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INGLS

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TRANSLATION - PART A
Iquitos, once a boom town, lies more than 2,000 miles from the mouth of the Amazon,
yet here the river is still more than half a mile wide. You are deep in the steaming jungle. On
both banks, rainforest comes tipping down to the water in a rough and tumble of vegetation
sporting a million shades of green. Piranhas teem in the shallows while alligators idle on the
banks. Birds of iridescent colours cackle and croak, whistle and squawk. Three-toed sloths
lounge leisurely in the branches and monkeys career headlong through the treetops.
Into the midst of all this unbridled wildness there looms a floating incongruity in the
discordant guise of a new three-storey luxury cruise boat. Aria, a 150-foot long glasshouse, is
plying the waters around Iquitos at a point on the Amazon where Brazilian and Peruvian naval
bases flaunt the armed flotillas farthest inland anywhere in the world. Luxury here spells everything the jungle is not: air conditioned, bug-, mud- and snake-free, comfortable and clean.
Internet: <http://www.spectator.co.uk/supplements/the-spectator-guide-tocruises/7238013/its-a-jungle-out-there/> Retrieved on 13/9/2013.

Translate into Portuguese the previous excerpt adapted from Peter Hughes' article "It's a
jungle out there", published in The Spectator on 17th September 2011.
[valor: 20 pontos]

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ALEXANDRE PIANA LEMOS (17/20)

Iquitos, que j foi uma cidade de economia pujante, localiza-se a mais de 2.000 milhas
da embocadura do Amazonas. No entanto, o rio aqui ainda apresenta uma largura de mais de
meia milha. Voc encontra-se em plena selva sufocante. Nas duas margens, a floresta tropical
invade a gua com uma vegetao abundante que ostenta uma milho de tonalidades de verde. Piranhas pululam nas reas rasas, ao passo que jacars descansam nas margens. Pssaros
de mltiplas cores cacarejam e arrulham, assobiam e piam. Lesmas de trs dedos estendem-se
langorosamente nos galhos e macacos saltitam entre os cumes das rvores.
Em meio a toda essa natureza irrefrevel, espreita uma presena flutuante que destoa
do meio, na forma de um cruzeiro de luxo de trs andares. Aria, uma casa de vidro de 150 ps,
est percorrendo as guas em torno de Iquitos, em um ponto do Amazonas em que as bases
navais de Brasil e de Peru ostentam suas frotas armadas, adentrando o territrio mais que em
qualquer outra parte do mundo. O luxo, aqui, representado por um ambiente climatizado,
confortvel e limpo, livre de insetos, de lama ou de serpentes. Em suma, tudo aquilo que a
selva no .

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PEDRO MEIRELLES REIS SOTERO DE MENEZES (17/20)

Iquitos, que j foi uma cidade dinmica e em expanso, fica a mais de 2,000 milhas da
foz do Amazonas, ainda assim aqui o rio continua com uma largura de mais de meia milha.
Voc est imerso na selva profunda, quente e abafada. Em ambas as margens a floresta tropical chega at a gua em um emaranhado de vegetao, exibindo um milho de tons de verde.
Piranhas se aglomeram nas partes rasas, enquanto crocodilos deitam ociosamente nas margens. Pssaros de cores iridescentes gorjeiam, coalham, assoviam e gralham. Preguias com
seus trs dedos repousam aprazivelmente nos galhos e macacos se atiram com mpeto entre
as copas das rvores.
Em meio a toda essa natureza selvagem encontra-se uma incongruidade flutuante, na
figura de uma embarcao de cruseiros, nova, luxuosa e dotada de trs andares. Aria, uma
estrutura envidraada de 150 ps, est singrando as guas ao redor de Iquitos, em um local da
Amaznia onde bases navais brasileiras e peruanas exibem as flotilhas armadas mais distantes
da costa no planeta. O luxo aqui demonstra tudo aquilo que a selva no : climatizada, livre de
insetos, lama e cobras, confortvel e limpa.

Comentrios
Erro de pontuao - falta de vrgula.

