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Michael de Oliveira
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Fernando Cesar Morais
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CARO AMIGO ALUNO
Redação
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Redação
SUMÁRIO
1. INTRODUÇÃO.........................................................................................................6
2. DESENVOLVIMENTO............................................................................................14
3. CONCLUSÃO...........................................................................................................19
4. AVALIAÇÕES............................................................................................................23
5. EXERCÍCIOS.............................................................................................................25
TEXTOS REDAÇÕES
1. Introdução
2. Desenvolvimento
3. Conclusão
Trabalharemos cada parte individualmente para que você possa adquirir o conhecimento gradati-
vo e evolutivo, e assim arrebentar na sua redação!!!
1. INTRODUÇÃO
A introdução é a parte da dissertação argumentativa que vai levar o leitor para dentro do texto;
seus objetivos são mostrar a atualidade e a relevância do tema, fazendo sua contextualização, e sugerir
uma abordagem (contra ou a favor) sobre o tema. Essa abordagem é conhecida como tese.
Para melhor entendimento a introdução será dividida em três partes, sendo TESE, ANTI-TESE e a
SÍNTESE.
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TESE ANTI-TESE SÍNTESE
Proposição para debate ou dis- Uma teoria que se opõe à tese A síntese (reafirmadora) com-
cussão. Proposição sobre qual- e que deve ser solucionada na prova a veracidade da tese apre-
quer principio de arte ou ciência síntese da introdução. Em muitos sentada, destruindo os pontos
que se sustenta em público ou casos esse trecho (Anti-tese) nem de vista adversos. Dessa forma,
que se expõe de forma escrita. é aplicado para não correr o risco apresenta- se um argumento,
(Aulete dicionário). Em suma, de se entrar em contradição. tenta-se contestar tal argumen-
Ideia Central de um texto a qual to com a já citada Anti-tese e,
se pretende defender. por fim, usa-se a Síntese para
A tese transpõe, de forma impes- reafirmar e convencer o leitor da
soal, a opinião do autor. invalidez do argumento contra-
ditório.
EXEMPLO:
O ornamento da vida está na forma como um país trata suas crianças’. A frase do
sociólogo Gilberto Freyre deixa nítida a relação de cuidado que uma nação deve ter
com as questões referentes à infância. Dessa forma, é válido analisar a maneira como o
excesso de publicidade infantil pode contribuir negativamente para o desenvolvimento
dos pequenos e do Brasil.
Tese: “a relação de cuidado que uma nação deve ter com as questões referentes à infância.”
Síntese: “o excesso de publicidade infantil pode contribuir negativamente para o desenvolvimento dos pe-
quenos e do Brasil.”
ESTRATÉGIAS DE INTRODUÇÃO:
• Citação de argumentos
• Contexto histórico
• Exemplo concreto
• Dados estatísticos
• Alusão cultural
• Conceituação
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AGORA É COM VOCÊ!!!
Coleta de ideias: Onde você deve colocar suas ideias na forma em que elas saem da mente.
Organização de ideias: Onde você irá organizar a ordem e as ideias que realmente comprovam sua tese.
Se facilitar, você pode separar seus conteúdos em Tese, Anti-tese (se houver) e Síntese.
Versão 2: Onde você fará sua versão depois da correção do professor (optativo).
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2. DESENVOLVIMENTO
É a comprovação, na prática, de sua Tese ou Ideia Central. Aqui você pode se valer das mesmas
estratégias usadas na Introdução, porém NÃO OS MESMOS EXEMPLOS!
ESTRATEGIAS DE DESENVOLVIMENTO:
• Citação de argumentos
• Contexto histórico
• Exemplo concreto
• Dados estatísticos
• Alusão cultural
• Conceitualização
EXEMPLO:
No caso do exemplo a seguir, foi utilizado um trecho de um documento da UNESCO. Uma dica
importante é ler e tentar contextualizar algum artigo em sua argumentação.
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que não é prudente deixar que a publicidade infantil se torne abusiva, pois as crianças
devem lidar da melhor forma com o consumismo.
Coleta de ideias: Onde você deve colocar suas ideias na forma em que elas saem da mente.
Organização de ideias: Onde você irá organizar a ordem e as ideias que realmente comprovam sua tese.
Se facilitar, você pode separar seus conteúdos em argumento 1 e argumento 2.
