respeito ao transporte de adolescentes em compartimento
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fechado de veculo policial, o Eca probe expressamente tal conduta porque
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fere dispositivos previstos no art. 178 da referida lei, que diz ferir a integridade
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fsica ou mental do adolescente.
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Por fim, os pais do adolescente apreendido em flagrante poder lev-lo
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para casa desde que o ato cometido por ele no seja de grave ameaa. Caso
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seja, ele s poder ser liberado com a autorizao do juiz.
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Tcio e Mvio encontram-se com Maria e Joana, ambas de catorze ano.
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Esta
se encontra completamente embriagada. Os rapazes ofereceram carona s
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moas
e, nesse momento desviam o carro para um lugar ermo. Havendo, nesse
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local,
a relao sexual daqueles com estas.
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No que diz respeito s definies de estupro e atentado violento ao pudor,
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CP estipula que para aquele (... resposta ao tpico)
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Nesse contexto, h de observar-se que a presuno de violncia (...resposta
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ao
tpico)
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5 Pargrafo Aproximadamente 7 linhas.
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Por fim, no que diz respeito ao concurso de pessoas (...resposta ao tpico)
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Onde
Que
Gerndio
Paralelismo Sinttico
Citao de leis
Siglas e abreviaes
Artigo Art. 1 ao 9, 10, 11, 12, ...
Pargrafo 1 ao 9, 10, 11, 12, ...
Obs.:
Se o pargrafo for nico dever ser escrito por extenso pargrafo nico.
S se inicia por letra maiscula se estiver iniciando frase. No decorrer do texto deve
ser escrito todo com letra minscula.
QUESTO DISCURSIVA
E PARECER
1. Questo discursiva
CESPE Em reas de TI;
FCC Qualquer rea;
FGV Qualquer rea;
Provas da rea jurdica
2. Parecer
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Parecer N
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Ementa:
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Redator:
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Nota Tcnica:
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Processo N:
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I. Apresentao
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II. Fundamentao
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III. Concluso opinativa
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o parecer
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Local e data
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Assinatura
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Em Redao Discursiva
1 Pargrafo Narre o caso a ser analisado:
Comece por:
Trata-se o presente parecer de (narre o fato de forma resumida).
Desenvolvimento Opinio fundamentada com base terica sobre erros e
acertos. a sua anlise do fato acima.
1. Escrevendo
1.1. Discursiva
FGV Senado: Em 20linhas.
Fale sobre a improbidade administrativa tendo por base a lei que a
regulamenta e os fundamentos bsicos constitucionais.
1 Pargrafo definio de improbidade e da lei;
2 Pargrafo Art. 37 da CF/88;
Para
Casa
ASPECTOS
GRAMATICAIS FINAIS
1. Aspectos Gramaticais.
O jornalista que redigiu a mensagem que foi veiculada no jornal que circulou na
mdia recebeu o prmio que todos almejavam.
Repetio do que - pronome relativo:
Na prtica:
Em virtude dos fatos mencionados, fica evidente que o sistema prisional precisa ser
Conjuno Integrante
reformado. necessrio que haja uma poltica prisional que funcione, que os presos sejam
Conjuno Integrante
Pronome relativo
Conjuno Integrante
tratados com dignidade, que sejam punidos, mas no vingados e que tenham o direito a
Conjuno Integrante
Conjuno Integrante
Em virtude dos fatos mencionados, fica evidente a reforma do sistema prisional. necessrio
haver uma poltica prisional que funcione, os presos sejam tratados com dignidade; sejam
punidos, mas no vingados e tenham o direito a atividades que realmente os reabilitem.