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HEITOR FIGUEIREDO SOBRAL TORRES (16,5/20)

Iquitos, uma cidade que j esteve em plena ascenso, localiza-se a mais de 2000 milhas
de distncia da foz do rio Amazonas, mas, mesmo assim, o rio apresenta, aqui, mais de meia
milha de largura. Voc est nas profundezas de uma selva sufocante. Nas duas margens, a
floresta tropical chega a arquear at a gua, com uma selvagem e pendente vegetao que
possui um milho de tons de verde. As piranhas so abundantes nas partes mais rasas do rio,
enquanto jacars repousam nas margens. Pssaros de cores exuberantes piam e cantam, assobiam e berram. Preguias de trs dedos descansam relaxadamente nos galhos e macacos
avanam verticalmente pela copa das rvores.
No meio de todo esse espao selvagem e intocado assoma uma incongruncia flutuante na forma dissonante de um novo cruzeiro de luxo com trs andares. Aria, uma estrutura de
vidro com 150 ps de comprimento, est navegando as guas ao redor de Iquitos em um ponto do rio Amazonas no qual as bases navais brasileiras e peruanas abrigam as flotilhas armadas
mais distantes do mar do que em qualquer lugar do mundo. O luxo, aqui, evidencia tudo o que
a selva no : dotada de ar-condicionado, livre de insetos, de lama e de cobras, confortvel e
limpa.

Comentrios
Erro de pontuao - falta de vrgula.

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MENOR NOTA (4,5/20)

Iquitos, outrora uma cidade pujante, localiza-se mais de 2000 milhas de distncia em
relao ao centro da Amaznia, mesmo assim, aqui, o rio tem, ainda, mais de meia milha de
largura. Voc est nas profundezas da floresta fechada. Em ambas as margens, a floresta equatorial chega a tocar a gua em uma rstica resplandecncia de vegetao que apresenta uma
milho de tons de verde. Piranhas agrupam-se nas guas escuras, enquanto jacars repousam
nas margens. Pssaros de cores candentes fazem barulhos estridentes, gorjeiam, cantam e
sarapateiam. Garas danam, prazeirosamente, nos manguezais e macacos fazem filas em
direo ao topo das rvores.
No meio de toda essa vida selvagem sem limites, l, aparece uma incongruncia a flutuar na perspectiva discordante de um novo cruzeiro luxuoso de trs compartimentos. ria,
um navio de vidro de 150 ps de extenso, remanesce sobre as guas prximas a Iquitos em
um ponto da Amaznia no qual as bases navais brasileiras e peruanas dispem de flotilhas
armadas em uma regio mais central em um continente do que em qualquer outro lugar do
mundo. Luxo, aqui, significa tudo aquilo que a floresta no : ar condicionado, ausncia de
mosquitos, de lama, e de cobras, limpeza e conforto.

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TRANSLATION - PART B
Os pases da Amrica se unem hoje com um sentimento comum de satisfao para
comemorar o primeiro aniversrio da Declarao de Paz do Itamaraty, de 17 de fevereiro de
1995, que restabeleceu a confiana e a amizade entre dois povos irmos.
Esse o caminho: o dilogo, nunca a confrontao; a razo, jamais a fora. Sero, por
certo, desafiadoras essas negociaes. A agenda densa e os temas se entrelaam numa teia
de condicionantes mltiplos. Acima de tudo, ser preciso saber projetar uma viso de futuro,
inspirada no interesse de longo prazo dos dois pases. Uma viso que enfrente o desafio de
buscar formas, mais do que de convivncia pacfica, de desenvolvimento solidrio. Esse processo, de dimenso histrica, dever proporcionar que as Partes se sintam estimuladas a assumir, de forma gradual e progressiva, as tarefas e responsabilidades de, conjuntamente, assegurarem no to somente a paz na regio como tambm o desenvolvimento e o progresso
social.
Source: Resenha de Poltica Exterior do Brasil, nmero 78, 1 semestre de 1996, pp 37-38

Translate into English the excerpt above adapted from a speech delivered by the Brazilian
Minister of State for External Relations, Ambassador Lus Felipe Lampreia, in Braslia on February 16th, 1996.
[valor: 15 pontos]