Versão 2: Onde você fará sua versão depois da correção do professor (optativo).
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Produza um parágrafo de Desenvolvimento (continuando o segundo texto proposto da primeira
aula) sob o mesmo tema “Violência contra a mulher no Brasil” :
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3. CONCLUSÃO
EXEMPLO:
Retomada do Tema: “Dessa forma, é possível perceber que a publicidade infantil excessiva influencia de ma-
neira negativa tanto a infância em si como também o Brasil.”
Apresentação da Proposta de Intervenção: “É preciso que o governo atue iminentemente nesse problema
através da aplicação de multas nas empresas de publicidade que ultrapassarem os limites das faixas etárias es-
tabelecidos anteriormente pelo Ministério da Infância e da Juventude. Além disso, é preciso que essas crianças
sejam estimuladas pelos pais e pelas escolas a terem um maior hábito de ler, através de concessões fiscais às
famílias mais carentes, em livrarias e papelarias, distando um pouco do padrão consumista atual, a fim de que
o Brasil garanta um futuro com adultos mais conscientes.”
Reafirmação da Tese: “Afinal, como afirmou Platão: ‘o importante não é viver, mas viver bem’.”
Coleta de ideias: Onde você deve colocar suas ideias na forma em que elas saem da mente.
Organização de ideias: Onde você irá organizar a ordem e as ideias que realmente comprovam sua
tese. Se facilitar, você pode separar seus conteúdos em Retomada do tema, Apresentação da Proposta de
Intervenção e a Reafirmação da Tese.
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4. AVALIAÇÕES
Exemplo: “Os piás não sabiam o mal que faziam às minas com suas escrachadas por isso continuaram zoan-
do.”
2) Argumentação: Competência em que se avalia a concretude de seus argumentos para defender sua
Tese. (Vide Aula 1)
3) Adequação ao Tema: Nesse aspecto avalia-se a conexão do texto em si com a Proposição. Alguns alu-
nos/ candidatos acabam por se perder em algum argumento e não conseguem acessar o Tema Central
novamente.
Exemplo: “Além da violência física, as mulheres sofrem com as exposições em mídias digitais. ‘Haters’ tentam
espalhar o ódio, não somente ao ser do gênero feminino mas a outras classes também. Esses deveriam ser
perseguidos e presos pelas autoridades.”
4) Coesão e Coerência: Aqui é explorado o sentido do texto. Ou seja, se esse tem NEXO e CONEXÃO
entre si.
Coesão: Funciona como seu USB, HDMI, P10... Etc. É uma palavra conectora que faz ligação entre orações
(frases ou sentenças que circulam em torno de um VERBO).
Perceba que a primeira oração encerra-se na palavra “manga” enquanto a segunda inicia-se em “apanhar”.
O vocábulo “para” é o elemento coesivo ou a coesão.
No período seguinte é semelhante: a primeira oração encerra-se na palavra “verde”, na medida em que a
segunda inicia-se com “desci”. O elemento coesivo é a palavra “então”.
Também pode haver o contrário COERÊNCIA sem COESÃO. Confira no texto abaixo de Ricardo Ramos
versando sobre um dia..
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Circuito Fechado
Ricardo Ramos
5) Conclusão: Parte final do texto, no entanto não basta encerrar de forma abrupta o texto. Há especifi-
cações a seguir. (Vide aula 3)
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5. EXERCÍCIOS
Coleta de ideias: Onde você deve colocar suas ideias na forma em que elas saem da mente.
Organização de ideias: Onde você irá organizar a ordem e as ideias que realmente comprovam sua tese.
Se facilitar, você pode separar seus conteúdos em partes como nas aulas anteriores.
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6. GÊNEROS TEXTUAIS
Nesse momento, nossos estudos serão focados em vestibular. Alguns vestibulares avaliam seus
candidatos através de outros gêneros textuais, tais como: Resumo, Progressão Textual, interpretação de
imagem (que, geralmente, trabalham com Dissertação-Argumentativa) e o já conhecido e citado Tipo Tex-
tual presente no ENEM. A seguir, Propostas de Redação de 2015 da Universidade Federal do Paraná, uma
das mais concorridas do país. Além disso, há exemplos de como os textos poderiam ser redigidos.