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FERNANDA CARVALHO DAL PIAZ (9/15)

Today, the American countries are reunited, with a shared feeling of satisfaction, to
celebrate the first anniversary of Itamaratys Peace Declaration, signed on February 17th, 1995,
which established trust and friendship between two brotherly peoples.
This is the way: dialogue, never confrontation; reason, never force. These negotiations will certainly be challenging. The agenda is dense and the themes are mixed together in a
web of multiple variables. Above all, knowing how to project a vision of the future, inspired in
the long-term interest of both countries, will be necessary. A vision that faces the challenge of
seeking new ways of solidary development, more than the peaceful relationship. This process,
of historic dimension, should make the Parties feel stimulated4 to take over, gradually and
progressively, the tasks and responsibilities to guarantee together not only the peace in the
region, but also the development and social progress.

Comentrios
124
A banca destacou essas palavras, mas no descontou pontos
Comentrio da banca: "a" peaceful relationship. A banca destacou, mas no descontou pontos.

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GUILHERME ESMANHOTTO (9/15)

The countries of America gather today with a common feeling of satisfaction to celebrate the first aniversary of the Declaration of Peace of the Itamaraty, of the 17th of February
of 1995, which restablished trust and friendship between two brother peoples.
This is the way: talk, and never confrontation; reason, and never force. These negotiations will certainly be defying. This agenda is dense and subjects intertwine on a web of multiple contingencies, Above all, one needs to know how to project a perspective of the future,
inspired on the long-term interests of both countries. A perspective that shall face the challenge of searching for forms of more than living together peacefully, forms of solidary development. This process, of historical proportions, shall allow the parts to feel encouraged to
assume, gradually and progressively, the tasks and responsibilities to, altogether, assure not
only Peace in the region, but also development and social progress.

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LETICIA DOS SANTOS MARRANGHELLO (9/15)

American countries get together today with a common feeling of satisfaction to celebrate the first anniversary of Itamaraty's Peace Declaration, of February 17th, 1995, which
established again trust and friendship between two close peoples.
This is the path: dialogue, never confrontation; reason, never force. These negotiations
will be challenging for sure. The agenda is dense, and the topics are entangled in a web of multiple conditioning factors. Above all, it will be necessary to know how to project a vision of the
future, inspired in both countries' long-term interests. A vision that faces the challenge of
seeking ways, more than peacefully living together, of solidary development. This process, of
historical dimension, will provide the Parties with a stimulus that will make them take, gradually and progressively, tasks and responsibilities of together assuring not only regional peace,
but also development and social progress.

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MENOR NOTA (0/15)

Americas countries unite today with a common feeling of satisfaction so as to celebrate the first anniversary of the Itamaraty Peace Declaration of February the seventeenth,
1995, which restablished the trust and the friendship between two sibling peoples.
This is the path: dialogue, never confrontation; reason, never strenght. These negotiations will be certainly challenging. The agenda is dense and the themes intertwine in a web in
a web of multiple conditionings. Above all, it will be needed to know how to project a view of
the future, inspired by the long term interest of both countries. A vision that faces the challenge of searching for forms, of more than pacific convivence, of solidary development. This
process, of historical dimension, should aid the Parts feel stimulated to assume, in a graded
and progressive way, the tasks and responsabilities of, together, securing not only peace in
the region, but also development and social progress.

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SUMMARY
A 700-kilometre march by indigenous protesters in Ecuador lasted two weeks before
reaching the capital Quito on 22 March 2012. It echoes previous marches in both Peru and
Bolivia against policies that pose a threat to indigenous communities.
The governments of all three Andean countries face criticism for policies designed to
boost investment but that fail adequately to address the concerns of local people, who claim
these projects threaten their physical and social environment.
Earlier in 2012, protesters from the northern Cajamarca region in Peru marched on
Lima, repudiating plans to build a giant new copper and gold-mining plant at Conga, a project
they say will affect water supplies to local communities.
These events are set against a background where, in all three countries, governments
elected with the support of indigenous populations have taken steps to enshrine indigenous
rights in their respective legal codes.
In Peru, these rights have recently been passed into law. Soon after his inauguration
as president in July 2011, Ollanta Humala passed a law making prior consultation a legal obligation. Elected on a leftwing ticket that supported indigenous rights, Humala was obliged to enact a law vetoed by his predecessor, Alan Garca Perez. In 2009, Garca had faced down protests in the northern town of Bagua as indigenous groups protested against plans to facilitate
hydrocarbons exploration and exploitation in the Amazon jungle. Some thirty people, including
police, were killed in the fray.
The governments of Bolivia, Peru and Ecuador reflect aspects of what has been called
the pink wave in Latin America, a reversion of the free-wheeling neo-liberal policies in vogue
up until the early years of the new millennium albeit to varying degrees. Bolivia and Ecuador
belong to the Bolivarian Alternative for the Americas (ALBA), spearheaded by President Hugo
Chvez of Venezuela. Both countries have pursued policies highly critical of the United States
ans its policies towards Latin America. For his part, Perus Humala came to power having previously established and led a highly nationalistic party which, in the elections of 2011, made
common cause with the parties of the Peruvian left. Since taking office, however, Humala has
abandoned much of his earlier leftist rhetoric.
In Peru traditional party elites had failed conspicuously to resolve the countrys
chronic economic and political problems, and were largely swept aside under the governments
of Alberto Fujimori (1990-2000). But Fujimoris departure from the scene did not lead to the
resurgence of partisan organisation. Even the Alianza Popular Revolucionaria Americana (Apra), which dates from the 1930s and was once Perus largest mass party, remained but a shadow of its former self; in the 2011 elections it won only four seats in the 130-seat unicameral
legislature.
All three presidents have had scope, therefore, to refashion their countrys electoral
politics since taking power. In Bolivia, despite some defections, the MAS has a clear majority in
both houses of the legislature, now known as the plurinational legislative assembly. With
only a modest presence, the opposition parties are effectively powerless to stop legislation.
Rafael Correas party, Alianza Pais (AP), has likewise enjoyed a working majority in
Ecuadors national assembly, although it has suffered some damaging defections in recent
times. The situation is different in Peru, where Humalas Gana Peru grouping did not win a
majority in the 2011 elections, but has since entered into alliances with centrist and centreright groupings which have(at least so far) afforded him parliamentary majorities.
All three presidents have managed to fashion good working relationships with their
armed forces, still and important factor of power in this part of Latin America. In each case,
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they have used their electoral prowess to push through changes at senior levels to garner support in the barracks.
Opinion-polls suggest support for Humala has risen strongly since his election in
2011; admiration for his young and attractive wife, Nadine, who has displayed some consummate political skills since becoming the first lady, makes her a political factor. It is too soon to
say what will happen when the presidents term ends in 2016. Humala has said he will not
stand, and he lacks the parliamentary strength to change the constitution to be able to do so;
but there are many who argue that he will seek to perpetuate his power by supporting the
candidacy of his wife. This would be to emulate the Argentine model, whereby Nstor Kirchner
was replaced as president by his wife, Cristina.
The future of mining and extractive industries more generally in Peru has become a
major source of political discord, of which the Congas dispute is but the latest of a series of
bitter confrontations. The Congas project involves the expansion of activities by Yanacocha,
Latin Americas largest gold producer. It is formed by a consortium of Newmont Mining (of the
United States), Buenaventura (a large Peruvian miner) and the International Finance Corporation (IFC), part of the World Bank. There has been a history of conflict between Yanacocha and
local community groups and farmers stretching back over most of the past decade. The latter
claim their livelihoods will be irretrievable damaged by the project.
Environmental impacts have been a major source of conflict between mining companies and communities throughout the Peruvian highlands. Several important projects have
been halted owing to local pressure, including Yanacochas Cerro Quilish scheme near Cajamarca city. Peru has seen an unprecedented expansion in mining and hydrocarbons projects
in recent years, attracting more investment than most other Andean countries. Often these
investments take place in remote areas where the state is virtually absent and where no other
legitimate entities are on hand to mediate disputes.
The president previously sided with local communities against extractive industries.
But Humala has found himself under huge pressure from pro-mining lobby groups and other
interested parties to shift his ground. Since his election victory, he has publically acknowledged
the need to continue to support mining investments but argued that the resources generated
thereby should be used to improve the living conditions of the poorest, including those living
in the areas surrounding mining camps. In December 2011, he dismissed many of the more
leftwing voices in his cabinet.
However, traditionally, the Peruvian state has proved unable to respond effectively
to such social needs, lacking the administrative machinery to achieve its ends. While social
spending has increased in recent years, the conditions of poverty in Perus interior have not
improved substantially. Considerable doubt thus remains as to whether Humala will succeed
where his predecessors failed.
John Crabtree. The New Andean politics: Bolivia, Peru, Ecuador. openDemocracy, 25 March 2012.
Internet: <http://www.opendemocracy.net/john-crabtree/new-andean-politics-bolivia-peru-ecuador>
Retrieved on 18/9/2013. John Crabtree is a research associate at Oxford University's Centre for Latin American
Studies, St. Anthony's College, Oxford University.