UFPR 2015
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O objetivo da proposta foi conferir a capacidade de transposição de gêneros textuais levan-
do em consideração também, em certa medida, a criatividade do candidato. Importante, neste caso
específico, a atenção à produção de uma notícia que reproduzisse o fato narrado pela letra da can-
ção de Adoniran Barbosa “Saudosa Maloca”, a qual traz, nas entrelinhas, uma reflexão acerca das mo-
dificações que ocorreram mediante a modernização e aumento populacional das cidades brasi-
leiras nos idos da década de 50 do século passado, época em que a letra da música foi composta.
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O resumo tem como meta conferir a capacidade de leitura, interpretação e reprodução de infor-
mações produzidas em linguagem verbal. Espera-se do candidato fidelidade com relação ao tema e aos
argumentos do autor do texto base, utilizando redação própria e encadeamento adequado de infor-
mações. Também o refinamento vocabular é índice de verificação da capacidade cursiva do candidato.
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A progressão textual foi a exigência da proposta – que teve como texto base um parágra-
fo reflexivo sobre o caráter norteador da nossa brasilidade. O candidato precisaria ater-se à in-
formação central do parágrafo dado e inserir informações novas que complementassem o tre-
cho “Para construir a identidade de um povo,”. Não havia necessidade de dar conclusão ao artigo.
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O texto de opinião foi o gênero requerido pela proposta, que exigiu do candidato um pon-
to de vista acerca da atual prática de comunicação via equipamentos eletrônicos que possu-
am acesso à web. Note-se que o texto base, uma fotografia de uma placa com os dizeres “Não
temos Wi Fi, conversem entre vocês!”, trava uma crítica a esse tipo de comunicação; no entan-
to, uma argumentação favorável à modernidade do contato virtual era possível, já que no co-
mando da questão pedem-se argumentos que sustentem seu posicionamento, “seja ele qual for”.
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A transposição de informações presentes num infográfico para a linguagem ver-
bal, mediante apreciação da situação da fome no mundo, foi a exigência da propos-
ta. O candidato deveria apresentar um panorama geral do problema no mundo, mos-
trar possíveis causas para o quadro e comentar a situação do Brasil com relação ao fato.
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Contexto Histórico
Após a Segunda Guerra Mundial, a ONU promulgou a Declaração Universal dos Direitos Humanos, a qual asse-
gura, em plano internacional, a igualdade e a dignidade da pessoa humana.
Tese
Entretanto, no Brasil, há falhas na aplicação do princípio da isonomia no que tange à inclusão de pessoas com
deficiência auditiva.
Síntese Reafirmadora-argumentativa
Consequentemente, a formação educacional é comprometida, o que pressupõe uma análise acerca dos entra-
ves que englobam esta problemática.
Argumento 1
Embora a Lei Brasileira de Inclusão (LBI) atenda a Convenção do Direito da Pessoa com Deficiência, realizada
em 2006 pela ONU, sua finalidade encontra obstáculos, seja na estrutura escolar vigente, seja na falta de prepa-
ro do corpo docente. Prova disso são as escolas regulares e as universidades que não se adequaram à comuni-
cação em Libras, bem como exames avaliatórios que não garantem tal acessibilidade. Nesse sentido, os surdos
recebem uma educação frágil, desigual e excludente.
Argumento 2
Além disso, a ineficiente integração no âmbito escolar/acadêmico resulta em efeitos fora dele. Conforme afir-
mou Aristóteles, é preciso tratar igualmente os iguais e desigualmente os desiguais, na medida exata de suas
desigualdades. Contudo, a instrução de aristotélica não é vista na prática, uma vez que o mercado de trabalho
oferece poucas oportunidades, ainda que o deficiente auditivo tenha concluído o ensino superior. Paralela-
mente a isso, o comportamento contemporâneo, o qual prioriza o individualismo e a competição, intensifica a
exclusão visto que a deficiência em questão é alvo de uma visão equivocada de incapacidade funcional. Desse
modo, as implicações de uma educação que não se adapta às diferenças são visíveis.
Retomada do Tema
Diante do exposto, faz-se necessária uma complementação nas instituições sociais secundárias a fim de pro-
mover uma formação educacional coerente com as leis e as resoluções.
Reafiramação da Tese
Assim, os direitos básicos inerentes à vida e à liberdade, consagrados na Carta Magna, poderão ser cumpridos.
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