Write a summary, in your own words, in no more than 200 words, of the previous excerpt
adapted from John Crabtree's 2012 openDemocracy paper "The New Andean politics: Bolivia, Peru, Ecuador".
Extenso do texto: mximo de 200 palavras
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ALEXANDRE PIANA LEMOS (12,5/15)

Indigenous communities in Peru, Bolivia and Ecuador are protesting against policies
that may harm their traditions and the environment. Governments in these three countries
assumed power supported by those communities, but now are divided between the need to
develop and the demands of their peoples.
The three governments were elected to fight neo-liberalism in Latin America, following
the leftist trend of Hugo Chavez.
Ecuador's Rafael Correa, Bolivia's Evo Morales and Peru's Humala enjoy support both
from their armies and from their parliaments, so they can impose their will. In Peru, Humala`s
power may last, if his popular wife Nadine is elected in 2016.
The three presidents try to cater to their peoples' needs, but in Peru disputes between
local tribes and exctrative firms is particularly serious. Development projects in the region,
according to some communities, threaten the environment and their livelihoods. Initially,
Humala backed the protesters' demands, but egged on by the companies' pressure groups, he
has abandoned radical left-wing stances and supported projects that could improve life conditions. The Peruvian state record, however, suggests Humala may disappoint his people again.

* A palavra sublinhada foi destacada pela banca.

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FERNANDA CARVALHO DAL PIAZ (12/15)

Against the background of the pink wave in Latin America (where left-wing parties
have been reverting the neo-liberal policies of the 1930s), Peru, Bolivia and Ecuador are facing
popular protests against investments that disregard the interests of indigenous peoples. Recently, these governments were able to build Congressional majority to approve laws supporting the interests of indigenous groups, nevertheless policies to boost the economy are being
questioned.
Take Perus case. Pollsters indicate President Humala enjoys growing popular approval,
which may stimulate his plans to perpetuate in power. However, despite adopting a leftist
rhetoric during the presidential campaign, in which he affirmed he was against huge investments in mining and hydrocarbons in Perus highlands, he is now defending that such projects
could contribute to lifting people out of poverty.
Nevertheless, doubts abound over Perus ability to distribute wealth, due to the countrys traditional failure to meet its populations demands and the remoteness of the areas the
industries will be installed. Desagreement over the future of mining and extractive industries
and the environmental impacts that result from the exploitation is the order of the day.
Whether Humala will manage the conflict is still unknown.

Comentrios
Comentrio da banca: "majorities".
Comentrio da banca: "but".
Comentrio da banca: "who?".
* As palavras sublinhadas foram destacadas pela banca.
* Comentrio da banca: "concise summary, got most of the points, but some misplaced idiomatic expressions".

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IGOR ANDRADE VIDAL BARBOSA (12/15)

A series of protests have occurred in Ecuador, Peru and Bolivia against policies that
favor investment in detriment of the interests of indigenous communities. These policies have
been adopted despite the election of governments that try to protect indigenous rights. In
Peru, Ollanta Humala made prior consultation with indigenous groups a legal obligation.
The election of these governments reflect the so called pink wave in Latin America,
where neo-liberal policies, popular until the end of the 1990s, have been rejected.
The elected presidents have been able to transfom electoral policies in their countries.
In Bolivia, the MAS has a clear majority in the legislative assembly. In Ecuador, the AP has a
working majority, and in Peru, political alliances have given parliamentary majority to Gana
Peru. The presidents also have good relationships with their armed forces.
In Peru, Humala has gained public support since 2011. Since he cannot be reelected,
he might even support his wifes candidacy in 2016.
In Peru, the activities of mining and extractive industries have led to political discord.
Local community groups question the social and environmental impacts of some projects.
Humala argues that the resources that are generated can improve living conditions in Peru.

* A palavra sublinhada foi destacada pela banca.

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MENOR NOTA (5/15)

The conflict between indigenous populations and investment policies in the Andean
countries regarding Amazon resource exploitation has changed since previous years neoliberalism, even if confrontation, such as that of 2009s Congo, show its dangers. Today, popular anger against such policies is linked to a framework of at least nominally left-wing politicians. In Peru, traditional party politics suffered a major blowback as outsiders claimed both
power and legitimacy. A similar development also occurred in Bolivia and in Ecuador, where
leftists are even stronger. However, Perus leftist success has been halted by a lack of parliamentary support. Its president, Ollanta Humala, does not have the support so as to seek
reelection and may opt to put his popular wifes name on the ballots.
Economic imbroglios add up to Perus political struggles. Conflicts regarding oil extraction and gold mining put local farmers and environmentalists against partially foreign-owned
projects, such as the Yamacocha trust. Recently, investment has soared, mostly in remote hinterlands where State power is feeble. Even if Humala had previously supported locals claims,
he is now adopting a more pro-market stance. The question is whether his government will be
able to tackle poverty, especially in remote areas.

Comentrios
Comentrio da banca: "than what?".
Comentrio da banca: "he does have parliamentary support through alliances".
* As palavras sublinhadas foram destacadas pela banca.

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COMPOSITION
Perus government, like those in other emerging economies, sees development of
minerals and timber as the fastest way to lift the country out of poverty, particularly in the
countrys largely untouched Amazon region. In Peru, land ownership is private, but the government has full rights to the resources below ground - such as minerals, oil, and gas - and
above it - such as water, fish, and timber. In 2007, President Garcia infamously dismissed what
he called "the law of the dog in the manger, which says, 'If I do not do it, then let no one do
it.'" Without the state to give out concessions, Garcia wrote, the land would remain undeveloped, with "unused resources that cannot be traded, that do not receive investment, and do
not create jobs".
But indigenous groups and communities in the Amazon fear the government is engaged in a large-scale giveaway of their land to industry at the expense of their cultural heritage. "For the indigenous people, the land is sacred, but in [Western culture] the land is simply
a resource", said Roger Rumrill, an expert on the Amazons indigenous communities. The government recently created new concessions that would open up 70 percent of the Amazon to
oil and gas exploration, though many of these concessions havent been given out yet.
Toni Johnson. Peru's mineral wealth and woes, Council on Foreign Relations, 10th February 2010.
Internet: <http://www.cfr.org/peru/perus-mineral-wealth-woes/p21408#p4> Retrieved on 19/9/2013.

Weigh up the potential benefits and drawbacks of Peru opening up and developing its Amazon region.
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IRINA FEISTHAUER SILVEIRA (43/50)

It stands to reason that the Amazon region is rich in natural resources, such as minerals, water and great biodiversity, which become more essential every day. The use of these
resources can lead to the countries of the Amazon region, namely Peru, to achieve improved
development levels. Nevertheless, depending on how the resources are managed, their exploitation can lead to unmitigated disaster, both for the environment and for local people. In this
sense, Peru does not have to maintain the Amazon region untouched, what it needs to do is
create basis for sustainable development projects.
Peru is a developing country which needs to improve its populations living standards.
Since its territory includes part of the Amazon forest, it can use the potential of the region to
develop profitable activities that not only could increase its GDP, but also would create jobs
and, in some cases, foster innovation. The regions biodiversity, for example, can be used to
produce cosmethics and new drugs and, therefore, help the country develop an industry related thereto.
However, there is more to the issue than meets the eye. By developing its Amazon region, Peru can seriously dammage the regions environment and destroy the culture of indigenous groups that inhabit the forest. Despite being rich, the Amazon environment is fragile.
Careless exploitation will cause irreversible harm to the forests soil and, consequently, to its
vegetation, climate and fauna. Furthermore, indigenous people who are already threatened by
the Western way of life, are deeply connected to the environment and risk disappearing if
the forest does so. Their ancient knowledge and culture would be forever lost.
For these reasons, Perus government must find balance between developing the region and not causing harm to the environment or to local groups and their culture. A Brazilian
specialist in the Amazon region, Bertha Becker, believes that this balance is possible. She states
that the government must pave the way to sustained development by integrating local people
in projects which use the regions resources in a well balanced way. This model can also be
applied to Peru. It is important that the government creates laws to regulate the use of natural
resources in the region and mechanisms to guarantee that such laws are observed. Moreover,
the government itself can develop projects in the region to set examples of good practices.
By developing the Amazon region, the Peruvian government can surpass its present
development level and offer better living standards to its population. Nonetheless, these projects will only bear fruit if the region is developed in a sustainable way, with all due respect to
its environment and local population

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ALEXANDRE PIANA LEMOS (42/50)

Peru is a resource-rich country and its Amazon region offers unique opportunities for
the nations development. Yet, recent projects to tap into the region`s minerals and timber
have been met with fierce resistance. Indigenous groups and local communities fear that their
cultural heritage is under threat. To a great extent, however, these worries are unwarranted.
There is no contradiction between responsible resource exploration and the rights of local
tribes. Opening up the Amazon provides Peru with a unique opportunity for Peru. The Amazon`s resources and biodiversity could lift millions out of poverty and contribute to developing
the nation.
Mining and extractive industries in Peru have been fuelling protests. Local communities believe their cultural heritage and traditional ways of life are at risk. Given Peruvian government`s record of utter disregard towards their own people, these worries are reasonable.
But exploration of resources is not tantamount to environmental damage. Responsible firms
acting under strict regulations could contribute to improving the life conditions of the downtrodden in the country.
Indigenous communities in Peru lack jobs and live in extreme poverty. Opening up the
Amazon to foreign investment could provide a livelihood for millions. Admittedly, there are
always risks of environmental damage. Nonetheless, setting up protected zones and natural
reserves should guarantee the survival of ancient traditions, while firms operating under environmental regulations could offer jobs and opportunities for the destitute. At the Rio+20 conference, world leaders agreed that environmental policies should foster development. Keeping
Peruvian resources intact, while millions are starving, is pure nonsense.
Moreover, developing the Amazon is not tantamount to destroying the environment.
As Bertha Becker argued, value needs to be added to the standing forest. Peru`s biodiversity
should be tapped through clean-mechanism projects, which could generate much of the
wealth the country so badly needs. Pharmaceutical companies would be eager to aid Peruvians
in this task. But only if Peru opens up its Amazon region to research and investment.
It would be ill-advised to isolate Peru`s Amazon from the world. Biodiversity and mineral riches are the world`s most valuable assets in our days, and Peru has plenty of them to
offer. The very indigenous groups and communities that shudder at the risks of opening up the
Amazon are likely to benefit from greater investment and responsible development projects.
Peru should seize this historical opportunity, lest it condemn its people to another century of
penury. There is no sense living in paradise surrounded by poverty and underdevelopment.

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CAIO GROTTONE TEIXEIRA DA MOTA (40,1/50)

The debates concerning the Amazon Rainforest encompass not only the environment
and biodiversity, but also the demands of local communities and opportunities to promote
development. In this context, Peru stands out as a country facing the challenge of conciliating
different perspectives about the use of natural resources. In order to succeed in promoting
social welfare, Peruvian authorities should adopt a three-dimensional approach to development: one that combines economic growth, social inclusion and environmental protection.
When it comes to the economy of emerging markets, the need to "catch up" and reach
levels of development similar to those of traditional powers demands economic growth. Although international flows of capital are considered as causes of political instability by some
policy-makers in Latin America, it would be churlish to deny that they may contribute to boosting investments, creating jobs and raising income. As a matter of comparison, suffice it to say
that Brazil's recent boom has benefited to a large extent from foreign investments. Should
Peruvian authorities be able to carry out policies sovereignty, investors may become partners
to use local natural resources with legitimate purposes.
Secondly, in order to tackle longstanding social inequalities, Peru's government should
keep its commitment to Peruvian society, which supports the leftist perspective proposed by
the candidate Humala. As a president, he has promised to use the resources generated by the
investments of mining and extractive industries in benefit of social policies. This approach is
grounded in Brazil's experience, which has helped millions of people clamber out of poverty.
Moreover, Peruvian authorities have passed a law which turns into a legal obligation the need
of consulting local communities before final investment decisions.
Last but not least, environmental protection, which is one of the most pressing issues
of international relations, presents challenges at the local level. In Peru, indigenous communities and local populations have risen against projects of Yanacocha, a gold producer. Environmental impacts of such activities threaten water supplies and areas of tropical rainforest. According to Bertha Becker, deforestation is related to economic activities which forgo a high
level of technology. The investments which the countries sharing the Amazon Rainforest
should seek are those which conciliate economic opportunities and the preservation of the
environment.
The pros and cons of Peru opening up its Amazon region depend on the capacity of
authorities to conduct the process according to the three pillars of sustainable development
(economic, social and environmental). International flows of capital present economic opportunities for emerging markets, which must not make light of social and environmental challenges. A balanced and integrated perspective may be enhanced if Peru furthers its cooperation with regional partners. Brazil, for example, is at the cutting edge of sustainable development and may help Peru strengthen its policies.

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MENOR NOTA (25/50)

One of the biggest concerns of Latin American countries is the promotion of development. This fact has particularly been in vogue since leftwing governments, interested in social
issues, were elected throughout the region. Peru is not an exception. Remote areas of the
country, such as the Amazon region, are being integrated through projects related to the exploration of natural resources. Only after adopting an approach based on sustainable development, will Peru be able to overcome the dispute between the positive and the negative
impacts of those initiatives.
Peru may follow some remarkable examples of countries which have promoted widespread development through its own natural potentials. Historically, by possessing great reserves of coal and iron ore, the United Kingdom led the Industrial Revolution. Thus, it stands to
reason that Peru can benefit from its resources, but an enhanced cooperation among several
groups, such as the Government, local communities, and companies, is required. Since the
regions which possess natural resources are the least developed ones, the current economic
policy may not only foster the countrys integration but also reduce inequalities, should the
perks be duly transfered to the local population. Notwithstanding these opportunities, there
are negative arguments which may hamper this brand new Peruvian policy.
Given that economic impacts do not suffice, there is a host of drawbacks which may
thwart the governments plans. Two of them call more attention. Firstly, the projects must
take into account the utmost importance of the environment, with the aim of not damaging
the livelihoods of local communities. Secondly, there must be legal commitments with a view
to guaranteeing that the affected communities will truly benefit from these initiatives, in the
shape of local jobs, tax revenues, and the preservation of their culture.
Sustainable development must be the paradigm upon which these projects will hinge.
This concept, one of the bastions of this age of global cooperation, gathers together three
indissociable pillars, regarding economic, social and environmental aspects, which can adequately address the aforementioned drawbacks due to the introduction of standards to oversee the exploration of resources. Furthermore, by following this paradigm, Peru will be able to
comply with international obligations, such as those stemming from the treaty which has set
the cooperation among the country whereby the Amazon river pass.
Development is the driving force behind many countries in Latin America, such as Peru.
One of the strategies to promote it has been the exploration of natural resources, but some
drawbacks are casting doubts on this strategy. The Peruvian government has great opportunities to reaffirm its commitments its peoples living conditions. Therefore, the adoption of an
approach based on sustainable development can contribute to overcome resistences.

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